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Reviews for Ninja Gaiden Koibito

By : Tycho

From Killerisdead14 on July 25, 2019
Hey there. So to start off, I just gotta say that while I certainly haven't read through all of it, I really do appreciate your story on the whole. Not only is it great knowing that there's at least one fic out there that features all the lovely and voluptuous Team Ninja ladies in some erotic literature, but the attention, dedication, and quality of this fic is really something to behold!
To start off, I just gotta say that you really do make some great sex scenes. When it comes to sex scenes in fanfiction, I always hate it when the writer focuses too much on purple prose and fluff to really write something that comes off as effectively sexy. If I'm reading an M-rated sex fic, then the main draw of it, at least IMO, is some good and sexy wank fuel, not some mind numbing fluff with lifelessly written gentle sex. None of this is even going into fics that follow the same lifeless format of 'shitton of foreplay in excrusiating detail, followed by girl's virginity being taken, her crying for a sec, then gentle sex that quickly evolves into rapid thrusting before bam we're done here.' It's always hard finding a good lemon fic that really writes some good, blood boiling and sexy lemon content, and I think that your fic nails sexy lemons perfectly!
None of this is even touching upon how your lemons hit all the spots that I love seeing in my lemon fics. For me, a great lemon is when both parties, especially the female one, is vocalizing and making their pleasure known, aren't wearing a shred of clothes, attention is brought towards just how masculine/feminine their bodies are, and when the sex is just hard, rough, pleasant, and focuses on their sexy bodies pressing together as they fuck. I especially like how you give just as much attention to how well-endowed, in shape, and muscular Ryu is as well. I always feel like a good lemon is missing something if it focuses solely on describing just how sexy and curvaceus the girl is, but doesn't give the male party a passing mention aside from briefly going 'he's got a big dick.' I find knowing that the male party in the lemon is a muscular hunk to make the sex all the more hot, even if I don't play for that team. It's similar to how I hate when hentais have the girl getting fucked by some fat, ugly, hairy piece of shit.
Now, I'm not sure if you accept requests for future chapters, but if you're willing to listen, would you be interested in making one of the future girls Ryu beds be Nurse Valentine from Skullgirls? Considering you were willing to include Bayonetta in this story, I'm assuming ladies from other franchises aren't out of the question. Plus... I just really wanna see a voluptuous hottie like her get fucked hard by Ryu. Seriously, if you don't know who I'm talking about, just give her a quick search up to see what she looks like and you'll see why I'd love it if she was in this story.

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From Aguraseiro on September 05, 2018
These chapters are incredibly erotic. As a person with a great erotic interest in Ryu, and the various girls, I will enjoy reading all the chapters.

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From MackDesiel on April 10, 2018
Definitely some epic tale, though it does require a bit of turning off the brain (Ryu being quite the cherry picker); but the goods way outweigh the bads. As of the current chapter, I felt some more time/chapters could have been spent before the change in seriousnes; one doesn't introduce such a lovely shortstack (by DoA/etc's standards) and yank away so soon.

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From pencildong on February 25, 2018
Oh please plrease please update!! i am dying for the next chapter here!!! pleeeease! or any other story you want to start while you work out what to do next for this own please!!1 gimme pleaseplease

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From ella2017 on November 15, 2017
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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From Dunkelgelb on March 22, 2017
This is one of the greatest smut stories on this site, if not the greatest. At the very least, it has the highest view count of any fic I've seen. It completely justifies this site's name. Thank you for writing!

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From ANON - ANON on September 10, 2016
I'm not the biggest fan of Marie Rose, but I realize that you can't do this kind of story and then not include her. And I think you did it as well as anyone could have.
Also, I'm really looking forward to the upcoming Honoka chapter. Ryu's reaction to someone who's as youthful and fresh faced as Marie but with a much, much more developed figure promises to be fun, and I'm curious as to whether you'll do anything with DOA5's implication that Honoka is another child of Radiou, and thus Ayane's half sister. Also, any future encounter between Honoka and Tina, Rachel, and/or Dixie should be entertaining. I can just imagine their surprise at discovering that Ryu's harem now includes a woman whose tremendous "charms" exceed even their own.

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From ANON - MassNinjaGaiden on June 03, 2016
What other worlds could Ryu Hayabusa be possibly be attending in order to have sex with those women? Isn't it enough that he slept with all of the Rumble Roses and Dead Or Alive females. As much as I do love stories of these types yeah it might be time to end it at some point before it gets way too overboard with such nonsense.
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From ANON - MassNinjaGaiden on May 28, 2016
Thia is exactly what I was fearing. The inclusion of the loli herself Marie Loli. I would have preferred at the very least that somebody else would have screwed that brat instead. Heck even a lesbian scene between her and Helena Douglas would have been way better. I suppose then it only means that soon enough Honkers will be getting her chance soon enough. I hate her a lot less than Loli but still find her to be intolerable.
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From ANON - Scalon on May 23, 2016
And we have the Dragon Ninja catch up with the son he never saw (Joseph) and be delighted in seeing his first son (Fame II) be a mischievous ball of energy. We also meet with Marie Rose, the "nanny" to the boys (to a point like Reiko is with Taki and Almo). And Helena believes in rewarding her loyal staffers.

But now comes the big question: are we getting ready to do "Ninja Gaiden Leap"? Each land sends Ryu to a new world/land where he must fight to save the one he mates with, and then hope when all are accomplished, that next leap is "the leap home"? Not that I'd have a problem with it by a long-shot. Once you get through all a world has to offer, it's up to see if Ryu's able to handle the danger Bayonetta warned of.
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From VFSNAKE on May 18, 2016
Awesome! Another lady in Ryu's harem. Sweeeeet!
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From ANON - MassNinjaGaiden on April 28, 2016
Yep. So it was indeed Miyako,Kokoro's mother and Helena Douglas's stepmother who was the one to bed Jo Hayabusa. I am cool with that. It is too bad though that not much information was given on his late wife and Ryu's mother. Still she will more than help him move on.

I think though that with Momiji now being included in Ryu's harem that Reiko should be given the boot along with Tina Armstrong. Rachel,Kasumi, Momiji and Ayane are more then enough ladies for him.
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From VFSNAKE on April 26, 2016
Nice! Jo can now live a long life and fight by his son. Sweeeet!
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From ANON - dani on February 25, 2016
"And whoever is whining about "the lack of oral sex ruining it" do shut it. If you want oral sex read pretty much any other fic on this site. Most of these encounters seem to be about the women getting what they want in return for something. Most women don't get as much out of sucking a dick as you'd like to think. God forbid one story doesn't dwell on that one sex act. I think that the fact that the author doesn't need to rely on using blowjobs to make the story erotic is a real positive."
I agree with Val's review. This site is full of oral and anal, this fanfic is hot and erotic and non repetitive and doesnt rely on those acts to be great. And doesnt need them to improve the story. Probably the Anon making those comments are not who they say they are, probably in the closet and wants to project through the lady characters. The can go read the 100s of other fics for that. This fic has taste and class all the while remaining scorching sexy and never fails to arouse. Major kudos to the writer.
I'm tired of shills hounding writers to cater to their anal and oral and every story on the net that doesnt cater to those things.
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From ANON - mara on February 24, 2016
finally caught up with this erotic epic. Please please don't include anal, I like this as pure clean tasteful erotica, it is a masterpiece, besides this website is full of anal, I like some diversity for the people who are not into that stuff. You do remarkably without it. Ryu should keep his sword clean ;)
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