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Reviews for Riding Lessons

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  • From ANON - jakuro on November 04, 2016

    excellent smooth and visionary writing!


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  • From dawbygirl on July 09, 2009
    I am so so so so so happy you finished this story. I like these characters so much.
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  • From bushviper on July 06, 2009
    YAY!!! I remember coming across this story awhile ago and being totally bummed that it appeared to be abandoned. I'm so glad you finished it. I love every chapter but the last one in particular was super hot. I like your writing style - you blend lust and emotion seamlessly and it's really fun to read. Great work.
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  • From jacquibirdie on July 06, 2009
    Intense, and wonderful. Thank you for giving them that moment. I hope she will be back near him one day...BTW I should mention I've a thing for trolls
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  • From silenthunder on June 27, 2009
    VERY good! You describe their emotions well - they haven't "done it" yet, and already I'm hot and bothered!

    Looking forward the the next (hopefully steamy) chapter!
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  • From AntiDolorifico on June 27, 2009
    Right now I love you a lot. But at the same time I really want to hurt you a little. TEASING BITCH. You knew very well I'd threaten bodily harm when I finished reading this chapter... GODDAMNIT. Still, thank you for the dedication. I love you. But again... better not see your shapely, teasing ass around my neck o' the woods, because I will spank you. Hard.

    *wub* =)
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  • From JonathanRL on November 15, 2008
    You do know that it is evil to stop such a good story in its tracks? I dearly hope I will get to read more of this.
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  • From SamanthLeopard on April 30, 2008
    Are you ever going to update this? I have been waiting patiently for months and months and still nothing. I hope you continue. I was rather enjoying this little ride.
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  • From LadyShiva on November 16, 2007
    Aaaaaaargh! The sexual tension is going to kill me. I'm going to die. Thanks a lot for writing a story so awesome you are making me tear my hair out here >:(
    hehe, but seriously...Please update soon! D:
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  • From HardcoreHorrorChick on September 02, 2007
    I love this fic...I really do! Please, PLEASE continue!
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  • From ileyna on August 14, 2007
    I love your story! (Troll men are my favorite! So sexy!) Please write more!

    Mwah!
    iley
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  • From Nomad on July 18, 2007
    Your sense of pacing is nice, and the banter between the trolls in the first chapter was amusing. Strong characterizations--you've definately given a complete image of Jaera and Zarang as unique and interesting characters, and their situation is endlessly interesting. Great story, amusing situations in each of your chapters, and the friction and tension is fantastic. Keep up the great work. :)
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  • From dawbygirl on June 23, 2007
    I want you to know that I've been an AFF lurker for a couple years now, but I finally created an account just to review this piece. You are an amazingly talented writer and I am absolutely desperate for the rest of this story! You make the reader sincerely care about these characters, as though they were people that we knew.
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  • From Ashtaar on May 16, 2007
    Very nice and intriguing beginning and a smooth easy to read writing style. I like your story very much, please do continue :)


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  • From AzureBonds on May 09, 2007
    That was great. Very very hot, but then I have a thing for the trolls. ^_~ More. You must write more.
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