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Reviews for A Westfall Summer

By : wanderingaddict
  • From ANON - Obaketenshi on January 29, 2008
    I actually knew what art from Y! that was XD Actually really lovely--a good mix of porn and real emotion! If there were favorites here I'd fave (its prolly on y! somewhere?)
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  • From Kurokotsu on November 14, 2007
    I picture Tanner as a Warrior and Daelen as a Hunter. It just seems to fit like that in my mind. Great story regardless of Class.
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  • From Fawnheart on November 07, 2007
    I vote mage! Tanner is cheeky, cocky and good natured. I've always found rogues are a little too full of themselves :P
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  • From mistaheleganza on November 05, 2007
    Absolutely wonderful! A real pleasure to read; such vivid descriptions, I particularly loved the way you captured the feel of the forests around Westfall, exactly the way I would imagine them to be. I feel you gave the story a well-maintained balance between romance and the erotic; this is definitely not just a 'porn without a plot'. Daelan's thoughts and speech make everything that happen to him more meaningful.

    The only advice I could offer would be to give it another proofread; there were just a few grammatical errors that can be easily fixed. I find the best way to check a story is to read it aloud, there are a few things that the mind self-corrects when reading quietly that are much easier to catch when you actually have to say them.

    As far as Tanner's class goes, I can only picture him as a rogue, especially with that wry smile of his you described; while Daelan would have to be a warrior.

    All in all, an extremely enjoyable read. I hope you have plans of continuing this, or if not, then to continue contributing to Warcraft fiction. I know I'll look forward to reading it.
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  • From ANON - Serenity11 on November 04, 2007
    I don't usually like yaoi, but by the time I figured out that's what this story was (I don't read descriptions, apparantly) I was already hooked. I even tried to walk away a few times because I was in the middle of cooking, but kept coming right back. Your story was so hot that I burned my food! Maybe you could write a little story about Tanner convincing Dael to share his bed. just for fun? I look forward to reading the rest of your work. :)
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  • From Fawnheart on November 04, 2007
    OH man, you are simply a magnificent writer addict. Seriously. It is sooo late here and I saw your story and I thought..nah, too tired i will read it tomorrow and then I made the mistake of reading your first paragraph. as usual with your stories, I was hooked by that bloody *first paragraph* lol, and then I tried to resist reading the second but couldn't, then the third...then couldn't stop and now Im stuffed. first, nothing at all was rushed. I especially like how you blended what Daelan was thinking in between the actual discriptions of the nitty gritty. It makes it so much deeper and more satisfying than just a poke in a hole kinda thing :P After the first sex encounter I surprised the story didn't stop, but as usual I read the next paragraph and as always your writing just hauls the reader after it like a rollercoaster and I couldnot stop reading. So no, I don't think the story should have ended there as seems to be traditional with most chapters. Tradition is boring anyway and your writing is neither traditional nor boring lol. It flowed and built up momentum again and was simply, beautifully done. You are SUCH a talented writer it's unbelievable. You made me laugh out loud with the dwarf trying to pick a winner, and groan when you gave Tanner a hairy chest which I personally LOVE! I was stoked when I read that! And of course the hardcore sex worked with the romance, YOU wrote it! It was beautiful, seriously. Your descriptions are rich without being boring or cliche, your characters are REAL, and you pay just enough attention to the small things that makes them 'just so'. When I'm not too tired to read the yaoi story you linked I will compare them, but I would much rather just read your stories. They are tasteful, they are sincere without being corny, they are just...HOT... and I love your adore your writing style. You could write about anything and everyone would be hooked on the first chapter. So cough up, give us MORE :D
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