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Reviews for A Westfall Summer

By : wanderingaddict
  • From ANON - BabyVampy on January 05, 2012
    Well then... *waving hand at face* That was some pretty good stuff! I've never played WoW before, but this game gave me a good visual (both landscape wise and chacher wise). This was a really great story that I'm super happy I found (It was recommend by someone on here, don't remember who). I don't usually read fiction that isn't completely original, but this was absolutely fantastic and well written. Just... *happy sigh* Good stuff all around.

    Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Zayu on February 27, 2011
    This is pure sexiness wrapped in sugar and good grammar. You are made of win. Never stop being awesome.
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  • From ANON - Heliet on November 06, 2010
    I absolutely -LOVE- this story.
    As well as making my own balls hurt, it made my heart ache as well!
    I think the combination of romance and flat out sex worked out quite well.
    Well enough to make me read it multiple times. :C
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  • From ANON - Tas on October 15, 2010
    Hmmm... all I can say is... we need another chapter here! Another chapter with more Sex!
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  • From Ereidivh on September 22, 2010
    I LOVED this story. The characters were contextually believable, well introduced, and well developed. The story progressed at a good rate, and moments where little was happening plot-wise were skillfully filled with necessary character development and wonderful humor. There was a great balance between the sex and the rest of the story, and both the sexual and non-sexual scenes were written in extremely evocative, powerful ways. Would definitely recommend, will definitely read again.
    -Ereidivh

    P.S. Oddly enough, I found this story at random when browsing through older stories in the WoW category. Just tonight though, I reviewed a newly updated story, and saw another review right before mine. The writer clearly had a strong grasp of the language, and I was intrigued. I clicked on the name, and, Lo and behold, I saw that you had written this story which I had read a few days ago, and forgotten to review.
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  • From Shadowknight12 on September 16, 2010
    Probably the best story in this site by far. I just wanted to say that you're my favourite author and that I keep coming back to re-read your work every so often because it's really just that good. I hope that at some point in the future you'll consider doing something like this again. The characters are amazing, your attention to detail is commendable and your narrative is utterly flawless. Truly, I don't know who's more likeable, Tanner or Daelen. They're both very realistic characters, and it shows that you're refreshingly familiar with WoW lore. And even the minor characters, with the comparatively little attention they get, are unforgettable as well. I could go on about all the things I enjoyed about this story, but let's just sum it up with a single world: Perfect.
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  • From bushviper on February 27, 2010
    Also!

    "It didn’t spring free so much as it rose, grandly, tall and proud." LOL. Awesome.
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  • From bushviper on February 27, 2010
    Lovely.

    I think Tanner's a rogue. Mages don't wear leather boots!
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  • From ANON - Sothe on May 19, 2009
    wow....

    wow...

    Wow....

    That was an amazing story. Seriously.
    it had the perfect amount of fluff and the sex was just amazing.

    And I have seen that pic from Y!galleries. The story for it made it even better.

    Hope to see more stories from you soon /wink
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  • From IkariAkiko on December 13, 2008
    I'm either a noob (possible) and can't figure out how to edit a review, or there's no option. Eh, well. Two reviews then as an addendum to the first.

    Tanner = Mage. Totally can see him abusing frost powers to torment an unsuspecting elf into getting a shared bed.

    ...then there's all the interesting shapes you can make with ice...

    Also, every story can use some hard-core sex in their romance. :D
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  • From ANON - Ikari Akiko on December 13, 2008
    Bad before the good, that way you have tasty things to get rid of the bitter taste (unless we're talking other certain bitter tastes :3 ).

    Kaldorei vs Kaeldorei. Minor thing, but distracting enough when I read through it.

    A few more minor things pop up, some odd sentence things here and there. I'm unsure if you just want the good things only, or want any minor critique (I know some writers prefer to just hear what you enjoyed and little else, because they view it as once they've posted the work, they're not really interested in going back, that it's a finished piece as is). So I'll keep it at this for now and move on to what every writer loves to hear:

    I adored this story. Seriously.

    Despite my surprise that it was so long (rather than broken up into chapters), it was neither tedious nor irritating to scroll through. I LOVE when that happens because I don't see that often; usually if it's not split up, it tends to be more of a 'I must slog through this to get to the good bits, and then the end.' But such was not the case: so thank you for posting an enjoyable read.

    A few things I really enjoyed in particular:

    The focus on the differences between the n'elfs and humans. Socially, culturally, physically, etc. Contrast between characters (particularly characters in any kind of relationship) is one of my kinks, you could say, and you did well in emphasizing the differences without making it completely blatant or repetitive. In particular, this tickled me: when he commented that he found out humans had ears after all, just tiny ones. Big reminder of some of the vast physical differences that often get overlooked.

    The background flavor of the story was another personal favourite. I'm not always on the hunt for plot with my smut (although I always love smut with my plot!), so when I stumble over a story with plot that's done well AND contains the more ho-hum details (which most people ignore because they think it detracts rather than enriches)... Well, that's even better! I'm 'ferring to things such as mention of minor towns, ports, etc. You really fleshed out the story without getting bogged down in detail.

    My favourite bit out of it all:

    His eyes widened in certain disbelief as he stared at the human.

    “Did you swallow it?” Daelen asked, shocked and incredulous

    (I actually laughed out loud, envisioning Daelan's innocent shock--and the delay right before he realized what happened was just as priceless.)
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  • From KazekageKeiran on September 24, 2008
    Wow, this was truly an amazing find! Very rarely does a story pull me in so instantly and keep me enthralled until the very last word. The tale, the setting, and the characters are so richly described in lush, careful script I felt every moment of it. The relationship between Tanner and Daelen is written with such effortless deftness it's delightfully real and engaging. They are two very unique characters and I found myself truly happy to see them find each other. It was profoundly romantic, sexy, and heartwarming all at once and I thoroughly enjoyed your story from the first word to the last.
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  • From ileyna on April 12, 2008
    Oh my, I loved this. Your characters have such personality to them! Your descriptions are so vivid that it all plays in my head. (And what a play it is :D) One of my favorite WoW stories ever. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Ky on March 05, 2008
    Oh, lawd, this is full of WIN. So well-written and sexyyy.
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  • From summonercat on February 03, 2008
    Oh my. That was a very wonderful read. Tanner is such a sneak! I would say rogue for sure (safe fall!). I'm sad that this hasn't been updated more. I hope not a one-shot! :(
    One of the better written stories I have read here in a very long time. It definitely didn't seem rushed or too slow in areas. I think it started out well to get people interested in the characters in order to read more. Truth be told, I skimmed until something caught me, then I scrolled back up to read from the start. I really like how it kept true to the races.
    Moar kplzthx.
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