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Reviews for Tertiary

By : sillyneko345
  • From Revawolf on December 09, 2010
    Yay, another Chapter!

    Daxter as a cute little tyrant, thats just how we like him :D Poor Daxxie had to practise with Tess Toys...*imagines a big, bright pink dildo*

    “Question. Do I get to nail Daxter tonight? Because I really want to.”
    Best part ever! I had to lay the laptop beside my because i was laughing so hard all of sudden!

    DO you know how much you tease your readers? I thought the "action" would happen in this chapter, but its still "only" the foreplay. Besides the fact that it gets hotter and hotter.
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  • From ANON - Mysterious Angel-05 on December 09, 2010
    *pouts* No outtakes? Ah well...can't have everything....that was hot...Jak's a fast learner! Update soon!
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  • From Amaronith on December 08, 2010
    Our work is never done, Robin. XD I love this chapter so much!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on December 08, 2010
    O/////o Careful what you wish for, 'cuz you just might get it. *fans herself*

    Um... Yeah. More please. X3 *blush*
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  • From CrabRangoonMonster on December 05, 2010
    Nooooo!!! D,: So sexy. Please update soon.
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  • From grimreaperchibi on December 03, 2010
    This has needed to be done for a while now, and bless you for doing it. Tess never gets much love even though it seems universally accepted that she'd be the one telling Jak and Dax to get their acts together. It's nice to see her get some action...though I would love to be fly on the wall myself. You keep making my inner fangirl squeal like this and something bad's gonna happen, I know it.
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  • From GMB on December 03, 2010
    Is this yer first threesome? If it is, ya can't tell...Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one...was kinda suprised ya have another story goin'. Hope ya didn't forget about the last chapter to "All That Glitters"....of course ya didn't...haha....Love the threesome idea..... Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Reva on December 03, 2010
    Wow...just wow!!

    I was surprised to see another new fic from you - but I know how hard it is to continue on things when you already have ideas for new ones.
    I think in "Small Favors" you mentioned you wanted to write something with these three...and the mentioning of their past experiences remindend me alot of "Fun and Games" but it isn't a continuation of any of those, right?

    Not that all of your stories are well written, cute and extremely sexy, but this one is especially turning-on, even if it hasn't really started yet!

    I really can't wait for the next chapter...ohh pleaaase hurry :3
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  • From TaintedEmerald on December 03, 2010
    Heh, and here I thought I was jealous of Tess getting that peepshow in Small Favors. Well anyways, while straight/bi isn't really my thing, this threesome is pretty damn hot. And it's nice of you to do a gift fic, especially considering how you're currently juggling 3 different stories (4 if you've already started the sequel to Talk to Me).

    The atmosphere setup was beautiful here; both the environment and characters really worked together to set the mood. Sometimes organized romantic evenings can be fun too right?

    Hope you can get more writing done before the holiday rush really starts up. Although, since you've already given us 3 chapters in the past 3 weeks or so, I don't think anyone would fault you for taking a well deserved break.
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  • From ANON - Nahia on December 03, 2010
    More, NOW. I dont know how you made it work but you did. They just work so Awesome together! And that Jak is the virgin is both in-character and adorable. This story rocks!
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  • From Amaronith on December 03, 2010
    *GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*
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