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Reviews for Tertiary

By : sillyneko345
  • From CrabRangoonMonster on February 17, 2011
    I... would like to see Tess doing Daxter as well, Jak.

    Also, I know I wanted to be Tess last chapter, but this chapter I kinda wanted to be Daxter.  ;]  Except for the maid outfit part (I'm preferable to the apron myself).

    And totally random, but when I read the part where Jak said it was half past one, I looked at my clock and it was totally 1:30.
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  • From grimreaperchibi on February 06, 2011
    I want to thank you for inadvertently winning me 20 bucks, because now I'm not the only one who thinks Daxter and Tess's relationship is kinky enough to include a strap-on amid a wide range of other things. I owe you cookies.

    Thank you for the wonderful story! That was such an awesome romp, I really don't know what else to say about it. Indeed, my inner fangirl has been well appeased and is hard at work trying to erase my embarrassment so that I post something and not just horde everything in a notebook. As are my friends, and now my muse. I'm gonna lose this fight relatively quickly.

    Looking forward to Keep Talking! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on February 04, 2011
    HAAAA ha ha haaa~! XD That'd be a riot if that's really what Sig said. X3 And I can only imagine Torn's face.... HA!

    But why ruin good grape jelly like that, Dax? That's my only beef with this chapter. XD Anyway, YEAH! Hot and sweet, all at once. ^w^ You had a perfect balance of that the whole time, and it was a treat to read. =3

    I'm lookin' forward to Keep Talking! ^o^ See ya then! =3
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  • From Amaronith on February 03, 2011
    *Glee!*

    I love it! Love it love it love it love it! Thank you so much~
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  • From GMB on February 03, 2011
    Loved the story. Funny ending! Can't wait fer your next story!
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  • From TaintedEmerald on January 15, 2011
    You know, I think I could come to like this bi/hetero stuff. At least when it's you writing it...or, admittedly, the Internutter (although I doubt anyone has read any of her fanfiction here; it's pretty old X-men Evolution stuff that I haven't read since my high school days).

    Anyways, that was spectacular. Loved the addition of Jak's "gift", as well as the Jak sandwich at the end. I'm wondering how you're going to handle the character relationships in the next chapter though. Should be interesting to see how the three of them decide to go on from this point. Seems like Jak was really affected by Daxter's admission of love, but Daxter also seems tied tightly with Tess...so will the relationship revolve around Daxter, Jak, Tess, or will it be an equal distribution? Really looking forward to the conclusion of this story.


    (Also, I'm very glad you decided to offset Just Another Mission with Talk to Me. I think that fic filled my angst allowance for the next 5 years, and reading your work has really helped to even that out for me.)
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  • From grimreaperchibi on January 07, 2011
    Congrats on your first three-way--very hot and totally worth the wait. I love that Tess gets violent in the throes of passion. In the middle of everything, it was a nice reminder that she is not a powder puff, made from the same stern stuff the boys are. It was awesome seeing that come through. I also feel bad for Jak. He just couldn't let it go until the morning, could he? Boy needs to learn to stop picking up trouble before it gets to him--he attracts enough on a normal basis. He doesn't need to ask for it, too.

    And you have no reason to be self-conscious; you should give yourself more credit. You and Amaronith both have good ideas, smooth styles, and imaginations that people obviously enjoy. And I do write for the fandom (one theme piece on fanfiction.net under Tawnya Kisaragi if you're *really* that interested), it's just not anything I figure is worth posting most of the time, least of all here. You should know, however, that several friends of mine agree with you that I should post anyway...and I'll end up caving sooner than later. Just don't hold your breath for anytime soon. Don't want you to die before this is finished.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on January 06, 2011
    That... was... HAWT. omg I'm speechless, seriously. ^/////^

    lmao And sugar rushes for the win. XD Until later!
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  • From Amaronith on January 06, 2011
    I cannot stop smiling! I love this fic so much! *glee*
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  • From GMB on January 06, 2011
    Some bat time? *looks confused* *shakes head* Okay, any way loved the chapter! *hands ya a plate of brownies* That's for posting two chapters in your two stories this week. You're on a roll! Love the stories. Love! Love! Love!
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  • From CrabRangoonMonster on January 06, 2011
    Psh, what, no outtakes? Then again, between Jak's new "wristband" and him and Dax "killing" Tess, maybe actual outtakes were unneeded. Seriously, I was like hot, hotter, HOT, hotty-hot hot HOT, aaaaand... wristband, Jak? Really? *facepalm* Also, there's going to be another chapter? Huzzah! Is it going to have more of Tess' boobs? Cause seriously, those things are awesome.
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  • From TaintedEmerald on December 15, 2010
    You know, I find myself enjoying this story more and more.

    Excellent teamwork between Dax and Tess, seems like they really have it out for the poor hero. I was a bit surprised by the slightly dark turn when it came time to unveil Jak's...damage. In fact, it reminded me of a very angst filled fic called Just Another Mission. You managed to turn the situation around though, so props for that.

    And damn, all of this and they're still just getting warmed up? Despite not being into straight/bi, I'm still looking forward to having the demolition duo treat Tess like a lady in the next chapter.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on December 10, 2010
    Ooooooh~ There's gonna be a part three. XD *fans herself* Yay. ^////////////^

    *salutes* Lookin' forward to it. Most definitely. X3
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  • From grimreaperchibi on December 09, 2010
    ...oh wow... Just...wow... I'm so glad Jak's starting to get into it. He's cute when he's being shy and uncertain, but so undeniably sexy when his confidence kicks in. And Daxter totally needs to pay for being such a pushy brat.

    As for what happens to my well-fed inner fangirl... Well, at best, I will embarrass myself by sporting a rosy blush for hours on end, drawing many confused and concerned comments from well-meaning friends and family that will only make it worse. At worst, I will *really* embarrass myself by somehow coming to the conclusion that I have something to add to the fandom, write my own piece, and subsequently die from horror at what I've inflicted upon the world.

    This, by all means, should not stop you, because this is pushing all the right buttons for me, including the one that makes me speechless for minutes at a time.
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  • From CrabRangoonMonster on December 09, 2010
    So, first of all, Tess' reaction to Jak's scars?  Absolutely precious.  And slightly frightening, for whomever would be at the wrong end of it.  Second, poor, innocent Jak.  So much he wishes he didn't know now.  And lastly, I wish I were Tess.  Like, you don't even know how much I wish I were her.  Especially considering the lesson plan of the upcoming chapter, eh?  ;D   Can't wait for the next update! 
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