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Reviews for Empress' Harem

By : ShortChannel
  • From StevieG on April 26, 2011
    Nice scene with Sonya. I like how she isn't really into it, but enjoys it anyway.

    As for further members of her harem, Sheeva would be a great member. I mean four arms? She'd definitely be capable to pleasure the other slaves as well as Li Mei. The other member I'd like too see, since I find her sexy, is Sindel. Imagine the look on Kitana's face when she sees her Mother lick Li Mei or sees her being fucked by the Empress.

    Then again, those are just suggestions, and it's entirely up to you.
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  • From StevieG on April 20, 2011
    Yes! A very nice story so far.

    An interesting idea for the story. You could even let Li Mei mark them as her property.
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  • From salarta on April 20, 2011
    Good work overall, there are spelling and grammar errors that can easily distract from enjoying the fic but if you run it through a spellchecker next time (such as Microsoft Word's spellchecker), that shouldn't be a problem. :)

    I'm glad you included Kitana in the story in some capacity, but I wish she would have been the one taken as a prize by Li Mei instead of Jade. On the plus side, I guess if you continue this and want to use Kitana again, you have a lot of other options to work with. Kitana required to perform for Li Mei's Outworld court as further tribute, or offering herself in trade for Jade, or Mileena coming back and somehow managing to turn Kitana into her unwilling slave, etc.

    Anyway, in sum nice fic and I'm glad we got another person around again who likes to write content other than yaoi. :)
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