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Reviews for In the Land of Arborea

By : Sweetsong22
  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on July 11, 2012
    I was just lurking around before heading for bed and thought I would drop by and leave you another review. I seriously don't understand why this story is not getting more reviews! I mean, what's the matter with the readers on AFF? Geeze, come on people please take the time to review and let the author know what you think of the story and give them a little encouragement. If they can take the time to write for us, then why not let them know we appreciate all the hard work he or she puts into writing it....
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on July 10, 2012
    I didn't realize you had updated!!!

    Great chapter and well worth the wait, I really enjoyed reading it!

    I loved the confrontation between Brie and Juleus especially this part when she said this; "That depends, would you consider it a threat if I donned a strap-on and fucked you up the butt?" She seemed to ponder that question before following up with a quick reply. "But then again, I probably wouldn't be able to get in there with the stick currently up your ass."

    You go Girl!!!!!

    Oh my gosh! Poor Tristtan... Luceus better hurry up and get back to him before anything else bad happens to him or someone else tries and 'kill' him but next time it could be for good (better not!).

    Ooo, I knew it! I was not really surprised by that little confession that came out of Laeyla's mouth.

    This just gets better and better......


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  • From Bloomsbabe11377 on July 10, 2012
    Updates Updates Updates!! YAY! There is hope for Trsitan and Luceaus!

    XoXo
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  • From ANON - JStorm on July 09, 2012
    i was so sure that Luceus's dad slept with Layla that i was actually thinking 'I WAS FLIPPING RIGHT' how ever when it was revealed that it was Reginalld i was like WTF.. this stuff gets even better. I can't wait for more out of Layla's mouth
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on July 06, 2012
    "Where are you?" I am getting very worried now......... When you get a chance, please update, thank you!
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  • From Bloomsbabe11377 on July 04, 2012
    Also I am very upset that there aren't more reviews on this story -_- it is clearly a hidden gem!

    XoXo
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  • From Bloomsbabe11377 on July 04, 2012
    I am SO happy I found this story again! It was reposted from originals to here and I thought it was not being updated! Anyway, while I could throw shoes at you for making Tristan so miserable for so long I appreciate the delicious angst of your story! I can't wait for a reunion between my two sweet lovebirds!

    XoXO
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on July 03, 2012
    Well, I saw your note in the forum and can understand about you not wanting to upload a chapter if it's not 'sub par' BUT I am slightly disappointed because I was looking forward to reading it. I will happily wait it out though and check back in another week or so to see how you are progressing. Have a nice 4th! If you celebrate it, that is.
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 24, 2012
    Oh my gosh! What's going on here? I was worried too that Tristtan could now possibly be a half brother with Luceus but could Saeylas' mother have had an affair with either Tristtan's father or Luceus' father? I am confused, LOL. I can't wait to find out what the heck is going on though. Juleus is a major dickhead (sorry) bad language but he is. I hope that Luceus runs into his friends when he gets to Allemantheia and not his enemies. I am so relieved Tristtan wasn't raped by him but am worried now for his well being now that Juleus wants to cause trouble for whacking him on the head too bad it didn't give him amnesia like Luceus got.

    Hey, I am going to keep my fingers crossed that you can find time to write that one-shot of Tristtan's and Luceus' first meeting.
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  • From ANON - Monet on June 22, 2012
    For some reason, I was smiling and giggling like a fangirl at the last section. I totally want to see what happens. Though I highly doubt Tristan is that hot but I'm thinking he is. Argh! My point is I want to see what happens next. Worst cliffhanger, that and I bet Juleus will go for it since he can push the plan on his parents and since Luceus is "dead" no angry boyfriend. Or so he thinks. Ah Luceus corrupted Tristan!
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 21, 2012
    I just re-read chapter and Juleus wasn't in the room when Brie put the crosshairs on Tristtan's parents just them were there. I hope Brie puts him on her radar for revenge because he deserves it.
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 20, 2012
    I forgot to mention that I am glad Juleus two former comrades paid for what they did to Luceus but Juleus you have to suffer the consequences for what you did to him too. I hope Lucues repays the favor once he gets his memory back. I will enjoy that!
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 20, 2012
    Good morning, we are going to have a sweltering heat wave today possibly through Friday and this story is not helping me, LOL.

    I think Reginalld better hit the high road before it's too late and Laeyla I am very disappointed in you too. I wonder if Traviis will ever forgive her but more importantly will Tristtan?!

    I like the Castanica Prime Minister, Lektus, he won't let them get away with what happened to Luceus. Nope.

    I loved that Lycineus/Rosie and the soldiers from Herald Fort came and threatened them especially Brie putting the bulls-eye on their heads, LOL, I really loved that part but was Juleus in the crosshairs too because he should have been?!

    Oooh, I really dislike Clovon he is a disgusting piece of filth and I bet Luceus aka Tell will put him in his place soon enough for his treatment of Saeylas.

    Juleus better the heck not take Tristtan up on his offer to find out what happened to Luceus!

    This is really getting good and these cliffhangers are killing me......









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  • From StromRider on June 18, 2012
    The mighty general has amnesia.... I do so hope that Reginalld and his accomplices get all their titles revoked.
    This Saeylas, poor poor thing. i do hope Luceus recovers his memories and save him

    Hallelujah if you were to just end it next chapter i'd be distraught... thank goodness it'll be longer than that.
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  • From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 17, 2012
    I just double checked the youtube link of Saeylas and this time I saw him, awe, he's cute. But, I think Tristtan is much more adorable. The only thing I noticed in the youtube of Tristtan he has short hair but in the story it's very long. At least I think it is, will double check.
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