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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 17, 2012
Oh, and I just tried to look at the link on youtube of Saeylas but I got an error message.
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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 17, 2012
I am very happy you have decided to extend this more than 10 chapters!!!!

I for one will be very pleased when Reginaldd is knocked down off his pedestal of superiority.

It seems like Rosie and Lycineus will now be a family that's a relief and he has forgiven her and his brother by finally accepting Luke into his life.

I am looking foward to the 'rescue mission' planned by Traviis and Rosalinda/Lycineus. There's gonna be hell to pay, haha.

I do like this new character you have introduced, Saeylas, but he better keep his hands off Luceus because the General belongs with Tristtan!!!!!

I feel bad for Saeylas losing his beloved mother and having such an evil step-father. There has to be someone else he can be paired up with besides Luceus.

I seriously really hate Juleus now and hope he doesn't end up with Brie.

Thanks for updating! I've missed your fast updates but know you've probably been busy.

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From ANON - pupette on June 14, 2012
Man the suspense is killing me,I can't wait to see what's going to happen.
Thanks for the answer to my review,I actually intended to cheer you up for a bit,I guess it didn't seem much like an encouragement :))
Anyway, it's nice that you're really into writing and I understood better your motives behind not spending a lot on time on something which has a little feedback.It was kind of selfishly on my part because I've been reading stories on this site for quite a long time and is freaking annoying when I read something good,interesting and all of a sudden the author stops updating; I don't understand why bother writing something when you know you'll never finish it (and right now I'm talking about stories that had a lot of supporters,hits,reviews,etc.).And it's not a one time case,it happens all the time,and that's why I try to suppress myself from starting to read something which is not completed yet.Well I guess your's was an exception tehehe.
Anyway,good luck and don't ever stop cause you're really good at it (I've read a lot of m/m fiction,I think I know by now (and I confess it with all my humbleness)when I read something really bad/bad/mediocre/good/really good)
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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 13, 2012
I forgot to mention that I don't think I like Juleus anymore and he doesn't deserve Brie. What he did to Luceus was unforgivable.
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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 13, 2012
Oh my gosh! I am so very worried about Luceus and hope he doesn't die!!!!! I will cry. I have been so looking forward to his and Tristtan's reunion but now don't think they will ever see each other again. ~~~ cries ~~~
I was happy that Lycineus and Rosa are getting closer again and hopefuly he will accept little Luke as his own. That was very sneaky on Luceus', Traviis and Brie's part, LOL.

I am so pissed at Laeyla and wonder how she is going to feel once she finds out what happened to Luceus. That Reginaldd needs to be offically told off in not so pleasant terms.

I hope Selik and Rika get punished for what they did to Luceus.

Only two more chapter left??!!! Oh it has so much potential and hopefully you will write some side stories featuring my favorite couples.

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From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2012
Wow.... A confession.. OOohhh NOOO!
I wonder what happened to Tristtan's dad for him to hate Luceus's father so much
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From ANON - pupette on June 10, 2012
Hey,just wanted to leave a comment to say that I also read your story :D.Actually I thought you stopped updating because I regularly check AFF and I couldn't see your last chapters,it probably has to do with moving it to the Games category.
Anyway,I hope you won't abandon this story, you really have good stories, the plots are consistent and the steamy scenes are also great.This one is my favorite so far from you so I'm really looking forward to see what's going to happen next.
I usually don't write reviews every time a chapter is uploaded, that's why don't assume that no one is reading it anymore.
And, you are an author right? I know it may be dissapointing the lack of feedback and you would like your stories to be read and commented by lots of people,but aren't you writing them primarily for you,because you really like to write? Having them read by others is not secondary to creating them in the first place because you enjoy it (and because you are good at it?).If I would be an author I think the most important thing for me has to be the act of writing and if it happens to be there even one person to appreciate my work, then I would be happier.All I'm trying to say is, don't give up writing something even if you only have one reader or nothing at all.Don't forget that many of the big authors weren't even popular at first :P
You're good at writing so it would be a shame to abandon this story or any other story.
Forgive my bad english,it's not my primary language.
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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 08, 2012
Well, my Celtics lost to the Miami Heat so next game is Saturday night. Geeze, what a stressful and painful night watching that game.

I really hope that Traviis and Laeyla can work through this mess they both have found themselves in but Traviis is really upset with her so I don't know but will keep hoping. I don't see Laeyla giving up.

I felt so bad for Tristtan and how they forced him to say things against Luceus.

Oooh, Juleus imagined Brie's luscious lips when he was looking at Tristtan's, LOL. Bring it on!!!! Although, I was also hoping Juleus would have got sick from the taste of throw up in Tristtan's lips. He would have deserved it!

What the heck is wrong with Lycineus? Doesn't he know Luceus and Rosie did what they had too in order to survive at Val Elenium! Did he want them both to die? Can't he see how wrong he is and how much he is hurting them plus himself by not letting the jealousy go. I do think he may be coming around but now sure.

Well, Luceus is definitely being set up but I still can't figure out by who even though I have my suspicions.

Hey, did Tristtan's father alter the tape Tristtan made? Obviously, he must have or who did?

Please let the court have mercy on Luceus!!!! Did he like plead guilty because of that tape or does he know it's fixed and this is a way to catch the culprit who's setting him up?!!!

I've gotta get to work now,

DaC

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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 07, 2012
Oh my gosh! I didn't think you were going to update until the weekend but promise I will leave a review for chapter 7 sometime tomorrow, gotta run now!

I just took a quick break while watching the NBA playoffs and my Celtics are losing to Miami!!!!!!! I am going to have a heartattack watching this game, let me tell you, it's very nerve racking.

Good night!

DaC
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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 06, 2012
Oh, I am so sorry, I forgot to mention that I hope you can try and enjoy the rest of your vaction despite the fact you had a dental procedure yesterday morning! I hope you are not in too much pain and feel better soon. Also, it's an honor to be able to read and review your stories. I love them!!!

DaC
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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 06, 2012
Well, I really have to admit that I hate the games section but know you probably despise it more than me. It's so totally unfair for them to do this to you. I still think you should put up a note under your author panel name so that when readers might be searching for this story can see that it was moved to the games section.

Anyhoop, Ooooh, Laeyla & Traviis finally copulated, LOL, and whoa!!!!! I had to close my eyes for a minute, it was like triple x rated, LOL. I loved it and hope they stay together plus looking forward to more. It was so funny when Tristtan walked in on them.

I am kind of confused what's going on with Ulrikk though didn't quite understand that part.

Oh, and Traviis and Rosie are twins (don't think I had read that little tidbit before but will go back and double check just to be sure otherwise another nice twist to story.

I still think that something happened between Reginaldd and Luceus' deceased father so looking forward to finding out more about that.

Oh, man, I can't wait for Tristtan and Luceus to finally have some private time.....

I will check back this weekend,

DaC

P.S. I can't believe how lax some readers are who don't even take the time to stop and review especially when the story is as great as this and so well written to boot. There are so many trashy stories on here with poor writing style, like the writer obviously doesn't care, that it's a shame when there is one as good as yours no one reviews it.

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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 03, 2012
Oh my gosh, so much action this chapter and we were also introduced to Luceus' brother Lycineus. I can't wait to find out more about their feud with each other.

I definitely want to read more about 'Commander' Juleus Truth and hopefully see him and Brie hitch up although he seemed kind of interested in Tristtan. There is just something about Juleus and Brie ending up together that just sounds right.

I was really concerned for Traviis when he fell into that pit with those flesh eating monsters, so glad he got out safely.

Bartramm getting beheaded and Grannger meeting his end (I think) was true justice although they got off way to easy and should have been tortured.

Geeze, what is it with you and these cliffhanger, LOL.

I would have loved to see Luceus and Juleus fight and bet it would end as a stale mate (or whatever you would call it.

I hope that Luceus follows Tristtan to Allenmantheia so he won't be alone when he has to stand before his father and the High Elven Council. Please don't let Ulrikk get away with what he did to Tristtan and I am keeping my fingers crossed the Council invokes some kind of punishment to him for his attrocities (sp.?).

Jafton was redeemed in my eyes by contacting his mate Suelia so she could let Lycineus know where Tristtan was thus contacting Luceus so he could save Tristtan.

Oh and I think I forgot to mention that Rosie did a great job healing Tristtan and his arm.

See ya next chapter,

DAC

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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 02, 2012
I am going to play neopets for awhile because there are no good stories on AFF anymore except for yours and a few others I read. I will check back later and everyday for updates.
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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 02, 2012
I meant to say this,

What really has my interest is the possible forthcoming relationship between Brie and Elven Commander Juleus Truth!! Oh, yes, that would be a battle of the sexes in epic proportions.

I left out battle of the sexes, LOL.

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From ANON - dazedandconfused on June 02, 2012
Hey, it's me ~~~ waves ~~~~

Well, a lot happened in this newest chapter (4) that has been crying for more but I will try and be patient.

So, Reginalld has a feud going with Winestone, Luceus' father. Hmmm, I wonder if they had been lovers?! Interesting thought if I do say so myself.

I like the idea of seeing Laeyla end up eventually with Traviis the sexy Archer.

What really has my interest is the possible forthcoming relationship between Brie and Elven Commander Juleus Truth!! Oh, yes, that would be a battle in epic proportions.

So, Jafton apparently sent the image of Tristtan (that must have been what Ulrikk whispered to him) to taunt Luceus, but I seriously wish that the healer would do more to help Tristtan but he's too scared.

I am literaly bouncing in my seat waiting for Luceus to extract his ruthless vengence on Ulrikk and rescue Tristtan.

I am so very worried about Tristtan and his arm!!!

P.S. I am still pissed at AFF for forcing you to move In the Land of Aborea to the games section. Perhaps, you should have just posted the story as an original.
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