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Reviews for Everything Held Within

By : Athena
  • From ANON - Jenna (Prism-chan) on November 17, 2003
    ^_^ Lovelovelove it! I think this is my new favorite pair; Viktor and Flik are lacking in Sui3 (My only regret), and I haven't found anyone worthy of Hugo's Angsty Teen ast...But But this is lovely enough to make up for it. I must confess to a slight weakness for the occasional bit of non-con, and this fulfils the urge while also giving me a lovely dose of PLOT. Prism is a happy girl.

    Don't worry aboour our lemon writing, either. I printed the current six chapters to read durring lunch at work, but after flipping through, realized it was too steamy to risk someone peaking over my shoulder or riffling through my papers.

    ^_^ Am eagerly awaiting the next chapter...I wanna see more Albert-mollestation...or plot...So hard to decide which is better...Both at once would make Prism a VERY happy girl ::bounces:: Please update soon!?
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on October 31, 2003
    You aren't pathetic at writing sex! *huggles* That was great! I'm so happy you updated, and I really can't wait for the next one. This is extremely interesting. Although I might be biased, since Yuber/Albert is unbelievably hawt...
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on October 10, 2003
    *writhes and hates some more*

    I'm not serious. You are the greatest. Although I think Yuber should've raped the daylights out of him. Yes, I am sicut yut you knew that. ;D Thank you SOOO much for updating! You have made my day! And it's been a bad day so far, too. :) *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Chibi_Nataku on September 30, 2003
    I'm quite impressed, I must say. It is rare that someone can capture the characters of both Yuber and Albert and keep them relatively in the span of their characters. Good work. I found little wrong with the spelling or the grammer too. I usually never say this to any writer, mostly because it makes me feel like a cheap reviewer, however, for you I'll make an exception: Update. It was enjoyable, and I am interested to see where your plot goes.
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  • From ANON - Nelara on September 13, 2003
    Oh Athena, I'm so glad you finally posted the next chapter. I swear this is one of my alltime favorite stories. Please post the next chapter soon. And keep up the marvelous work. ^.^
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on September 04, 2003
    OH MY GOD! I fainted with glee when I saw that you'd updated! Okay, must calm breathing! This was so good, what do you mean "amateurish attempt?" This is the greatest story ever, and I'm not exaggerating in the least bit.ealleally hope you don't take as long to update next time. I'm in tons of suspense, and more Albert/Yuber sex is needed. Unless you aren't intending to write more lemony goodness. Which is OK, because the story will still be great! *sighs* What an excellent way to start my first day of school... Anyway, thank you SOOOO much for updating! I'm extremely happy right now. :)
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  • From ANON - alaina on August 17, 2003
    I originally read this on ff.net, and was horribly appalled when you took it down! anyway, i've re-found it now, and am very happy you continued it. i love all your work, and adding a little yuber/albert into it just makes it all the better :) pe coe continue!
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on August 16, 2003
    YES! Please update soon! I'm going ballistic here. Okay, not really, but anxiety is eating up my mind. This story is SOOOOOO good!!!! And sexy, too.
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on July 20, 2003
    Athena, I don't mean to pester you, but please update soon! I must know whapphappens!
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  • From ANON - Psi Yamaneko on June 28, 2003
    Neat story, man. It's nice seeing Yuber not a total rapist. @_x
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on June 27, 2003
    Chp. 3: Albert, put some pants on! I'd be really embarrassed if someone undressed me then tried to kill me. But maybe I'm just weird. ;) Excellent chapter, as always, and I really can't wait to read the next one!
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on June 17, 2003
    This is for chp 2. I think. Anyway, I concur that Albert is quite the sexy beast. He looks so drunk all the time. *sighs wistfully* Okay, need more Yubert sex.
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  • From ANON - D\'Artagnan on June 17, 2003
    ATHENA!!! Go you! I love this fic! Too bad it got taken off ff.net, though :( You should write more Yuberts, the world needs them :)
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