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Reviews for The Sentimental Feelings

By : Cicero
  • From ANON - darkrosedamael on February 09, 2006
    -sigh- i still love this fic. i cant get over how great it is. update soon plz
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  • From ANON - Seraph on January 31, 2006
    This chapter seemed so sad. Abel has some really depressing thoughts some times doesnt he? Even in the game, at some moments he even suiduical (sp?). I love how you made Fayt care for Abel and had him worry about Abel form almost the whole time they been together. It was still a awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - DarkRoseDamael on January 22, 2006
    wow! that was a great fic. its a whole lot better than mine is. to me any way. plz update soon.
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  • From ANON - Indiemp on January 18, 2006
    I love your Story! Sentimental Feelings, t'is the best faytxalbel story ever, and i only read those ones XD cant wait for the next chapter :D
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  • From ANON - Erim_Kawamori on January 16, 2006
    I love your story!!! And I like everything
    in this chapter just like the other chapters.
    Poor Fayt, Albel is still a child XD
    Hope you will update soon! Can't wait for
    the next chapter. Good luck with this story
    and others if you are writhing them.

    Love the pair AlbelxFayt
    They are so sweet together :3

    -Erim-
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  • From on January 07, 2006
    HA! I got the funniest mental image of a chibi Albel trying to fight a gigantic monster! Especially since the chibi Albel was using the grown Albel's lines from the game, but they sounded...amusing...in a three year old's voice. Hehehe.

    ~Lee
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  • From ANON - Rho on January 07, 2006
    I have to say that by far, this is the best Star Ocean fanfic that I have ever read, and it is close to beating out all the other genres as well. I am greatly impressed with the way you keep both Fayt and Albel in character and with your imagination. I enjoyed this chapter very much, even if it did not go the way you had wanted. You portray both Albel's pride and need to fight as well as Fayt's fear and concern over him. Normally I don't do this, but this fic has inspired me to want to make you a little gift in thanks for sharing this wonderful story with myself and the many people who read it. I look forward to the next chapter very much! Expect to see a little gift for you in my next review ^^ btw Phantom was an excelent choice ^~
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  • From ANON - Seraph on January 06, 2006
    I'll tell you again, I love this story sooo much!! Abel was soo adorable in the chapter! He was soo excited to finally fight or atleast try to! Fayt is so protective of Abel that I just wanna squeal! They are soo cute together. I also like how you had Maria put the group in seperate little labels, but how she can't quite put a label on them.
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  • From ANON - Death's Avatar on December 29, 2005
    Impressive. You mentioned before that your sentence structure is wierd and it is, but when I read them it sounds kind of like unrhymed poetry. I like how you let Albel keep his own mind but still have to battle with the "inner child". It looks to me like everybody is IC except for Fayt sometimes. Every once in awhile he seems more... motherly than I invision him. I loved the scene in the third chapter with Fayt standing in front of the window, I wish I knew someone who could draw that, it would make an amazing picture.I can't wait to see what happens when Albel gets his adult body back. Please keep writing, but take the time need to keep the story as good as it has been.
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  • From on December 06, 2005
    *Smacks head* I was following the fic way back when I didn't even have an account yet! But then I forgot the title or something and couldn't find it...But I found it again! Yay! *Ahem* Sorry about that. I LOVE THIS STORY! Albel makes me laugh so much...and Fayt is so in character! Kudos to you!
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  • From ANON - Minako on November 22, 2005
    I like it.
    Ah so someone saw that they have an Destiny...so who is life and death...? well Fayt be death and Albel would be life...that would be something new. but it looks like they are getting closer a little. now I wonder if Albel well not get use to having Fayt around him that if Fayt went missing maybe that might anger Albel who knows. but It make me think dose Maria, Mirage or Nel see how much they love one another?...or *Cough* hints. but good work on this one so please do keep up the good work. is there going to be more kissing in the near future? and well Fayt still think as Albel as a child win his soul is not...

    tbc...?
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  • From ANON - one eyed jester on November 20, 2005
    OMG! the collar and the story. Tis good! *hearts*
    Anyway, i do think they are IC. Fayt would always go outof his way to care for someone even if it was a bastard liek albel. I mean, he's done it before with all of albel's lava cave angst. And albel has serious repressed emotions so he really could be liek anything on the inside. Also, he keeps complaining about being weak and dependent in your story wich fits in perfectly with his guilt induced post traumatic stress from his father's death. It makes sense. The only thing slightly OC is that Albel couldn't really control himself when he kissed fayt. I think that someone with enough wilpower to repress all his emotions the way albel does would have had more control. However, that could be easily bypassed as a side efect of the potion. so i think it's really good. i lerve your story.
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  • From ANON - Seraph on November 20, 2005
    Awww. That was soo cute!! Abel got so mad at the thought of wearing Roger's clothes!! I love it!! It's okay if you take long...I don't mind. I know things take time to develop so if it sounded like i was rushing you, I'm sorry. But there is on thing that I just need to know. Roger has a tail right? Then did Abel have a huge hole in the back of his clothes? Good Luck!! ^~^
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  • From ANON - SuijiDL on November 20, 2005
    (Wow its a small internet...I never knew you were in the LJ community for AlbelxFayt. I feel like an idot)

    Anyway, wow, shopping went smooth. I'm surprised Albel didn't raise more hell, all though the shouting that was heard throughout the town was amusing. ANyway, I'm impressed that you worked in the affects of item making and how the characters feel the boost that we just read off as numbers. Very innovative (sp?). Anyhow, this chapter was well worth the wait. I liked how the towns ppl percieved Fayt as a caring dad. ALot of thins I liked about this chapter, I can't remember all of them though. BUT back tot eh point: I can't wait till Albel get's his body back, it should be interesting. But you can drag out his little kids body for a bit longer....if you want.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2005
    I loved it so far!!!!


    I hope you update soon!!!

    cant wait to read more of your wounderful story
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