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Reviews for The Sentimental Feelings

By : Cicero
  • From ANON - Lilly on September 22, 2005
    I see what you mean...as the fact might be that Albel can get a little sad thinking Fayt only see him as a child to take care of. I wonder if he might try and prove to Fayt that his mind is not like a Child like kiss him that would be kind of cute but I don't know what would Fayt think about it...but as eveone sad before good luck with this one.
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  • From ANON - Cassy on September 19, 2005
    its soo cute and funny. you should keep writing it ^.^
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  • From ANON - Seraph on September 17, 2005
    Another awesome chapter!!! I loved the way Abel acted...you have him sooo in character, if that makes any sense o.O I like the way Fayt reacted as well. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - SuijiDL on September 16, 2005
    This entire chapter, I could not stop grining. I love the way Fayt's and Albel's personalities match up with one another. They are adorable. And Albel is sweet, even if he's being a brat. I was surprised that Cliff flew off the handle-Wow! That was something I was not expecting, nice surprise. Although now I fear for Albel's safety, and a little for Cliff's integrity. :(

    Oh well, its still a wonderful story, I love it. Little Albel reminds me of a doujinshi about a Fayt and Albel Humcoulus (spelling?) that attack each other and end up being friends. It's cute. I look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on September 15, 2005
    Hmmm... this... is different. I've read cat!Albel (I've also seen a couple of cat!Albel pics too. I have to say, he's a cute kitty *hears hiss in background. Sweat drops*) *ahem* Yeah, so. This is new, I've seen chibi Albel pictures, (They are borderline painful, thats how cute they are. So cute they hurt.) But making it into a story, how amusing. Weird how his katana shrunk too, talk about yikes. Now you've got mini-Albel and his tiny Sword of Doom, all I can say is Poor. Poor. Cliff. lol I noticed a few writing errors as well as some words that just didn't fit or some that were just left out, but that's because I'm an English freak lol Makes me wonder about the psyche of Albel though, Albel as a child is entirely different from Child!Albel - difference being, one refers to his childhood, whereas the other refers to his adult form shrinking; which in all honestly means that this Albel is still going to be a damn devil. I mean imagine all the crap he can get into now that he still has the same intelligence of his adult self, but now in a child's body. As Cliff would probably say, Scareee. All in all, this is going to be a very interesting read and I can't wait to see the next chapter. Fayt, a mommy lmfao right there.
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  • From SuijiDL on September 15, 2005
    Yes, a little Albel. And he so adorably latched onto Fayt. I like it, its not something you'd expect for these two. Great idea, I can't wait till your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Terra on September 15, 2005
    You made Albel into a chibi...that's SO cute...Yeah I can picture him in Fayt's arms lol. so what are the Girls going to think about this?, since they already think how close Albel and Fayt are...but at lest it looks like Nel is the only one that sane *Yet*. but it's ture Fayt would make a great mother if he did have a child...but enough about that I'll let you get back on you're fic...please do tbc...
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  • From ANON - Shinia on September 14, 2005
    So kawai! Just try to imagine Albel being a three years old child... in Fayt's arms... CUTE!!!!!!!! I really want a pic of this!!!!!...Hum...sorry.... Continue your beautiful story!!!!!! ^_^ And don't give up! *chibi eyes* PLEASE!

    Shinia

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  • From ANON - Tikalhammy on September 13, 2005
    Awwww a three year old Albel! Thats so cute I love the story idea! My favorite part was when abel yelled "Maggots!" that was so funny! Keep it up you have a very unqiue writing style!
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  • From ANON - Seraph on September 12, 2005
    I hope you keep going with this story. You writing style is great and I am soo in love with the your story line. Good luck!!
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  • From ANON - Lilly on September 11, 2005
    Ah so is Fayt really going to take care of Albel?...I can see it now Albel not letting anyone near him or Fayt that would be cute to see. or something else might happen since you turn Albel into a child this is going to be funny to see. now I almost fell bad fore Fayt he might not get any sleep. but yes I can see them sleeping in the same bed would be nice. but not unless Fayt's Mother come by and vist him or Sophia's Parents that would be more funny but it's up to you so good luck with this one.
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  • From ANON - NURIMA-Kashijawara on September 11, 2005
    itīs cool if you can put some shota it would be perfect.. if you donīt know what shota means iīll explain it to you itīs a big men/youth having sex with a little boy.... i love this stuff and your story it is perfect to apply that genre of yaoi x3~ ... and.. tha way you writte is good, you just need to make that chapters longer... please continue and try to put some shota please... iīll wait fot he next chapter
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  • From ANON - kushimitama_985 on September 11, 2005
    so~ cute >wyeah iīm weird but thatīs the way it is... the writting is good, it is really detailed
    continue as soon as possible...
    i would like to see.. Cliff or Fayt raping little Albel XD
    yup! im a crazy girl XD.. but i would really like seeing somethin like that...
    SO PLEASE continue n_n
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  • From ANON - BlackFalcon on September 10, 2005
    Aww... cute Albel. *Stab by Albel* More please, I wanna read more.
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  • From ANON - cassy on September 09, 2005
    I like it. It sounds like its going to be very interesting. Can't wait to see what will happen next.
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