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Reviews for Breathing Is A Necessity

By : BringtheHawt
  • From kanosslave on April 26, 2007
    You feel you're out of your element; I feel you're doing an excellent job. I think your writing style is great, I love your character development, and the last chapter did gnaw at me like you said. Congratulations, and please continue!
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  • From ANON - Mango on April 25, 2007
    OMG.It wasn't as scary as I thought it was going to be. Man, does Gant like to hear himself talk. Still, Gant's a huge dickface, so I can't like him for doing that to poor Worthy. Oh, Phoenix, save him with the hurt/comfort genre! ;~; Please continue. xD
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  • From Mercury on April 23, 2007
    Very well done! I just recently found this story and had to stay up that night until I got to the last chapter put up. XD The writing voice is carried throughout the piece, no matter which character is being spoken about (and they're so varied)! I'm also very wary of fics with some smut every chapter, but the balance was good, and the scenes still held significance to the story. Of course, I'm always grateful for attention to spelling and grammar. It's become a commodity on the internet these days.

    A few comments for the last chapter: you seem nervous about it in your notes, but I say you're coming along swimmingly! Firstly, I'm a fan of hurt/comfort and if I had a dime for every fic that went towards rape or some form of non-con, but decide to turn tail and run at the last minute _in the scene_, well... you know the saying. Ass-ton of dimes. XD ("Oh wait, maybe I like this, yes I do! I love my raper!" I mean, there's going to be involuntary body pleasure, but come on. o__o;; ) I'm not dropping a big hint that this fic should go the full h/c route or anything at all like that -- I'd much rather see what you come up with -- but as a reader in this genre, it comes up. All in all, well played on all fronts. Please, please more updates~~ x3

    Oh, and the Phoenix/Edgeworth video scene made me coo. :3

    Endnote: Haha, I bet you can tell I don't write very many reviews. XD Take the possible awkwardness as a compliment!
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  • From ANON - Kristin on April 22, 2007
    PS- I have checked with my boyfriend. He says you can pee with a raging erection although it is uncomfortable and the stream goes wild. He wouldn't recommend it. Then again he's not in to that sort of thing and neither am I but he says it is possible.
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  • From ANON - Kristin on April 22, 2007
    I will always both fear and revere authors who can write things like this. Being taken from moments of saying "Ohhhh" out loud an grinning to moments of gut-twisting anxiety for Edgeworth is an experience I am truly enjoying. This is beautifully written and thought-out and I can't wait for more. I need more!

    I guess I'm trying to say I admire and adore you while staring in shock and awe at this last chapter I've just read. I have to know how it ends. Please take me there.
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  • From UtenaTenjou10 on April 20, 2007
    All I can say for your latest chapter is wow...
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  • From SnappedChopstick on April 20, 2007
    I've never been one for rape scenes like this, so I don't think I can really comment. Bleh.
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  • From ANON - Dancing Pig on April 20, 2007
    Pretty good story. But I must point out the most obvious, glaring mistake in your latest chapter: a man with a raging erection - esp. when he is hard enough to penetrate, can't urinate. The plumbing's not that advanced. Even for Gant.
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  • From UtenaTenjou10 on April 18, 2007
    There's nothing here that I can really complain about! You've totally captured the childish innocence of ol' Nick , the smug and sarcastic characterization of Edgeworth is right on the money and Gant is an evil and sexy bastard. I definitely am keeping my eye on this fic and happily await the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mango on April 16, 2007
    ZOMG I'M GONNA EFFIN' KILL GANT! XO!!! He's such an evil manipulative sonavabitch! Why can't Phoenix and Miles be happy together? This story makes me so emo, yet it's really funny. An emotional rollacoasta! Haha, oh my, I'm ranting. Pleeeease, keep going with this story. It's...phenominal. To say in the least. :D
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on April 14, 2007
    Absolutely great! Really well-written, complex characters, great storylines...and fantastic smut too! Please write more. Personally I'm shipping for Miles/Phoenix...Phoenix needs a little love here, poor guy.
    Usually I ship for Maya/Phoenix, but here, it's got to be Edgeworth and Wright. They're perfect together.
    Please write more soon.
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  • From SnappedChopstick on April 09, 2007
    ...GAH. You are a mean, cruel person!

    I am warming up considerably to your Phoenix. He's adorable in his own perverted, desperate way. (Kama Sutra flash cards? Hee!) And though you didn't actually write it, you referred to my favorite PW pairing - Edgeworth/Gumshoe FTW!

    Still, though... That cliffhanger! So evil! Here's hoping you feel inspired enough to get a new chapter out soon.
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  • From ANON - vejiita4eva on April 03, 2007
    I... -never- expected to be as entertained and fascinated by this series as I am. Your characterization of Edgeworth is stunning and sexy, and Phoenix is a neverending source of amusement and joy. I rather lost count of how many times he made me break out into a fullfaced grin in the last chapter--SO sweet ^^ But it's still Edgeworth that makes this series, and part of me is guiltily hoping to see him just lose it in the face of pleasure, though a significantly greater part of me rejoiced uncontrollably at watching him talk down Gant and kick him out. That was -amazing-. I hope you continue this series, I -really- do. I love this.
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on March 28, 2007
    ... Oh wow, another excellent chapter! And I must say, Phoenix had me cracking up. Very light-hearted in comparison to what the chapter ended with. I can't wait for more; you left us in suspence.
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  • From SnappedChopstick on March 28, 2007
    This fic has made me realize a couple of things; firstly, that Gant is a cool minor character, but makes for an odd duck when featured prominently. Secondly, obsessive!Phoenix kind of weirds me out, maybe because of how child-like his personality is in-game - I have difficulty wrapping my brain around him doing any kind of striptease and actually comprehending what he's doing.

    That said, I'd be lying if I pretended like I wasn't looking forward to the next chapter. Tally-ho!
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