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Reviews for Enigma's Mass Effect Smutfics

By : elegyenigma
  • From triptothemoon on June 08, 2009
    Dear god that thing with Tali might be the most enjoyable thing I've read on here. I get a real kick out of the xeno stuff. Your plate seems rather full but here are some things I'd like to see: Shepard and a salarian female, Shepard and a krogan female, handjobs from a hanar

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  • From ANON - Fuzzy! on May 11, 2009
    Oh and I actually agree with SonoftheAtomicBiscuithead last point. Saying cock and pussy all the time is rather droll. I mean, there's literally dozens of different words for both and repeating the same thing over and over again is boring to read. On the other hand, you don't want to overdo it. My personal reading preference is when the writer sticks with 2, maximum 3, synonyms.
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy! on May 11, 2009
    Exquisite! I mean, not too smutty [i.e. bad porn in writing, which make up 49.5% of the materials here] and not too gooey/emo-ey [i.e. the other 49.5%]. The balance of smut and story and comedy is just perfect. Plus, there's none of those 12-inch dicks running around. I don't understand our gender's obsession with imagining girls being plundered by these monstrosities, when most of us are averagely endowed.

    Might I be so bold to request a straight devil's threesome with Kaidan? Consider it a challenge because a straight MMF is almost always pure smut with bad writing. I see an abundance of Wrex smut here and I'm like wtf! Wrex is not a tasteful sexual being!

    And I read that somebody dissed you for having the name Elegy? Dude, that's a cool name. I mean, it's not as hippie as Moonbeam or Sycamore and not as common as John, Paul or George. [I'm tempted to add 'and Ringo!' =P]
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  • From ANON - Kensnoka on May 04, 2009
    Love your stories, all of them. You do a great job bringing the characters to life.
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  • From ANON - awesome on April 13, 2009
    how about one where Joker listens to Shepard's exploits? :)
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  • From ANON - Imacatetc on April 13, 2009
    I absolutely LOVE this. I've loved it since Part 1, and I love the other stories/story ideas that are being put up here. Keep up the excellent fapfiction :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2009
    The thing about some of us wanting girl on girl action is that we want girl on girl action. So telling us about a chapter with girl on guy on girl action doesn't mean anything to us :(
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  • From ANON - Randomus on March 22, 2009
    Yeah. This rocks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2009
    Just looking back over this, E, and I am again struck by the quality of the writing as opposed to some of the total crap on this website. I look forward to your next chapter, but you can't rush genius.;) Keep up the good work and I'll keep reviewing it.
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  • From ANON - DenimGiant on March 16, 2009
    I would like to say that you write some of the best scenes ever. I find it hard to compare your work to others as yours is so astoundingly good. Keep up the good work! We're all eagerly awaiting your next release!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2009
    This.

    FUCKING THIS!

    This is gloriously awesome. I see Tali in a whole new light, and the chapter with Liara (though much shorter than Tali's) was equally as awesome.

    You are a gentleman and a scholar. Keep it up!
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  • From on March 13, 2009
    Well I just found this and I have to admit it's a really great story so far. I like your style of writing and how well the scenes are handled as well. You know I always did wonder what that one woman looked like under all that survival gear and your take was a pretty good one. So we'll see a lesbian scene with the two of them huh, that could be interesting and will Shepard be put into the mix for a three way action after it? Will we see Ashley later on, maybe a little thing with the alien women could help her get over her xenophobia and see there is a good thing having some aliens on board.

    At any rate keep it up and I'll be checking back now and then to see when you update this story.
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  • From elegyenigma on February 08, 2009
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    Mmmm...

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  • From SonfotheAtomicBiscuithead on February 08, 2009
    You've got talent, but this wasn't really what I expected after reading some of the glowing reviews. I don't see the personalities from the game in the story overmuch and it does have the 70's flavor making it feel like a parody (someone else mentioned this, and I have to agree). In fact from the Tali story, I took away from it that it was Renegade Shepard, not Paragon until I read the notes. Just a suggestion-- overusing 'cock' and 'pussy' ceases to be sexy after awhile and becomes silly. It's like a physical version of "oh bob" "oh marsha" back and forth every line. Had me rolling after awhile, imagining a chicken exploding from Shepard's crotch and slamming into some poor dazed cat.
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  • From ANON - Clayface on February 06, 2009
    Part 3 was awsome. Can't wait for the next story.
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