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Reviews for Shattered

By : Koori
  • From ANON - demmu on October 03, 2013
    Oh wow thanks sweetie, totally did not expect that and def looking forward to it!! Always happy to see an update.
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  • From ANON - Demmu on September 09, 2013
    Always happy to see a new chapter but i do miss the torture... >:)
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  • From ANON - lolu on September 08, 2013
    I love this story so much!! Sorry for not reviewing before; I hadn't even noticed the upload so it was a big surprise to have more than one chapter to read! -and great, I must say!-
    I love how the story is unfolding; can't wait for new updates! I promise I'll check more often :D

    Poor Foster and Sara, they really waited for him that long in a cave? D:
    I adore Nathaniel! Please keep writing from his POV

    Excellent as always!
    Cheers, keep up the awesome work, I really enjoy it :)
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  • From ANON - Tyrion on August 19, 2013
    I finally come back to check and find not one but two updates! Happy day indeed.

    Poor Nathaniel, seems like he can't go a single day without trouble. I might have mentioned this before, but I love that you included the darkness that comes with being a death knight, rather than following the route most fan-fic authors seem to and ignoring it. Being undead isn't all about sunshine and daisies, ha!

    Also, Omelet the baby raptor... Epic! I laughed out loud at that one.

    Pure greatness, as usual, and no worries about the sporadic updates; I do the same thing when I write, much to the frustration of my readers.

    Please, keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more. (:

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  • From ANON - lolu on July 29, 2013
    raptor cannibalism! por baby!
    Awesome chapter! I love Foster's child, that was so heroic !
    And I am starting to like Skang better and better! :D
    Damn I love your updates!! Keep them coming please!
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - lolu on July 12, 2013
    haha I'm sorry!! I thought I had reviewed you!
    how was your trip? I hope you enjoyed it!

    Have to say I love reading Nathaniel's PoV ; and yeah! I enjoyed Skang's presence!
    Awesome chapter, I'm really glad you updated!

    I have to say I adore Nathaniel's determination on never giving up on Foster. Melts my heart D:
    Cheers! I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D
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  • From ANON - Tyrion on July 12, 2013
    YAY you updated. :D Loving the brilliance, as usual. I have to say, Skang seems to be a pretty cool guy... err, I mean orc.

    Also, I love that you took a darker direction with Foster and the death knight aspect rather than a "oh we escaped cue the sunshine and daisies" approach. Although I should have expected it to be good, considering the author. (:

    I honestly thought I reviewed the last chapter, so sorry for that. I promise I'll be more stalker-like in the future. xP

    -Tyrion
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  • From ANON - lolu on June 15, 2013
    wow!! I've been really busy here;
    it is great to come back and have not one, but two chapters waiting to be read!!!
    and both of them awesome :D
    -sorry I couldn't review any sooner!

    second honeymoon? that sounds magnificent!!
    I hope you have a great time!

    I'll be waiting for new updates on this awesome story !!
    Good luck, keep up the excellent work; and have lots of fun!!
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  • From ANON - Tyrion on June 07, 2013
    You are certainly good with suspense! I swear I was shaking for the first half of that chapter thinking Foster was dead. Then again, he's a death knight... I shouldn't have been surprised! Can't kill the undead that easily.

    Also, love the twist with the orcs!

    -Tyrion
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  • From ANON - Althea on May 17, 2013
    Omg Super excited for poor Nathanial to "wake" up. I have been diligently checking everyday for another update and just realized I hadn't reviewed again yet! Sooo Bring on the chapters!
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  • From ANON - lolu on May 10, 2013
    Amazing! I've been waiting for this moment for a long time! hahaha
    This chapter was indeed SQUEE-tastic for me too! I love it! Damn I love your stories !!!
    Poor Nathaniel! Give him a break!! D: hahah
    Excellent as usual! I will be waiting for the next chapter :)
    I must -shamefully- admit, that I've been checking back almost every day to see if you updated!!
    Couldn't wait for what was going to happen (I'm so anxious and curious)
    Good luck! :)

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  • From ANON - Tyrion on May 01, 2013
    Upon reading this chapter, I was for some reason reminded of the moment back in "Brothers" when Foster and Nathaniel were children, and Nathaniel broke one of Foster's toys. That caused this insane rush of nostalgia to hit me, and I realized that one of the reasons I love this story so much is just that; we've seen Foster and Nathaniel go from toddlers to warriors and everything in between. I feel that the connection built between readers and characters is one of the key elements that makes a story great, and you have done a brilliant job in that aspect.

    I'm sorely tempted to go back and reread the entirety of the first story, now! I only wish I had the time to do so.

    That said, I'll admit I was also guilty of a ridiculous grin at the end of this one, even if I felt somewhat guilty for it! I can't help but feel sorry for both Nathaniel and Foster. Still, loved the chapter (do I even need to say that anymore, or have we just established that all of your updates are brilliant?)

    Eagerly waiting for an update (as per usual,)
    -Tyrion
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  • From ANON - Althea on April 27, 2013
    Omg! I was so excited when I checked this story the other day on my phone and there was an update! Omg keep them coming I cannot wait to see how it ends and I will continue to stalk you until then!!
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  • From ANON - Cutiepie on April 25, 2013
    Love your stories. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - lolu on April 25, 2013
    hahaha so stalking isn't so bad after all!
    I love how the story is going; and I found myself smiling wickedly at the end too.. Poor Nathaniel , it felt so wrong; yet in Brothers I had -secretly cough cough- wished for something to happen between them! But now It just seems so... awkward.

    Awh; your chapters always want to make me read more, and more!! the wait for new ones seems so long! (no pressure inteded though) haha

    I really want Foster to say those words! come one! D: Speak damnit! Poor Nathaniel!
    As always, awesome chapter; I really hope you can post sooner hehe ;)
    Best of luck!


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