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Reviews for Shattered

By : Koori
  • From ANON - lolu on October 16, 2012
    Ohhh! Nice chapter! Now you make me hate Vance again! Oh my... save Nathaniel , make things lighter for him !! I feel so sorry for him D: gaaahh !

    I'm sorry to hear it was a rough week; hope it wasn't too much though :(
    Good luck and keep up the great work ! Cheers!

    P.s I'll be waiting for more updates!!
    Are you planning on making this story as long as the others you've written? Just curious to know!
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  • From ANON - lolu on October 08, 2012
    oh my, I absolutely adore Nathaniel D: you make me feel so sorry for him!! 
    haha I must confess that at times I kind of enjoy Vance's mind games with Nathaniel; being nice towards him and at the next second going all mad at him. 

    I'll be looking forward for next weekend :D Best of wishes, keep up the great work :)
    ps: I'm sorry I don't know what happenned! I sent the review and only half of it appeared ! strange.. 
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  • From ANON - lolu on October 08, 2012
    You're welcome! I love reviewing you 'cause I love your stories!!!
    I really enjoyed this new chapter; specially the dream/ flashback about what happenned to
    the family
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  • From ANON - lolu on September 28, 2012
    oh I feel honored and glad our reviews cheer you :D
    This new chapter made me feel even more sorry for Nathaniel; such
    a lovely character that has to suffer through so much! D:
    aargh you make me get so involved in your stories! I love them and love your style :D
    please keep it up and don't forget about us :3 hehe
    cheers!
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  • From ANON - lolu on September 25, 2012
    Ooow !! I can't believe you are back with more! I love it so far; though I must admit I feel really
    sorry for Nathaniel :(
    Love the balance between dialogue, descriptions and actions; it gives the story
    more dinamism !
    keep up the great work and please continue with the story! don't leave us hanging
    for too long haha ;)
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  • From Firefall_Varuna on September 06, 2012
    OMGYAYSQUEEE!

    Okay, now that the fangirl squeal is out of the way...

    This is probably the most intense scene you've written to date. One thing I love is the way the sentences flow in an awkward, dizzying fashion. It lends another nuance to the scene. Reading this over for you, it was hard not going "Ew! Attack of the run-ons!" It helps convey Nathaniel's mental state and drew me in deeper into the scene.

    Great work, Sis! Love you!
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