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Reviews for The Wolf's Snare

By : JustS
  • From ANON - Regis on October 19, 2015
    Honestly this is one of the best Tomb Raider fictions I've read in a very long time. The character of Lara I have to say was treated fairly well and the development between her and Jennifer was believable. As I personal preference I chose to follow the more magical route and was thoroughly pleased at the end result. That being said however I am said to see the end of this particular fiction and was hoping for more. Perhaps if the author feels up to it they could create a sequel focusing on Sam and the black chick, from 2013's reboot, going out to find Lara and eventually joining in the depraved but very sexy lifestyle. If such a sequel were to occur I would happily and voraciously read it.
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  • From ANON - Joanne Farrell on October 19, 2015
    Oh my God what the fuck did a zoophile write this?!?!?!
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  • From ninesenshi on September 06, 2015
    Although the story did not take the path I would have preferred, it was well written and often sexy. Glad for the happy, slutty ending.
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  • From ANON - X on August 18, 2015
    Came for the sex, staid for the plot. c];{~
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  • From ANON - Morbidfantasy on July 03, 2015
    Smut light is tots fine. Plot progression is welcome. My personal opinion would've been to lock down a path. A or B, doesn't matter, as long as it serves the overarching story. Still, good dialogue, I liked the tension building, although Lara's initial capture and her escape seemed just a hair truncated.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 29, 2015
    I do hope you haven't stopped this story.O_o
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  • From ninesenshi on February 28, 2015
    I had quit this but I noticed a new chap so I checked out `Alpha'. Good chap, I'm glad you got back to these girls being pack-bitches rather then lesbians with wolf sex-toys. Good to see some proper canine dominance.
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  • From ANON - Boo Yeah on August 25, 2014
    For those who have no idea what it is to write these osrts of stories, let me help educate you. Most writers start these stories as one-shots, with no desire to take them further, and no idea where to go. When an author asks for input it isn't because they are lazy, or taking the 'easy way out,' it is because they have no idea what the readers who asked for the fic to go beyond that first chapter want.
    S is just trying to figure out what those who wanted him to continue want to read him write. As for as the double chapters that rad so close to one another... the man has said it too many times, so let me, "For those wanting to read a story of Lara being pregnant, read the chapters marked 'B'." He has done all he needs to regarding his responsability to the readers wanting either one or the other. If you want both? read both... don't bitch about how he does it.
    If you want it to differ significantly, try this: Have Lara give birth to her litter, and tend them. Honestly, that is the only time this should differ.
    Let me say to you 'S', Great job so far, and let it roll off if someone wants to piss on your work. You have huge brass nadgers to even write this, and great talent. I say this, and your Lara would agree: "This is the dogs."
    B.
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  • From ninesenshi on July 28, 2014
    `All to Myself'. Pretty sexy. nice to see Lara being dommed, even a little bit. Hope to see more. Some fisting would be hot. Put Lara in her place.
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  • From ANON - Chris on July 20, 2014
    Amazing!!!!
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  • From ANON - pairofdimes on July 17, 2014
    while I think the reviewer above me is being way too harsh and critical, I do agree that the story was better when it was mainly Lara and the Wolves. And I personally like the B sections so I wish you kinda did the opposite and focused on that story and just removed it for others not interested in the pregnancy. But hey Im not picky.
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  • From Serperior_Queen on July 15, 2014
    I prefered this story when it was about Lara banging wolves instead of this faux-lesbian stuff. The instant Jennifer came in I sighed and said to myself 'they're going to be having sex pretty soon and the wolves are going to be forgotten.' Jennifer's quite boring, sorry.

    A question: why split this story into chapters that just have a few sentences added rather than writing a seperate fic? I read these last two chapters and had to copy and paste both of them (as you seem to have done - sorry, that's just lazy.) into MSWord to tell the difference of... what, fifty words? Come on. If the fic's taking a 'different turn' at least have the decency to write completely new things happening in the alternate chapters. I promise you, no one is going to thoroughly read through these copy and pasted chapters eagerly looking for whatever couple of sentences you've added. If this wasn't your fic, would you do that?

    Now. This isn't to say there isn't anything good about this fic. The first four chapters were pretty hot. And I like the idea of inter-species pregnancies. I just wish you'd come up with what you wanted to do with this story beforehand, instead of taking the easy way out and asking us. We're the readers. You're the writer. You're supposed to make these decisions and come up with the cool stuff. Have Lara explore and find a new species of wolf that wants to steal her from the others. Or have her meet those bandits again. You decide, not us. Don't be lazy.
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  • From ANON - Storylover213 on July 14, 2014
    This chapter is a repeat of the previous one.
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  • From ANON - BOO YOW! on June 08, 2014
    "I just want the pack... thats all." Good doggies, giving her what she wants.
    Lara Croft nursury ryme: A little red and ridding her good. Fap.(that means it's good by the way);d
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  • From ANON - Cheez on May 26, 2014
    Great work. Hope you do another TR story after this one.
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