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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yippie-kai-yi-yay, Tycho:) Looks like Dixie wanted to see who could make Candy Cane and Aisha almost melt in orgasm. The Cowgirl got to ride a Stallion in Dragon Ninja Clothing:P
Almost reminds me of the "return of Captain Justice" in the old film "The Running Man." Captain Justice had been a former "gladiator" against contestants, then a commentator for the game show "The Running Man" (and was played by Jesse "The Body" Ventura). When Ben Richards (Arnold Schwarzenegger) rips through the previous gladiators, he's "asked to come back into service."
When Candy and Aisha cum hard with Ryu, Dixie is wanting to see if Ryu's "all that" too. When it's a tie, she's made a believer.
Then that only wonders when Reiko Hinamoto or Evil Rose might want some of Ryu too, and how soon..
Almost reminds me of the "return of Captain Justice" in the old film "The Running Man." Captain Justice had been a former "gladiator" against contestants, then a commentator for the game show "The Running Man" (and was played by Jesse "The Body" Ventura). When Ben Richards (Arnold Schwarzenegger) rips through the previous gladiators, he's "asked to come back into service."
When Candy and Aisha cum hard with Ryu, Dixie is wanting to see if Ryu's "all that" too. When it's a tie, she's made a believer.
Then that only wonders when Reiko Hinamoto or Evil Rose might want some of Ryu too, and how soon..
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It looks like we're halfway done (Candy Cane, Aisha, Benikage/Yasha, Aigle and Makoto Aihara) with Lady X getting her wind back and Miss Spencer about to be "upgraded" to Mistress Spencer.
That leaves Reiko and Dixie, Evil Rose, Anesthesia/Dr. Cutter and Lady X 2.0, with Mistress Spencer possibly wanting a rematch (one thought with her is that Mistress Spencer might go semi-feral like Benikage had, and using the same ninja magic on Mistress would cause her to have what Dr. Cutter had on her undone). Same might be possible for the others, or you can have them "corrupted" by Anesthesia and Ryu is forced to give them chi-charged orgasms to burn out what Anesthesia put in them.
That leaves Reiko and Dixie, Evil Rose, Anesthesia/Dr. Cutter and Lady X 2.0, with Mistress Spencer possibly wanting a rematch (one thought with her is that Mistress Spencer might go semi-feral like Benikage had, and using the same ninja magic on Mistress would cause her to have what Dr. Cutter had on her undone). Same might be possible for the others, or you can have them "corrupted" by Anesthesia and Ryu is forced to give them chi-charged orgasms to burn out what Anesthesia put in them.
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how Tina is becoming the breakout character of the series
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Any chance you'd write something involving the heel versions of Makoto and Aigle (Black Belt Demon and Killer/Great Khan)? I think they're hotter than the face versions.
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Ryu extricated himself from the android and watched with an almost longing look in his eyes as Lady X walked back to the lift she had appeared on."
ROFL How do you come up with this stuff? This is hilariously amazing. Good chapter again.
Don't know if you already have things planned in advance but how about an impromptu tag match between Kasumi & Tina vs Reiko & Dixie? Kasumi finally tracks down her man and instead of having Ryu fight a doubles match, she and Tina improvise, leaving a befuddled Ryu speechless as he's forced to the sidelines as a spectator for a change.
ROFL How do you come up with this stuff? This is hilariously amazing. Good chapter again.
Don't know if you already have things planned in advance but how about an impromptu tag match between Kasumi & Tina vs Reiko & Dixie? Kasumi finally tracks down her man and instead of having Ryu fight a doubles match, she and Tina improvise, leaving a befuddled Ryu speechless as he's forced to the sidelines as a spectator for a change.
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oboy...could we be seeing the possibility that Ryu Hayabusa might be getting another "brother" soon? I could almost see "Dragon Lord Ryu" being the counter to "Lady X" and who knows...could it awaken her humanity? And might Lady X have responded that being with Ryu felt like being...human again?
Could the possibility that Beta-117 might make a return appearance when he feels his connection with Ryu Hayabusa split again as a third is formed? And Alpha-152 help Lady X regain her humanity? Or better yet...do something magical like replace the metal with flesh? Such be the power of awakened love to restore humanity, like it had with Yasha/Benikage.
Could the possibility that Beta-117 might make a return appearance when he feels his connection with Ryu Hayabusa split again as a third is formed? And Alpha-152 help Lady X regain her humanity? Or better yet...do something magical like replace the metal with flesh? Such be the power of awakened love to restore humanity, like it had with Yasha/Benikage.
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So it could be that they might be making Lady X Substance more powerful to go all the way and back with Ryu (though a month-long mating with Tina would cause the Rumble Roses girls to think how far they'd need to go with Ryu, or if they'd get far before they came).
Or Anesthesia could be working with the fixers to see how much a player Ryu is and how hard he'll have to fight for more. It will force Ryu to crank up his game and redouble or retriple his efforts.
Of course, if Lady X Substance was given the face and hair of Tina that might end it sooner:P
Or you could have Alpha-152 hack into Lady X and -- heh -- give the robot some heart as well:)
Oh, Anesthesia was surprised at how much a specimen Hayabusa was, and now that she has a specimen of himself with her for "testing purposes" it would be perfect.
We might have Hayabusa allay his fears by the next meeting the Rumble Roses board be Tina, Anesthesia, and one of the RR heads. The nurse cheerfully gives her physical results for him, and that he was drug-free. She might even admit, "If I knew I'd get the results I did, I'd have asked for him even sooner on a personal level."
Or Anesthesia could be working with the fixers to see how much a player Ryu is and how hard he'll have to fight for more. It will force Ryu to crank up his game and redouble or retriple his efforts.
Of course, if Lady X Substance was given the face and hair of Tina that might end it sooner:P
Or you could have Alpha-152 hack into Lady X and -- heh -- give the robot some heart as well:)
Oh, Anesthesia was surprised at how much a specimen Hayabusa was, and now that she has a specimen of himself with her for "testing purposes" it would be perfect.
We might have Hayabusa allay his fears by the next meeting the Rumble Roses board be Tina, Anesthesia, and one of the RR heads. The nurse cheerfully gives her physical results for him, and that he was drug-free. She might even admit, "If I knew I'd get the results I did, I'd have asked for him even sooner on a personal level."
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As many chapters as this fic is made up of, it should have far more reviews than the relatively paltry 101 it has. 102, if you count my own now. This is smut-work at some of its finest, and truly shows a level of literate dedication unseen in many fic-writers who do spend about five minutes on a sex scene and thirty minutes writing out how perfect their OC is.
I am truly impressed at the level of detail in this fic. It has helped give me inspiration to continue some of my own works...inspiration I've been in desperate need of for quite some time. I've only been able to focus on one thing at a time.
Sadly, that one thing tends to my job and the maintenance of simply living a low-income, no safety-net life.
Keep on truckin', yo. Your writing is some pretty boss stuff.
I am truly impressed at the level of detail in this fic. It has helped give me inspiration to continue some of my own works...inspiration I've been in desperate need of for quite some time. I've only been able to focus on one thing at a time.
Sadly, that one thing tends to my job and the maintenance of simply living a low-income, no safety-net life.
Keep on truckin', yo. Your writing is some pretty boss stuff.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story and very good sex scenes. The crossover with Rumble Roses is a great addition to the series of chapters. I wonder if Ryu will have some with girls from both franchises at the same time (like Benikage and Ayane, for example). Maybe others will come to love good Hayabusa.
Keep the good writing and intense scenes.
Keep the good writing and intense scenes.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It looks like Tina's got a "plan of conquest": to first win over the musical rivals by using her Dragon Ninja to subdue them sexually. First Candy Cane, now Aisha...who's next, Reiko Hinamoto, Noble Rose or Makoto Aihara (trying to remember which Roses could sing right off-hand)?
And of course, the video rights to the orgy of Aisha and her two sisters with Ryu Hayabusa would make Tina nice and wealthy--but she needs to share her post-tax profit with Kasumi, Ayane and Rachel--no sense in wearing Ryu out and making sure his main ladies weren't taken care of, yes?;P
And that almost begs a question--would Hayabusa have made any of the Roses cum so hard/so much that they'd want to have his baby? (Kasumi and Helena each gave Ryu a child, Ayane wants to, and possibly Rachel too)
Meaning Hayabusa's getting plenty of action, a lot of female fans, and a few Rumble Roses wanting to be a "Ninja's Rose" too--for those who Hayabusa seduced in the ring, would they wear a arm-band/t-shirt that might have a dragon entwined around a rose, a way of saying they're a "Dragon's Rose" now?
And of course, the video rights to the orgy of Aisha and her two sisters with Ryu Hayabusa would make Tina nice and wealthy--but she needs to share her post-tax profit with Kasumi, Ayane and Rachel--no sense in wearing Ryu out and making sure his main ladies weren't taken care of, yes?;P
And that almost begs a question--would Hayabusa have made any of the Roses cum so hard/so much that they'd want to have his baby? (Kasumi and Helena each gave Ryu a child, Ayane wants to, and possibly Rachel too)
Meaning Hayabusa's getting plenty of action, a lot of female fans, and a few Rumble Roses wanting to be a "Ninja's Rose" too--for those who Hayabusa seduced in the ring, would they wear a arm-band/t-shirt that might have a dragon entwined around a rose, a way of saying they're a "Dragon's Rose" now?