rate_review Reviews

Very good. Emotional, not just a fuck-feast like most of the stories on aff seem to be.
I really like Safiya and found next to no stories with her, that's why it would be fantastic if you continued this one.
If that never happens, then at least I got to read two chapters of a really good NWN2 story.

wow, this is really starting to get so intriguing! I really like how you're going from Safiya's perspective here, it makes the tory so funky and strange. Especially the line "Yasha, at least, was a mystery I might enjoy," that was really good. It adds a sort of detached, crazy/creep/cute factor that makes me leery and eager at the same time, heh. I like this, especially the sort of darker undertones that come across with certain words, like *flay her* at the end there. The punishment here is going to be good, I can tell that much already!

wow, I really liked this. it's kind of too early to say anything more about it, but it sounds promising and I'd like to see what happens next.