rate_review Reviews

This story was a great thrill to read, and easy to picture your scenes and action sequences. It has a lot of promise and could do well with a continuation. As a nitpicky lore thing, Eldar rangers would have fit the stealthy spy role a bit better than warp spiders. Other than that, the story is very lore friendly, and that is something that doubles the quality of a story. Keep up the good work.

this has lots of promise, please continue it.