Shadow of Destiny: The script of sarcasm | By : Shenai Category: -Misc Video Games/RPGs > Walkthroughs/Hints/Spoilers Views: 1696 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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DISCLAIMER: I not own Shadow of Destiny, but I do own this script recap/walkthrough type thing. If you attempt to steal this off of me I will send Mary Sue after you with a saucepan. You have been warned.
(Six months ago, a friend came to me with a request. Hash, wanted me to obtain for her the script of Shadow of Destiny so that she could write fanfiction based on it. I volunteered to take on the script writing duty myself, knowing there was no other place that I could find said script. It sounded easy enough, but after a while it was hard to resist adding a sly comment here and there, or changing a character’s name completely. Soon, this script became a fanfic of it’s own; the largest of magnitude I have ever undertaken. So without further ado, I present to you:
"Shadow of Destiny: The Script of Sarcasm."
All right, press on Start game begins. Black screen pops up with the word Prologue on it, so obviously that is exactly what we are thus witnessing. Gosh, I’m so smart. The scene opens up above a rather well rendered house type thing and pans down to the street where a man appears from out the door of said building. This appears to be the lucky protagonist, considering that one, he is exceptionally pretty and two ... well ... he’s exceptionally pretty. I mean seriously, what more do you need for a main character? Oh ... and did I forget to mention that he is blonde? This makes my job sooo~oooo much easier.
Anyway, Tall-blonde-and-pretty- checks his watch. You can just hear the clogs in his brain grind into motion. "Okay... the big hand is on the twelve and the little hand is on the two... so that means its... 122 O’clock?" Ahem. Sorry about that. Now, sure of the time, our gallant hero turns a hard left, (Lucky he doesn’t have any problems like Derek Zoolander, huh?) and walks off down the street. Do I even need to mention that Tall-Blonde-and-Pretty has incredibly long legs? No? Well, whatever dude. I do like a man with long legs so my lika-ge of him has just gone up a notch. Yippee.
Walking, walking, walking. Stop, spin around, was that someone following me? Camera shot from inside someone’s house showing Tall –Blonde-and-Pretty glancing around like a paranoid pop star before doing a close up of his face as he flips his hair back a little. Yes, we know he’s pretty all right? Stop showing off. Really, game designers. You’d think they’d never created a protagonist before.
Tall-Blonde-and-Pretty continues walking hands in his pockets. We now get to see a two-second flash from the perspective of someone running fast, perhaps hounding our lovable blonde hero. Could it be that he is some type of celebrity? Hmm...
Tall-Blonde-and-Pretty is still walking lost in thought. The camera goes back to the pursuer, whose shadow now stretches up the side of one of the buildings, showing something long and sharp in one hand. You just know this is going to end badly.
It all happens in a second. There is a horrible squishy noise and Tall-Blonde-and-Pretty’s head snaps back his mouth open wide. Okay, do I really want to know just what that squishy noise was? Maybe some things are better off not knowing...
The stalker turns tail and flees leaving our hero who fall’s to the ground with a very visible hole in the back of his jacket. Oh, so that’s what the squishy sound was. I thought... um, never mind.
Tall-Blonde-and-Pretty looks around with the blurred vision of someone who is thoroughly pissed, obviously feeling pretty much that way himself. A large Big Ben clock chimes on 2:30 and the title pops up, "Shadow of Destiny." No. Really? I couldn’t tell that myself from the title screen you know. Thank you very much. Wankers.
Tall-Blonde-and-Pretty lies very still so I take a random guess and, um, guess that he is dead. Which he is because lets face it, not many people walk away after being stabbed in the back.
So is this simply just the shortest game in history? Ah, do not be fooled my pets. There is plenty more to come, involving I might add our now very deceased Pretty boy. "But Shenai...." I can hear you whining. Look, just shut up and keep reading. All shall be revealed.
We fly through a long space-y tunnel type thing, (That from hence forward shall be referred to as a majority of names that involve ‘Star Trek fans’) before re-opening on a shot of Tall-Blonde-and-Pretty’s hands. GASP! He lives! Seemingly puzzled himself, our protagonist groans obscenely and staggers to his feet. He appears to be in a strange little place. The easiest way to describe it is a big square wooden floor suspended in the middle of blackness, filled with useless crap. To be precise, there is a tall grandfather clock, a book shelf with its contents lying all over the place, some umbrella’s, a giant stone statue head, a stone pedestal, a tall black doorway covered in vines and a window. (WTF? An alternate dimension with a view? Gimme a break.)
Eike: (After groaning for a bit.) What the...? What’s going on... What on earth could have happened... (Eh, earth to Blonde boy. You just died. Obviously he was expecting fields of over excited virgins who objected to modest clothing, not Ariel’s Grotto. I’m just waiting for someone to sing; "Part of your world." Our hero pulls a rather stupid expression before sharing his extensive wisdom with us.) Am I dead? (I slap my forehead. Well, what do you know? Once more I have managed to find myself chained to a hapless moron for the entire game. I am just about to scream ‘DUH!’ at him in an annoyingly obnoxious way, when something even better happens. Someone beats me to it.)
Homunculus: (Not that we know who it is yet. He shall be called Mysterious Voice AKA: MV until his identity is revealed.) Bingo... Getting stabbed tends to do that to you, you know you stupid idiot. (How I wish that last part was true.)
Eike: W-Who’s there!
MV: How does it feel to be dead, Eike...?
Eike: Dammit, who is this! (He says this in a passive-aggressive way, which really sort of loses the intended effect it would have other wise had if spoken firmly. Not that MV would have particularly cared I would imagine.) Are you making fun of me? (Well come on Eike. I mean, who wouldn’t?)
MV: (Chuckles quietly to himself so Eike is well aware before hand that he is being dissed. I immediately fall in love with him. No not Eike you idiots. MV.) Not at all. I beg you’re pardon if I’ve offended you. You are strongly fated today, you see – you are destined to die...
Eike: Oh damn, I thought you were gonna say I’ll meet a hot chick. (Okay, not really. We just get a really unflattering close up of his face where his lips look too big and he says;) "What??" (Still, we have to be grateful its not Tidus’s trademark; "Huh?" which, as all Final Fantasy veteran’s will know, was a constant pain in the ass.)
MV: But if you have the will to somehow reverse that fate by yourself, I can lend you some measure of strength... How about it? Will you deal with me?
Eike: ...Thanks, but no thanks. Sounds too good to be true.
MV: Why? Can’t you trust me? (He says this in a really pervy way. Oh ew. Actually, as a confessed Yaoi fan, this could be a good thing. Or a bad thing depending on what MV looks like. I shall keep my fingers crossed.)
Eike: (Snitchily.) Of course not. I get it. You’re the big ‘S’ the devil. (Two different people Eike-y boy. And for the record, does Homy sound like someone who could be the devil? His voice is too girly!) ‘In exchange for your immortal soul’ and all that, am I right?
MV: *Amused* Your soul? Oh please... Why would I want that when I could have your body instead? (Okay, sorry. That was me.) Oh please... in this day and age? (He sound’s almost offended, like soul’s were a craze that went out ages ago. Get with it Eike.) *Snickers* If I do have an agenda, it’s that you survive.
Eike: Let me think it over a bit...
MV: Of course, of course. Go ahead. But don’t keep me waiting too long. I don’t much like to be kept any. (He lets Eike thinks for 5 seconds then starts nagging again. Dammit, man! Even I have more patience then that and that’s telling you something.) Well? What reason is there to procrastinate? You either just die here and now or you prevent it. It’s that simple. What have you got to lose? (Uh his soul?)
Eike: ...all right. I’m sorry I called you the devil. (Huh?! Someone give this guy an Academy for Needless Niceties.) I don’t want to die yet. Please, help me.
MV: All right. But I want you to be aware of something: you have to understand that the destiny that awaits you is a potent one. Which means that just because you’ve managed to avoid death once, doesn’t mean you’re free of the threat. Unless you tear out its very root, destiny can’t be cheated.
Eike: So coming back to life isn’t the hard part, huh. Man...but that can’t be helped.
MV: You’re right, but that’s also where your own strengths come into play. Are you ready? I’m going to give you some of my time-shifting powers. (Digipad falls from nowhere onto the floor behind Eike. Wow, that was a great declamation of your omnipotent powers MV. I know I’m impressed.) I’m giving you this Digipad. Please use it well. (He says this sternly, as though he has just handed a little kid a rocket launcher. Honestly, though what kind of idiot would do that? And what the hell is with that dorky name? Digipad? Pft, come on! Does it call Digimon from the digital world? Sorry MV. I love ya, but that warrant’s a riff. As does the fact that I know the Digimon lyrics, but we’re recapping Shadow of Destiny here folks, not me. Beat it. And for the record, Digipad sounds like the name for a Digimon’s sanitary napkins. Thanks Hash.)
(I now get control of Eike just long enough to pick the Digipad up. Really, what was the point of that? Stupid game designer’s.. There is an explanation on how the gamer uses it but I don’t think I need to add that here. The only bit you need to know is that the Digipad can’t be used unless it responds to phenomena that has some relevance to Eike as its user. It will respond when it is usable. The scene after that is the following one.)
MV: You can’t solve the real problem by just using it when you’re about to die. It’s better to make use of it to remove the underlying cause of your death. Oh, and one more thing.
Eike: Something else?
MV: Yes, and its very important. If the response begins in the timespace you’ve traveled out to, please come back immediately. Other people and objects can be just left in another time and stay intact, but that isn’t true for you as the user. If it starts to respond, you need to come back quickly or you won’t be able to get back at all. (Meaning if Eike stays too long in another time he goes into Time Limbo and explodes, thus getting a game over.) Just be careful of that. It looks like time is something even more serious than I know. (The double doors in the Limb open up.) Good luck... Eike...
(Eike runs through the doors and is sucked back into the Swirly hole of Star Trek fans the world over.)
(Scene 2.)
(We hear Eike groaning disturbingly for a bit and then the scene opens up to show a blonde waitress, (Quite a cutie!) looking down at him and shaking his arm. I can’t really tell from this camera angle but I pray that’s what she’s shaking.)
Waitress (Dana): Sir, please wake up. Are you all right? Do you feel sick or something? (No, just suffering from a chronic case of death dear.)
(We now get to have a look around the cafe thanks to the generous camera angles and I am stunned at how pretty the graphics are. The cakes in the display cabinet make me have weird cravings though and that’s just what I don’t need now having officially put myself on a diet. A brown suited guy and an older man in an apron, (obviously the boss) turn to look at the sleepy Eike and over concerned waitress. Some scary looking dude who is gorging Spaghetti, (In a cafe? WTF?) also stands up for a better look, partly because Eike is hotter then he is and he wants to perve on him whilst he’s unconscious.)
Dana: Sir? (She says this more insistently, because she mustn’t want the health inspector’s breathing down her neck. Don’t worry honey. He dies from being stabbed, not from food poisoning.)
(Eike wakes up rubs his eyes then suddenly leaps up and checks himself over as though making sure his wallet is still there.)
Eike: ...huh? (Welcome to Tidus land, Eike.)
(Dana watches him a little unnerved. Eike notices and finally calms down. He attempts to salvage the situation by spluttering at her in a really pathetic way. Though it is obviously too late, the damage has forever been done. This could also be used to describe the state of Eike’s brain.)
Eike: Huh? Oh, sorry. I fell asleep.
Dana: (Laughs as you would. Do I need to mention that Eike is really tall? And really attractive? No? Well why didn’t you say so?)
Boss: Dana. *Ushers her away* Dana, that’ll do.
Dana: Mm, OK. (This girl reminds me of myself in a strange way. Blonde, short skirt, waitress, tendency to laugh at other people when they do something silly. Anyway, self-diagnosis aside, Dana skirts away, (no pun intended) throwing one last glance back at Eike. Hell I would too. It’s not everyday you run into someone that cute and nice. I still can’t get over that; "I’m sorry I called you the devil," remark, Really.)
(That over with, Eike sits down, contemplates his coffee cup for a moment, then gulps down what appears to be only one mouthful of said substance before standing up again. His hands look really strange. And this coming from a girl who can’t even draw the stupid things. I hit myself firmly across the wrist.
He fishes around in his pocket and puts some change on the table.)
Eike: (Chuckles.) I, ah, I’ll just leave what I owe for the coffee here.
(Why not leave you’re phone number too Eike, that lovely little lady over there totally wants a piece of you! Do you see the lovely lady? No, not the guy in the brown suit Eike. The girl in the skirt. The girl in the- ... look, just never mind. Hmm, Eike has a really nice looking ass... okay, now I’m just getting sad. Back to the recapping. Eike stands up and exits the cafe giving us all a nice shot of his hind. This is what’s called fanservice. Get used to it, because this game runs off of it.)
(Next scene, outside.)
Eike: (Checking his watch.) 2:00... I still can’t believe what just happened. (He reaches into his back pocket and pulls out the Digipad in all its omnipotent sanitary glory.) But since I have this Digipad here, I guess it really did happen... (Mr. Obvious just beat Mr. Subtle up in the back alley. Unaware of just what a ‘Duh’ statement he made, Eike shoves the Digipad back into his pocket and the game switches to player control mode. Joy to the world, it’s about bloody time. I just hope it’s for longer then two seconds though.)
(Eike is wonderfully orgasmic to control. .... Okay, sorry that was a really terrible term to use. But seriously, this is one game that makes steering a character around an environment really enjoyable. Eike is tall with nice long legs so he runs really fast and turns really quickly. I love it. What I don’t love is the first character I run into that I can interact with. Some red dressed little shit who snitches, "What do you want?" Well fuck you too then. Is your cloak riding up Red Riding Hood? I bet you can guess what I hereby dub her. Whatever the case I leave her company with the hope of finding better. Huh, fat chance.
The next person I stop to chat with is a rather... um, unique looking individual who I suppose passes as a goth in this town. Although, goth isn’t really the best way to describe her. Love child of Kuja, Kefka and a flowery curtain would be a better description, although I don’t recall any of the above wearing a particularly vile shade of green lipstick. For some reason though, I like her too. I like any sort of individual and she certainly is one, no doubt about it. Lovable Eike, obviously mistakes her for a street performer though, because she immediately reassures him that she’s not but that the square, (We’re they are standing, in case you couldn’t guess) gets a lot of them and that they get a pretty big crowd going. Judging from the amount of people in this town I would have to say I find that hard to imagine.
I run into Red Riding Hood’s mother down the road who turns out to be just as big a pain in the ass. I escape from her clutches and return to the Square and enter the City Hall to acquire an Old City map. The great foreshadowing wizard just tossed us another clue. Thank you almighty one. I could not have guessed the significance of that alone.
The woman at the desk is wearing a pink sweater and looks pretty cute from side on. When you move around the front however she looks like a zombie on drugs and talks like one too. Eek. Skeered. Oh well, at least I got the city map. Huzzay.
Moving on. As soon as I exit the building, creepy music starts up and Eike glances behind him quickly before game play returns to normal. I guess that means the killer is skulking about again. Boy am I just shaking in my fluffy animal slippers. Or not. Still, I’d rather not get pointlessly stabbed again so I decide to quit buggering around and find something to do. Talking to an old woman in an orange sweater proves pretty damn pointless and disturbing as she asks Eike if there’s ‘Anything she can do for him.’ Eww, eww, eww. Yaoi I can handle but not pedophilia. Go back to your smut you dirty old hag.
Angry dogs are guarding certain paths into other parts of the town, stopping Eike from progressing any further. Well, he could try I suppose, but he would only get his nads bitten off and it would seem that a large amount of people in this game would be extremely upset if that were to happen. So for Eike’s own good, I back off and explore elsewhere. The town is extremely beautiful and it takes me only ten seconds to decide that I want to live there, two to realize that its not real, and three to cry retardedly before returning my attention to the problem at hand. Preventing Eike’s imminent death.
Finally I steer him off in the right direction and a cut scene starts. Eike notices a sign outside of building near the cafe saying, "Fortune’s Told.")
(Next scene: Outside Fortune-Teller’s place.)
Eike: Hmm...? Fortune’s told? I never noticed this place before. (This is another great honking clue that; "Something Freaky is going on here." Tm. After a while he enters the building, which typically has a creaky front door and a load screen pops up.)
(Next scene: Inside Fortune Teller’s place.)
Loading... loading ... ah ha! All done. What quick sweet loading times this game has! The scene re opens up in what looks very A-typical of a New Age witch shop. There are around a billion and one candles burning around the room, surprisingly not burning the room down itself and creepy ass eastern wallpaper. If this is not enough, the Fortune-Teller herself is completely hidden beneath many layers of cloaks and robes. The only visible part of her is her long blond fringe, which sticks out over a cloth that completely conceals her face. All right Konami, I think this is slightly over doing it.)
FT: Welcome. I’ve been expecting you. (She says this in a mystical airy voice as the camera pans in on her and the music takes on an unnerving beat. I decide there and then to rename her Sybil Trelawney. Anyone who’s read Harry Potter will know what I’m talking about.) I’ve been expecting you.
(Naturally, Eike does not think to assume that she says this to every single person who walks in the door, oh no. He just gasps in horror and reels back as though she just said something uncouth about his mother.)
Eike: (Nervously babbling.) Actually, I just happened to stop by and I was wondering if you could tell me my fortune. Am I going to die soon?
Sybil: For you, I will do it for free.
Eike: Thanks. I really need this. (He talks to her as though she’s a prostitute.) Please don’t just give me the usual niceties. This is very serious for me. (Like I said.)
Sybil: Don’t worry.
Eike: (Takes a seat opposite her at the little octagon shaped table beneath the peaked pink tent she has erected inside of the building. Enough with the fucking stereotypes already.) So?
Sybil: The fated hour is 2:30... (Wow that was quick! She didn’t even whip out a crystal ball or some tea leaves.)
Eike: What!?
Sybil: Whatever I foresee, you can change. If you take no action, the fate I see will befall you for certain. (Translation: You will get many game over’s.) But I seem to see in you the strength to defy fate itself.
Eike: The power to defy fate? (Meaning he is being controlled by a smart gamer with a walkthrough.)
Sybil: If for instance – and this is only an example – your fate is to be stabbed while taking a walk, after you leave this place... (Why do I somehow doubt that this is only an example?) And this would happen if you are alone at the fated hour. But if you know what awaits you, you would find people to be with, so that you would not be by yourself, unprotected.
Eike: Then what?
Sybil: If you are among others at the fated hour, the assassin must give up his quarry. (Are we supposed to just assume that these "others" would throw themselves infront of Eike to defend him from the random killer? How slim a chance is that? Who would the crowd be? Dana, Granny Pedophile and the Mysterious Voice? I doubt anyone else would be willing to get between Eike’s back and a pointy object. ... Okay, just had really, really, sick Yaoi thoughts then. Ooh bad. Bad Shenai, bad.) And fate would have been defied. But a single change will affect all else that follows it. How it changes, no one can tell... there are too many threads, too many tangles... I cannot help you with what lies so far ahead, and your actions could bring even greater danger ... But if fate can be changed, you should fight as hard as you can. If you can return here even after the appointed hour has passed, then I will tell for you the next fortune.
Eike: ...all right. I think I can trust you. (Oh I notice that you didn’t accuse her of being the Devil Eike Kusch. Hmph. Fucking favoritism.)
(Scene ends. Eike’s Digipad goes off and he travels a half-hour into the past to gather a group of people.)
(Gathering the crowd scene.)
(Eike gets swept up into this big green bubble and is suddenly back in the Swirly Wormhole of Star Trek. The screen goes black and a date pops up. We have gone back in time half an hour so we can gather a pre prepared crowd to swarm around Eike and act as a shield. Le sigh. Why couldn’t he just-? .... Oh, never mind. I know no one will answer me anyway.
Eike is dropped off in an alley infront of an angry dog. Well I know he’s not going to be of any help to me, so I leave him to snarl at thin air and run out into the square. Yes I’m a poet and I know it.
There is a blonde woman standing there in an over coat clutching onto a travel case. I swear I haven’t seen her before so naturally, I talk with her.
"Excuse me. Have you seen a man walking around here?" Is her automated response.
...
...
Well ... how am I supposed to respond to that? ‘Uh, no miss. But I did see a man crawling around here. Does that help?’ Or maybe; ‘Well, I’m a man. And I’m walking. Does that mean you’re looking for me?’ or, ‘I don’t think the game designer’s put a male NPC in the game that was programmed to move around. Sorry, can’t help you.’
Well I’m sorry but she wasn’t very specific! Even though we do find out who the man is, that sort of vague description could point to anyone! I get the feeling that she and this ‘Walking-man-who-doesn’t-actually-walk-but-we-presume-does-anyway-so-we-don’t-contradict-the-dialogue’ are running away to get married or something. Not that they can run because ....... Oh never mind.
Even my little Curtain-Goth isn’t being very helpful. She retorts that Eike is looking for a ‘Date’ and basically tells him to piss off. Honey, if Eike wanted a date, he has his pick between Dana, Mysterious Voice and Granny Pedophile. No offense but, why would he pick you for crying out loud? Eike responds by saying that Curtain-Goth looks strange and she tells him to mind his own business. Well, fuck you too. And I really thought we had something special happening.
I make Eike head on over to the Cafe so he can get over this awful rejection by hitting on Dana. Speaking of awful, I run into Red Riding Hood on the way.)
Red Riding Hood: Have you seen my mother? (What? Is she assuming that her mother and Eike are friends are something? The least the little ‘B’ can do is become part of a crowd of protection for Eike (and hopefully get knifed in the process) so he lies to her by saying her mother is at the Square. On ya Eike. Now we’re finally getting some personality out of you old chap!) OK. Guess I’ll go to the square.
(That little scene over with, I head on into the cafe. Apart from the Delightful Dana, there is a rather yummy looking specimen stretched out on the same table that Eike was stretched out on previously. Oh, it is Eike. Well, his past self anyway. I take special care not to touch him like I did the first time I played the game and ended up getting a game over in the prologue. I couldn’t help it that I wanted to see Eike touch himself! Ahem, anyway.
Dana asks Eike if they’ve met before and it sounds like she’s trying to pick up on him. I squeal in happiness. Somewhere out in the cosmos, the Mysterious Voice is getting huffy.
I talk to Dana again and she cheerfully tells Eike to sit wherever he likes, completely unaware that there are in fact two Eike’s in her presence. One for her and one for the Mysterious Voice. It all works out great! Now, if there was only one for me...
I talk to the owner who just keeps saying ‘Yes?’ at me in an Egor type way and the Brown Suited dude who doesn’t seem to do anything other then stare at the cakes for hours at a time and go; "........" Must be one of those strong silent types I hear so much about.
I spend a few seconds scaring the guy eating the spaghetti with Eike’s phone and then leave to continue my quest of creating a crowd. I am of course a little hesitant about approaching Granny Pedophile but I don’t really have a choice in the matter.)
Granny Pedophile: Hmm? You want me to come to the square at 2:30? What’s going to happen in the square? A performer, maybe? Well, all right. I don’t have anything else to do anyway. (Smiles at Eike in a really disturbing way. EW.)
(I finally find Mother of Riding Hood and Eike tells her to go to the Square to find her daughter.)
Red Riding Hood’s mother: Have you seen my girl? Oh? At the square? Oh, thank you, I’ll go find her there. (Damn. Those two will be a nightmare combined.)
Anyway the Digipad starts flashing so Eike can now return to the present. He does so and then heads on into the square where a huge crowd of ... um, three people are standing watching a street performer. A dude in a white robe juggling hacky sacks. Oh wow, how riveting. Yawn... The scary thing is the people there seem to think it is. Granny Pedophile tells Eike not to bother her and Mother of Riding Hood snaps at him to be quiet because; "She’s watching the show." Show? ... SHOW?! What freaking ‘show?!’ It’s a guy in a sheet, juggling!! Am I the only one who sees very little entertainment value in this? What is wrong with this town?! It’s freakin’ worse then Silent Hill!)
Eike: (Watching also) Hey now, here’s a guy with no worries...
(As the ‘crowd’ stands there, immersed completely in the ‘show’, a sinister shadow appears and a familiar tune of music starts up. However, the killer is apparently too fearful to approach this weird spectacle, as would most people be, and wanders away, to ponder other random acts of violence.)
Eike: There was someone behind me! (Well, no shit Sherlock. Was it the creepy music that tipped you off? Or maybe it was the ominous shadow thrown across the pavement. I can just see Eike replying with a frown; "No Shenai. It was the script." Well of course. How silly of me.) Oh, but it looks like the crowd scared him off. (Now come on Eike. Who wouldn’t that crowd scare?) That fortuneteller – she told me to come back. I should go look her up again.
(The screen goes black and the prologue ends. I save my game and chapter 1 starts up.)
Author Note: I’m going to be uploading this walkthrough/script thingie in chapters and some are quite long and have alternative decisions to make, but I’ve tried to fit as much as I can in. However, if I do display a chapter without a scene in it that you would like me to recap then review and tell me off and I’ll add it! ^^ Chapter 2 coming soon so review for now and all comments, criticism’s, suggestions and requests are welcome.
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