The Solemn (Updated Ch. 2) | By : snakeater Category: +M through R > Metal Gear Views: 1166 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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<Hey folks just taking a break from the pr0n
scene(there’s a little in here maybe some later) to write out a story I had in
my head since MGS3 was so sad to me, in fact too sad so I felt like sticking in
another character to make it have a ‘better ending’. Enjoy the show>
The Solemn, can you hear it? The sound of lives ticking away
as time has stopped but only for you.
I've found so many damn typos in my two chapters, damnit I really hate finding them :(
This story is going to take a lot of work for me as it
involves adding on ANOTHER Cobra, who has to be integrated into the story
without twisting the plot too much. So
I’ve decided to start with the origins of The Solemn. By the way, the stories
narrator switches between The Solemn himself, and a third person omniscient
view.
I just realized I HAS PLOT HOLES, somewhere Solemn states that he has blood of lives PLURAL yet I only tell you of one person that I kill, I'll get right on that folsk so calm down, because I know youre all just itching to review this pr0n free story. Most of you are here just to get a good wank aren't you? Go read my other story for that, it'll be a few chapters before you'll have anything to shake your dangle it, or other girly parts..I don't know I'm not educated in those wonderous lands of ...yes I'm not D:
“Cell disintegration rate increasing on subjects 10 and 12!
1-9 already are gone! 11 is disintegration is slowing,
but it’s already lost too many vital organs to be considered a worthy subject!”
“What about 13 and 15-18, forget the others, we aren’t here
to save lives we’re here to improve them.”
“But sir!”
“FOCUS YOUR ATTENTION ON THE ONES STILL CAPABLE OF LIVING!
The ones who are too fragmented to be considered humans will be discarded like
the rest, do you understand?”
“Yes Sir….sorry to question you.”
“How are the conditions on the higher numbers now.”
“15-18 have yet to awaken from the sleeping stage, 13 is awake but is currently in extreme pain but there is no
sign of cell deterioration.”
“This is good news; I hope that today we can finally see the
solution to the fragile lives of humanity.”
“There is still a chance, director.”
“…it hurts, the faint
light I see it causes deep pain, I can feel my life still flowing inside me, I
hear voices of those around me, I just want to sleep, I no longer see the
meaning to this holding onto what was already so worthless. Being used by
others, those who are unable to risk anything to give their sins to those below
them, their tools…such is humanity. They
cannot be forgiven, if that is my only reason to continue on living then I will
make sure they do not live or, live to never forget their transgressions upon
me…”
“Director #13 is fully conscious! His heart rate is still
erratic, should we begin Phase 3?”
“Let this one rest, his strength should be rewarded”
“…rewarded he says,
hah, to live is no longer a gift ‘Director’, if this is rewarding to you then I
would love to see your punishment or maybe I already have.”
The days that followed, are ones that I had hoped I could’ve
erased from my memory all along, I guess that’s one of the side effects of
their so called gift when you’re always growing more cells than losing it seems
my memories never faded away with time.
They always haunted me, the blood on my hands, the lives I had taken.
“Director! #13 has completed Phase
3! We finally have completed the project!”
“Don’t get to excited yet; we need to keep him here for more
testing until we are sure that he can resume his life as a human being.”
“…resume life as a
‘human being’ is he joking? His sense of humor really does stretch the mind
sometimes, what I have left is only a visual appearance of the human shell,
what you have torn from me and given to me in return can only be labeled as
inhumane. The little things, the
important few attributes all humans share, I no longer have! Yet, you still
have the gall to consider me one of you, you disgust me.”
Night fell on the research center, but not all were asleep.
I had awoken myself, with my cell growth increasing my strength had increased
but it was nothing on the level of those comic book heroes, bending steel
stopping trains all those wonderful superhuman abilities. No, I was still just
above average, I’m sure that will change after tonight. I left my cell, my cold room, the covered bed
all their life monitoring connections torn from my skin their testing equipment
left discarded still dripping the life that I no longer had a longing for. I try to forget these next hours, so I will
tell you only what I feel is necessary for you to understand my reasons for my
actions, to know why I am justified to judge them.
“Is #13 permitted to move around yet, I was quite sure the
Director insisted on him staying for testing a bit longer.” Security was
currently lax, as their seemed few to worry and all had assumed I would be
grateful for the gift given to me. Oh how wrong they were, how horrible wrong
they were.
“I’ll go check on him you hold desk here, the Director said
he was only going out for a while to celebrate, claiming his work was here”
“Send a few of the rookies with you, it will be good
experience.”
“Heh, sounds like a field trip,
babysitting has never been my thing”
“Suck it up and go already, I’m sure your seat will still be
here afterwards.”
~Time passes~
*Radio crackles*
“What’s going on down there, I’m seeing fire warnings
lighting up all over your sections are you all right?”
“Respond damnit!”
“…They’re already gone, you should get going too”
“Who are you? What have you done to them?”
“I let them live, their time to die has yet to come, and neither has yours you
may leave there is only one I shall wait for.”
Fire suddenly spreads into the control room, the security
guard flees to avoid the flames as he rushes out the nearest emergency exit he
sees his team members all staring in awe as the blaze overtakes the research
center. The director’s car pulls up to the entrance, the guards immediately
leave the scene not wishing to be put to blame.
“My research! My Subjects! Who is
behind this!” the director cries out as he sees the flaming building.
“I am, Director”
“#13, why have you done this? I have wished only the best for you, true immortality, you are now a supreme human being!”
“Foolish man, your playing with the mortal lives has taken
away the one thing that holds me to being human, and for that you must be
punished.”
“You fool! After everything you come to me with that
righteous attitude expecting to judge me? I have no use for you I can start
over now that I know the solution.”
“Can you Director, what about your research?”
“You think I wouldn’t keep copies safe for myself would you?
Your ignorance knows no bounds.”
“On the contrary Director, I was just so surprised at how
easily I found it.” He smiles as he hold up 3 folders
labeled Phase’s 1, 2 and 3.
“Give those to me right now! I made you what you are you
will follow only as I say!”
“Well, then I shall give you what you truly desire then, what all of your kind
truly desires” he walks slowly toward the director.
“Yes that’s it, you finally understand your place you shall
be r-ugh!” Is cut short as he looks down to see his own life, dripping away
with a large shard of glass embedded into his chest. “W-why…you said you would
give what I desired.”
“Director, this is what you desired immortality, time is now
yours! Hahaha” his laugh echoed in the Director’s
ears as his life faded away into the so called immortality.
No signs of life were found at the scene afterwards, it was
just a simple research center to the authorities a fire had taken the security
by surprised and a desperate scientist wishing to save his work is killed by
debris from the building. From then on,
I could continue this life taken, and the new one given to me.
<2nd Chapter is 100% on its way,
I just needed to get that backstory done>
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