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Reviews for Blood Ties

By : maiafay376
  • From ANON - ix-tab on November 20, 2006
    So freaking awesome!

    (Finally I just saw Silent Hill so I actually have a little more grasp on the random mythology of this, and it made me want to come back and read your fic again.)

    I'm so happy that there was a Chapter nine waiting for me when I came back to check.

    You already know that I love this, so I won't ramble, but I will say that I really love the way your writing is becoming tighter and better with every new chapter you write. It's super cool.
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  • From maiafay376 on November 19, 2006
    When I say edit in my summery, it only means typo's, grammer, and maybe some add-ons--dialogue switching, etc. Nothing major...so don't worry over the editing okay? LOL
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  • From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on November 19, 2006
    editing? why? and how will we know what has and had not been edited. u just want use to read it all pover again? some of use wont even remmber the first version.
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  • From ANON - Bitter Wormwood on November 16, 2006
    Your chapters seem to be getting better and better! There are really only a few stories that can hold interest for this long, and remain stimulating and thrilling, and this is definitely one of them.

    I loved the "monster", and your Walter is charmingly crafty. You portray him as being more cunning and diabolic than he sometimes appears, which is enjoyable...and you manage to make him both sexy and scary. He's this way in the game, of course, but it's not a thing that's easily reproduced in fiction, sans ambient game noises and visuals.

    And I do indeed feel sorry for Daniel. I certainly assume that someone is going to find out what he's unwittingly done, and then the poor boy will *really* be in trouble. *evil giggle* Poor guy. . . .
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  • From PyramidHead316 on November 15, 2006
    For his sake, I hope Daniel's either a good liar or smart enough to blame that on Walter. ;)

    He's in a bad situation as it is. There's no way he'll be able to resist anything Walter has planned for him if he gets stuck inside a jail cell or padded room. And since nobody actually saw him kill Andre...

    That's harsh, I know. But he's got to find some way to gain the upper hand on Walter. That might be what Walter's hoping for in the first place: that Daniel gets put in a place from where there's no escape. If he can BS his way out of this one, even for a little while, he damn sure better take the option.

    Of course, that's assuming it is Andre and that someone will come in and get a look at what Daniel did to him. But right now, it's looking pretty grim.
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  • From ANON - Rainbows on November 14, 2006
    You know, I'm beginning to feel bad for Walter. A friend just convinced me that all he wanted was a 'mommy' and now I'm all... "Well, shit. Daniel, go wake mommy up. :[" I'm sorry, that's the first thing I thought towards the end of this chapter.

    He's stuck in the otherworld now, right? Bodies can't exactly change like that in reality. -sigh- Poor Daniel's in for a world of hurt. He's got to be one of my favorite OCs, ever. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - nightmaremuse on November 14, 2006
    RE 9: Flip of the Coin

    *eye twitch*
    I could tell something like this was going to happen! Actually, my first impression was that the butt-ugly creature would have killed Andre, and after Daniel had killed the monster, Frank would rush in and see Andre's body and Daniel, covered in blood and weilding a baseball bat. Either way, I think Daniel might be a little screwed! Now the question remains; is Andre really dead? Was that creature really him? Will Daniel be caught and sent to a padded cell where Walter can torment him for the rest of his life? The questions need answers!

    Loved Frank's reactions. I can just picture him raising an eyebrow when Daniel is yelling about how he isn't on drugs. Yep, rational man, our Daniel. And yay, Melanie is back! *smile* The whole idea of this raging conversation in the middle of a corridor early in the morning made me giggle.

    Glorious! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - sephykoi on November 14, 2006
    Review for Chp 9:

    ... Oh. Shit.

    ~the seph
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  • From ANON - Mel on November 13, 2006
    Da-yum... O_O The last bit of this chapter was intense. The creature Andre became was very vivid and fit him well... the mallet-like arms. I like the signifigance from that. ;) I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter... how Daniel will deal with what he's done. Oh man... I can already see the angst.

    Loved every minute of it, dear. Keep it up! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kage on November 13, 2006
    Nice little twist, I can't wait for the next part. Walter seems like he's having fun.
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  • From ANON - Eleena on November 12, 2006
    I knew it! I knew it was Andre!! Hmm... unless it's not really Andre and Walter's just playing a trick on Daniel...

    Either way, this chapter is sooo luff! Melanie's addorable... though those bunnies of hers creep me out. XD

    And any chapter with Walter in it is awesome.
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  • From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on November 12, 2006
    RUN daniel RUN!
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  • From ANON - zuka on November 12, 2006
    oh please do update soon that was a very good chapter and i cant wait for me. please update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Rainbows on November 10, 2006
    So, he's ready to accept Mother, then?

    I seriously love this story. It's just so... fantastic. I actually felt like crying while reading this chapter. Poor Daniel. -sigh- He's not going to get a very happy ending.

    Yes, my reviews give +12 writing skills.
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  • From PyramidHead316 on November 07, 2006
    WOW! Just...wow! That chapter was certainly worth the wait. :)

    I was very intrigued by the 'flashback' to Walter's parents. You really captured the helplessness Daniel was feeling, seeing all that and being able to nothing to help. I was also very surprised at how events actually transpired. I almost feel sorry for Walter now, knowing what really happened to his parents in this story, that he was robbed of his family by that thing; almost being the key word. He's still an evil bastard now, regardless of his tragic origins. Regardless, now we have a greater understanding of him, and of the "Mother" he worships so fervently.

    I'm hoping Daniel will get up in Frank's face. He's just been through hell, he's found yet another pair of Room 302's victims, and it's only going to get worse from here. I can understand Frank's desire to just ignore the room's ominous nature and pretend like nothing out of the ordinary happens there. But the room is a huge threat to everyone in the building including himself. Ignoring it isn't going to make the evil there go away, and it's sure not going to help him whenever Walter or his "Mother" decide to take things to the next level. Maybe Frank just needs to see it for himself, but getting angry with Daniel isn't going to accomplish anything. And after everything he's been through, I think Daniel's entitled to chew out the old man a little.

    After all, how understanding can you be when you've got an undead killer, his demonic rival, and their even more demonic "Mother" on your ass? ;)
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