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Reviews for ARAAT2: Eclipse - Part 2

By : Breech_Loader

From SonicShadowFan89 on September 12, 2007
Wow! Great chappie! I've actually been reading your story for a while now, but I never had an account on here until now. I decided that I should post a review on here, since I've been reading it a lot lately. I really love your story and I'm usually not a big Shadamy fan, or a SonRouge for that matter. I'll make an acception for this story though. The description and all the suspense is just too much to pass. I love reading this story no matter what. Even all the torture Shadow went through. Yeah... Shocking. But it's still good. Plus, everyone seems to want to torture Shadow anyway. I'm used to it by now.XD I still felt really bad for him though.:( But don't think I hate you. I trully love what you've come up with for this story and I can't wait to read more of it!:) It always interests me when fanfiction writers make up their own characters like Mirage and Ashura for instance. Oh... And lets not forget Eclipse.;) Anyway... I'd review more right now, but I can't help but read the next part of this story. I guess it would be the fourth story in this series. Wow... You sure wrote a lot so far. And there's more to come!^^ Yayz! Ahem... Anywho... I'll talk to ya later then. Keep up the awesome work!;) Bya!
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From ANON - Lans on June 26, 2006
This was great. I really love this series, and I'm glad you're continuing it. However, don't neglet your other stuff! Still looking forward to updates on the Backstabber universe and At the End of the Tunnel
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From HeartOfDarkness on June 24, 2006
That was a nice ending, Everything is starting to return to peace. Well, It least I hope. I can't wait to see what happens next so i'll be cheeking out part three now. Thanks for answering my review though, that ment a lot to me.
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From HeartOfDarkness on June 19, 2006
Why do you do this?
It just doesn't make an sense.

As I was reading this chapter, it hit me like a rock. Why do you two work so hard and spend so much of your time on this wonderful story, even though it's only a small part of peoples lives? Sure it has a large hit count and it gets a few reviews everytime a chapters put up. But ones you think about it, people only treat it a small part of there life so they can enjoy themselfs for an amount of time. From what i've seen, you two seem to give your life in to writing this story and spend a huge amount of time just trying to update once a week, just to make them happy. Is this what it's like to care for something you believe in? I still have a lot to learn.

Rouge was very different, she thought of someone other then her self. Shadow and Amy were able to overcome the pain of losing everything they care about and now are starting over. Happy, As one. Is this what push's you to keep writing? the fact that even though everthings not what it seems, but there is love in the end? I'm sorry if i'm asking to much and it really is not my place to ask. But I feel that I should speak these anyway. I simile back knowing that even though I do not fully understand, but that a new beginning to a loving story is just over the hill.

HeartOfDarkness.
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From ANON - funk man on June 19, 2006
Good work! but you should really do better next time. I waited a whole week for this! the sex is good yes....but there was nothing creative in this chapter. Even ME! the stupid, annoying, uncreative funk man could have done something like this. Where's the good stuff that caught my attention before, this chapter wasn't that great! If you are going to make a third one, please, PLEASE, make it good, make me leave good reviews like before. You'll probably hate me after leaving a review like this but I'm just stating the facts, it's as simple as this, good chapter=good review from funk man.
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From ANON - H�ous on June 12, 2006
How the hell can you store the sheer amount of information present in the brain onto a DVD?!?!

Finally, the pain is hopefully over. I mean, the past I-don't-know-how-many chapters have been nothing but pain, pain, pain, and it eventually gets tiring. I didn't squirm, I just found myself yawning through some parts. If I want to squirm, I'll just look at a harlequin fetus or that wonderful image on cherrycake.org.

Don't have much to say for this week; hopefully next week will be a bit more of a fresh change.
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From ANON - Vincent on June 12, 2006
I really like the new chapter. You really get a sense through the writing and almost sink into the characters in this one as Shadow's pain builds. The 'final side-effect' being the tip of it where you feel released after he does. You don't know what will happen and it is much better that way. A nice touch as well to say it was near the end of the story as that set into motion thoughts that it could end with his offing. You can have an ARAAT3 without him. Just be harder and likely darker if possible. But for some reason...I don't see his troubles over quite yet. Call it a hunch with this series. :)
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From ANON - funk man on June 10, 2006
This story just keeps getting better and better, is shadow rid of the drugs now? or is the worst yet to come? will gun fall with the info that amy obtained from eggman? will shadow ever marry amy? will sonic finally be forgiven and will the flower shop inccident be forgoten? do I ever shut the hell up? NO! Interesting story though Harley, it makes waiting a week worth it. But waiting so long eats me up inside. You should add more chapters!
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From HeartOfDarkness on June 10, 2006
Yay. ^_^
Shadows feeling better now. Well, things seem to be getting better now but I have a feeling thats it has a long way too go.
I'm sure Eclipse will show up in the next chapter and I wonder how he's doing so far.
Anyway, very good chapter. I hope to see the last chapters soon before you move on with the next part. :)

HeartOfDarkness.
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From ANON - BZLF on June 10, 2006
From how that is described, it sounds like a Chaos Blast. Does this mean he may soon also learn the Chaos Spear as well? If you've no idea what I am referring to.. go play Shadow The Hedgehog!
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From ANON - N/A on June 10, 2006
Now this is more like it! Length, tenuosly romantic stuff, realism, and power! An excellant return to form, and I mean that. Now if only all the chapters were like that.

The big problem you seem to hve (well, had if it continues in this vein) is the chapters concentrated on one thing too much (one instance of Shadows symptoms for example. (chapter 16)), wheras this one stretched it out over a somewhat longer and wider variety of the symptoms. Keep it up, this is chapter is a good omen!
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From ANON - Miss. Anonymous on June 08, 2006
Oops, I thought I was logged in, but the Anonymous person for the previous was me Miss. Anonymous. Sorry.
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From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2006
I never reviewed for this story before because I always told myself to wait till the end, but I can't seem to help it. When I read you're first story ARAAT it was amazing. I never believed a ShadowxAmy related fanfiction can be done or written so well. My favorite chapters were one and four through six. I even go back and read it from time to time. The only problem I had was the whole Sonic raping Amy thing. Personally I don't believe he could ever do something like that. But I liked how you explained the idea that Sonic�s animalistic side was invoked. Nice!

For part two of ARAAT...Well like I always say "the sequel to a good book is never as great as the first." I understand the need to add extra violence and angst because nothing sweet can last forever. I was expecting ShadowxAmy to run into problems with GUN or Eggman eventually but I thought they were more interested in Eclipse, more so then Shadow. After all a child can more easily be tamed.

I hate to say this, oh I really do, but ARAAT2 is not as entertaining as the first. It does has its moments and I still remain a faithful reader but I don't feel the same dramatic moments it once had...There isn�t enough sex. I'm just kidding...Half kidding.

Well to rap up this review I would just like to say that your first story did inspire me write a adult Sonic fiction of my own. It may not be as popular like yours . It�s about Shadow and Sally, not the most popular pairing right now. And I seriously doubt I could make the sex scenes as sizzling as ARAAT, but god help me I'm going to try.

-Till next time Harley and Froggy, much love.
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From kittynakajima on June 06, 2006
Chao as test subjects? Damn...

The odds are definitely not in Shadow's favor in the moment, especially given his eerie hallucingetic vision from the previous chapter. You had me so convinced he had done Amy in until near the end of the chapter.

And god, of all the people that she could have asked to escort her for the rendevous with Eggman, why Sonic? Given Shadow's state of mind, he should probably be one of the last few people she speaks to; Shadow is floating between her love and visions of her being unfaithful with Sonic helping out.

And from the looks of it, I doubt any of this is going to be resolved and happy dandy in the next chapter. But that makes for a good read, so keep up the good work. :D
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From HeartOfDarkness on June 05, 2006
Well, this chapter did fill in the info Amy needs about Shadow. I wonder what will happen to him.
Another twist in the story I say. Lets just hope Shadow makes it out ok, but knowing you guys, that might be a problem. :P
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