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Reviews for Enigma's Mass Effect Smutfics

By : elegyenigma
  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2009
    Whee, new Engimafic! And I must say, this one is VERRRRY good. Although, one question: I notice you said that Just Business was up...*sounding like Duke Nukem* where is it? Again, loved it!
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  • From ANON - Clayface on January 29, 2009
    Dear DiScOrD tHe LuNaTiC,

    That's a lame idea. All stories end up with straight sex, which is why when I suggested the Gianna story I specified oral only. It's not meant to be some happy "hey we helped eachother now lets fuck". It is strictly a blackmail story where only Shepard is satisfied, and that's the point, Gianna is being blackmailed.

    The current summary for "It's Just Business" is perfect as is, and I hope Enigma has the sense to keep it that way. After all, every other story in this "collection" will have straight sex.

    I wonder if any of the stories will have anal, Tali seems to be quite the whore so maybe she'll get some.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2009
    I'll throw in my $0.02 and say that for Gianna/Shepard why not change it from "If you want my help, gimme a BJ" to them meeting up in the bar later, after all the attendant business of processing the crook is over but before the Normandy leaves, and just some straight-up sex as repayment. Neither of them expecting anything but a great O, no emotions, no attachment, just a good, solid fuck. Maybe have Shepard throw in a crack afterward about her still owing him a beer.;)
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  • From ANON - Roger Wilco on January 28, 2009
    Amazing story very well written only one problem.

    BLARG CLIFFHANGER!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2009
    great story, very well written. u really got a talent, so thanks for sharing it with all of us
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  • From ANON - david on January 01, 2009
    DAMN YOU lol goddamn you now how to write lemons
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2008
    You write really good and all, but where are the lesbian pairs?
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  • From ANON - Hexadeximal on December 27, 2008
    First off, let me say that I personally think you are one of the best writers on this site. That's not brown-nosing, that's the truth. Your stories are the most descriptive, your grammar is impeccable, and your portrayal of the characters is the most believable I've seen. You are clearly a professional, and I honestly can't think of any decent criticizm for what you've done so far... With the exception of those BLOODY CLIFFHANGARS! xD But, as an aspiring writer, I understand their importance and respect your masterful use of them. Anyway, I am truly looking forward to the next part of Tali's story, and I hope you'll do more with her in the future.

    As a suggestion, what about something with Tali and Liara? I kind of have this little fantasy of Liara forced into A realy submissive position by...well anybody really. But I'd really like to see some D/s action with Liara as the "s". Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Sincerely,
    Hexadeximal
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2008
    Damn, looking through the reviews today, I realize that even though I thought I reviewed this one already, I, um, apparently didn't. Well, let me review it now. IT RULES!
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  • From Shaidar on December 12, 2008
    This is amazing. I love you (not in a gay way) and you're my hero. Your representation of Tali is amazing, and it's now what I think of when I play Mass Effect, now that I'm replaying it. ...It's kind of frustrating really, since I can't do anything with her in-game. >.< I am sad that I have to still wait longer for the rest of it, but that's okay, I can do that. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2008
    Fuck you on the ending! Good work btw, but fuck that ending! I'll wait 4 u till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Clayface on December 10, 2008
    HOT!!!

    That was clever of you to put them in the decontamination chamber, of course this completely ignores the fact that any exchange of bodily fluid is an exchange of microbes as well.

    "It's Just Business", I like the description and eagerly await the posting of of the story.
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  • From ANON - fenrir7139 on December 03, 2008
    I LOVE this story, dude! You HAVE to keep writing them! You are one bad-ass son of a bitch, and I hope you have a very happy christmas/hannuka/kwanzaa!
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  • From Okamialucard on November 27, 2008
    Great stories. They're well written out and provide a vivid picture of what your trying to get across. Just one thing how about FemaleSheperd/Ashley/Liara. Its one of the things they should of added into the game but didn't i mean Jade Empire had the two girls one guy. (but no three girls), Why couldn't mass effect have the two girls one guy or three girls. So just once i'd like to see this kinda thing from mass effect (because i haven't read a story with it yet.)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2008
    Dude, that's some pretty funny shit in your a/n's. I assume from the happier tone you've procured gainful employment? Keep 'em comin', and I'll keep reviewin' 'em.
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