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Reviews for Shattered

By : Koori
  • From ANON - lolu on December 08, 2013
    Awesome update! Your stories are awesome to the bone! I love them !

    Ha, Pa would go crazy if he knew the damage to his kids came from the hand of Vance and Foster D:
    I want to keep on Reading on and on!
    Excellent work as usual!!

    P.s: I wanted to let you know, that I had reviewed your other stories last year (Brothers and Hell Cavern) as 'loli' , but that loli is me :3
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  • From ANON - Althea on December 02, 2013
    Omg this story just keeps getting better and better and I am so not ashamed of saying that I cried at the end of this chapter. Poor Nathaniel what is going to do? :D I can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - Demmu on December 01, 2013
    OMG I had to read it three times in a row it was so good!!!! What perfect developments and I already LOVE their father even more!
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  • From ANON - lolu on December 01, 2013
    haha it seemed I checked right after you uploaded!
    I am so sad!! Why did they have to say goodbye? I want more Foster in the story goddamnit! :(
    Though I'm also eager to know what happens with Nathaniel and the rest of the family; including Sara's story and everything!
    I don't want this to end!! jgnhjkfgnhj so awesome words can't describe! I love it!
    Thank you for the awesome updates; I hope you keep them coming !
    Cheers! Best of luck

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  • From ANON - Tyreon on November 25, 2013
    I was hoping you would cover Foster's death at some point. I was curious as to how he really ended up in the hands of the LK - now it makes sense.

    I absolutely loved this update. I read it last night and I had to read it again this morning. The excitement with the baby was very well written, and I can imagine Foster's turmoil at being shot by his own father. I mean, you know he expected it but having it actually happen is a whole different story.

    Thanks for the quick updates lately, by the way. Can't wait for the next one. (:
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  • From ANON - lolu on November 25, 2013
    god damn!! They should have killed Vance when they had the chance!!!! He was right there! jfgnhjkgfnhjk oh my!
    What an intense chapter D: I love your updates!
    I don't want Foster to go away!! Please let him stay :(
    Oh my; I'll be so sad when this story ends...
    Great update as usual! I hope to see another one soon :) Best of luck!.
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  • From ANON - Tyreon on November 18, 2013
    Woot another update! You're on a roll! :P

    I love the Nathaniel/Foster bond you have going. And you portray the death knight struggle epically! Also, I had a feeling Omelet would end up being someone's mount, haha.

    Thanks for the greatness!

    -Tyreon
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  • From ANON - lolu on November 18, 2013
    This was an awesome chapter!!
    Opposite of what Demmu said; I really want to see Foster heal together with Nathaniel! Please don't let him go away!
    I am so fond of you characters! I don't want this story to end D: Can't wait for next chapters aaaand for part three of Brothers!
    I am so eager to know what happens once they arrive home, and what will happen with Sara's baby!
    Keep up the fantastic work!


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  • From Demmu on November 17, 2013
    This was a really awesome update, so full of exciting tension! I can't wait to see Foster really snap.
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  • From Demmu on November 10, 2013
    Oh add me in game if you like abia#1243 :)
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  • From ANON - Tyreon on November 04, 2013
    As a side note to my last review - I had forgotten I spelled it "Tyrion" on this site! Oh well. My usual online alias is Tyreon, so I'm sticking with that. Still the same me though! :P
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  • From ANON - Tyreon on November 04, 2013
    Poor, poor Nathaniel! He always manages to get himself into trouble. So glad Foster was there to save the day though... was waiting for him to come to the rescue as soon as the attack started!

    I had wondered what Nignath's reaction would be if she were to run into Foster as a death knight. Now my curiosity is sated. (:

    Sorry for the lack of reviews lately - busy with real life and what not. I was super excited to see all the updates since last time, though.

    Thanks for updating! Looking forward to more, as usual!
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  • From ANON - lolu on November 04, 2013
    I'm so glad to have checked! Sorry for not reviewing before; I was waiting for uploads and forgot to check back! D:
    Those were intense chapters! Can't wait for more!
    I felt sorry for Nathaniel breaking like that again; falling to his 'slutty-side'; but I'm glad everything went better tan expected.
    As usual; awesome chapters! Keep up the great work!
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Demmu on November 03, 2013
    YAY I LOVE YOU!!!! Can't wait for the next one!!
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  • From ANON - Demmu on October 20, 2013
    Yay i'm just so happy you updated!!! I check almost every day!! Sara is my favorite character btw--- she's just so spunky!
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