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By : Koori
  • From ANON - Tyrion on April 15, 2013
    Is it creepy that I review every chapter? It's probably creepy. Oh well! :D

    Your work is pure awesome, as usual. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Lolu on March 10, 2013
    Hoorray for stalking! :D
    hahaha just kidding :) I am so glad you returned! And with an awesome chapter too!!
    Thrilled to see new chapters up; I promise I'll stop stalking :P
    It's just that your stories are too great !
    Keep up the excellent work, I hope you update soon :D
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  • From ANON - Tyrion on March 09, 2013
    YAY you updated! I should be ashamed to admit I've been checking back every other day, but hey, take it as a compliment. :P Love the chapter, as usual, and I can't tell you how relieved I am that Vance finally got what he deserved. (Totally did a fist pump at that part.)

    Loyally waiting for another update, as usual.

    -Tyrion
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  • From ANON - lolu on February 23, 2013
    I'm so glad to bave checked your profile :) I saw your update as of 1/06/13 ! hah so glad that you will
    continue with this awesome story!
    Yay for Foster!! :D
    I'm eager to find out what happens net! Hope you post soon :)
    Cheers! Keep up the great work and happy new ( a bit late) year! :P
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  • From ANON - Tyrion on January 29, 2013
    Yay, Foster to the rescue! It's about time! :D Sorry for the wait on the review, haven't had the time to check back lately. Loved the chapter, as usual!
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  • From ANON - lolu on December 26, 2012
    Merry Christmas to you too! :)
    Oh my!!!!!! whaaaa-t ! I am completely blown away by the turn of events!!!! such a great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
    I'm glad you could upadte ;)
    Cheers and keep up the excellent work!!
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  • From ANON - lolu on December 18, 2012
    Yay! Another chapter :D
    I can't help myself, I check oftenly to see if you update!
    Glad our reviews cheer you! I hope you can continue writing even though Christmas and New Year's Day are coming up -and which by the way I wish you a happy new year and merry christmas!! :)

    I seem to find Vance sometimes a character to really hate upon, and some other times he kind of entertains me (being so mean, bossy and horny around Nathaniel)!
    Can't believe this new encounter ! Why?! Can't wait for a new update to find out what happens next!

    Cheers! keep up the exceleent work, as usual ;)
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  • From wanderingaddict on December 11, 2012
    I don't usually leave reviews on this type of story. Hurt/comfort and ladybois aren't really my cup of tea - I mean, not the cross dressing per se (like, Foster squeezing into a too-small sexy!Nurse outfit I can totally get behind!)(lol oops, pun intended?). I'm just more into... like, fight scenes and confrontation and shit. not judging or condemning or anything, just a reason for why I may/may not comment on anything is all - it's just not my cup of tea and so I don't feel like I can leave anything worthwhile :). but lawlz, I did want to say that imagining Vance, at the end of the story, living out Deni's words in a self-fulfilling prophecy, happily committing to being Foster and Nathaniel's shared... er... ladyboi slut. hah! hahaha! an amusing turn of karmic justice is all. basically I think Deni was incredibly awesome as a banshee. I love the way you write them as just completely nonchalant, floating through walls and just being mildly impartial observers, at times almost seeming straight-up subversive and making me wonder how loyal any of them actually are - especially with awesome lines like where they *all* burst into laughter as Deni's form crumples (and I totally imagined the banshee death animation there and was like "omg how much of that was real and how much of it was staged, either by Deni (who's clearly not loyal and free-willed) or by her twisted sisters (who are happy to help if only to torment Vance?)). it was just a rad scene there, altogether, that I decided I liked so much I had to leave a review :P


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  • From ANON - Lolu on December 10, 2012
    Wow now that was unexpected! Poor Deni :(
    Your story never ceases to amaze me! I love the course that it has taken!! Can't believe she revelaed the secret; thought there is no point in trying to make a DK love... or is it?? Suspense is killing me!
    I am always looking forward for new updates; and the fact that I read (yes, took me long to realize but finally did) that you are going for a 'Brothers 3' makes me so happy!!!
    I so wanna know how everything ends :D
    Best of luck!! :)
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  • From ANON - Tyrion on December 10, 2012
    You know, I almost wanted to feel sorry for Vance this chapter... Almost. Ha. Gotta say I love the Foster twist - how ironic that Vance just ordered Foster tortured too. Sucks for Vance! He totally deserves the misery though, lol.

    Anyway, I'll stop rambling now. Great chapter as usual!
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  • From ANON - Happilyevernever on December 05, 2012
    Awwww. You said you got no reviews last week. That sucks. I was too busy to review, but your stuff is neat. Finished all your stuff on ff.net and followed you here. I wanna know what becomes of the brothers, broken little things that you have turned them into. The abuse is graphic and I won't say I love reading it, but I don't mind it. You have the story going this dark, I want to see what happens to them next. It cant be bad forever, and if it can be, then at least it will be entertaining if you are the one telling the story. I also haven't forgotten Nates kiss with Brightwing. I want to know if they will ever see one another again. Curiosity will keep me checking back. Hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - Tyrion on December 03, 2012
    Yay you updated! I'm almost ashamed to admit I've been checking back every day to see if you had, haha.

    The dark tone definitely isn't pushing me away! I didn't leave you a review last chapter to keep from looking, hmm, stalker-ish? xD Anyway, I have to say when I first found this story, I definitely didn't expect it to take this turn from Brothers - which is definitely not a bad thing. Hopeless moments always do make the happier moments all the sweeter.

    Thanks for the awesome story! Glad to see you're getting more hits this time.(:
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  • From ANON - lolu on December 03, 2012
    aaaand again my review was cut short for some strange reason! I apologize for the 'double post' .
    here is the rest:


    Regarding this new chapter; Pheeeeww, I waited so long for this one (or so it seemed)!
    I checked as often as I remembered and you seemed to have disappeared!
    I'm glad you didn't, and I hope that everything is ok :) I like the turn you gave, Deni helping him in that way ! Wasn't expecting that at all :O
    Pleaaaasee I beg of you, if It isn't much to ask, write more!!!! Your stories are so engaging that just one chapter seems so little D: I adore your style and everything !
    Greetings and keep up the excellent work! :)
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  • From ANON - lolu on December 03, 2012
    I'm so sorry! I had wanted to review but forgot (between everything I had to do here at home; i've been running crazy!)
    About what you wondered, yes, I too have read your story Borthers, and it kills me to see them both suffering again after all they had to go through! So sad! (I read all of your other stories too, and I must tell you that they are stunning
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  • From ANON - Tyrion on November 07, 2012
    Ooooh and I thought I hated Vance in the first story! Ugh. Poor Nathaniel... and poor Foster.

    Can't wait to see what else you've got in store for us!
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