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Reviews for A Rose And A Thorn

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - Emperor Jaden on July 10, 2006
    Abosuletly Great Story! Love it...Amy and Shadow are personally my favourite pairing. I've read this story so many times I've lost count actually, I like it that much. I have not had the chance to read ARAAT2 or ARAAT3 yet. As my computer has been kinda funky. No the less though, Great Story!
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  • From ANON - Mlz23 on June 18, 2006
    I know this story is finished, but I am currently reading it and I just want to say that it's awesome! This chapter made me love Shadow even more than I used to! It was great how you made the scene(in ch.10) work out, it was perfect! I also loved how Shadow comforted Cream after what happened =] Keep writing more awesome fanfics!
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  • From ANON - The Penis on January 17, 2006
    I love this fic.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Fan on January 12, 2006
    They had the baby!!! I'm so happy for Shadow and Amy. Yay. I wonder what Sonic is going to do know? I can see Shadow and Amy being together. I can see them walking in the park and the baby with them. It is a cute thought. Just wanted to tell you that I might start on a story one day. Its just that I'm not good at writing stories with Drama or Romance or Mistery. I just need to get some tips from you. Your stories are my favorite and I decided that you might give me some ideas. Like I said I MIGHT make a story if I'm good at making them.
    I love A Rose and A Thorn its kicks ass
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  • From ANON - Kuroko on January 09, 2006
    I think you've done an excellent job all around. Now personally, I've enjoyed your Rouge/Sonic scenes more, although I'm not what you'd call a Rougic shipper, in the least bit. I'll only suggest that you explore more of what exactaly Sonic is feeling as apposed to the confusion it causes him. You've certainly created an interesting parallel between what's going on with both couples, but they haven't seemed to realize it. My only dissappointment has to be that I feel like the Amy/Shadow romance is being shoved down my throat. Maybe it's because I'm not really actively for or against any pairings, but it's getting a bit tiresome to see Sonic continually made out to be the bad guy who's crashing down on Shadow and Amy's relationship. You've done a really great job and I'm not trying to bash you at all, but just as a bit of constructive critisism, I think you should lighten up on how much you portray Amy and Shadow to be the victims, because you don't want it to take a nasty turn to being a sob story of their beingunaccepted. Thanks for reading, and keep up your good work.
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  • From HeartOfDarkness on January 05, 2006
    Very nice ending. Well, i'm going to read the second fic. ;)
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  • From ANON - Fairy-Peacock on January 04, 2006
    Hey Breech, Hi James, it's me Fairy.
    I'm obviously going to review now, because I thought I had skipped that epilogue, but I didn't.

    Your story is well put together and flows nicely along. I wouldn't really consider it as "NC-17" even though there is sex, it's not that hardcore, but a story doesn't have to hardcore to be good, does it? I guess the first time I stumbled on your story, it was by accident, but I'm glad I did. This story may lack figuartive lanuage but it really looks like you explore the personality of each main character, from Amy, to Shadow, to Sonic and Rouge (who are main). It made it seem that you dug into Amy's head and exposed all her inner thoughts, including Shadow at the time he was nearly dead in that hospital. You just have away of keeping your readers interested (even me, who has a very short attention span). And you are right a bit. From all the ShadAmy stories I read, this one is very original. Mostly, it's either after they are married or after Sonic Heroes.
    You also make the characters contary to their usual personality, like Sonic. I wouldn't think you two would acutally make Sonic rape Amy. That was superb, you caught me off guard there, like a good writer should do. I'm so amazed at the way you make this story simple but elegant and intresting. You notice you don't go into unnersscary detail, you two just went straight into it. I think it's called "beating around the bush."
    Even though there is no solid plot to your story (maybe the end), I enjoyed reading it. It most have taken months to finish it and you two surely put some hard work into you. Thank you both for the great story that I enjoy reading.
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  • From ANON - DemonWatermelon on January 03, 2006
    This is EASILY the best fic in this section. I didn't intend to read the whole thing, but I sat down and did it anyway. I think it's amazing that you managed to not only come up with a plot that long and intricate, but actually carried through and maintained it to the end. The sex scenes were also amazing, since you managed to make it descriptive, but without being overly detailed and anatomical. Cool shit.
    I'll be reading the sequel as well.
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  • From AntwerpsRule on January 01, 2006
    hmmmmmmmmmm....

    Firstly, happy fucking new year
    I'm stull stunned, you took that dark chapter you left us in and made a big warm and fuzzy chappy to follow it. *If you discount all the negativity twoards Sonic anyway
    Long story short...you guys...well, you know what your doing. I've said it before, and I'll say it again. This is the kind of thing that people are gonna remember.
    I still want to know who the father is though... Even thought Shadow has a damn good idea (and reason to have it) there's still enough uncertainty here.
    Respectfully yours,
    AntwerpsRule

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  • From ANON - the purple haired molly on December 31, 2005
    hey guys,
    molly, anna, (i dont care), is here, and i just wanted to say good job o nthe compeltion of the story. it was very good, and yeah. the whole rouge and sonci thing, unexpected, btu then again im anna im clueless and i have no feeligns. well now i dont. i ve gone goth. yes my hair is purple, and i am wearing blakc. yes theres studs and i got my liped peirced. i feel ive learned nothign form this story, but isnt tthat the point, to mindlessly read, enjoy the the story, and learn nothing? i mean was there a moral??? any way email me when the sequal coems around

    kbye
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2005
    HOLY SHIT!!!! THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!
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  • From Ano on December 31, 2005
    Yay! Thank you for updating. Don't worry as long as they come up i will be happy. I'm not gonna push you any harder
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  • From ANON - Anonymous fan on December 30, 2005
    Wow, chapter 15 really finished off the story quite well. The last three chapters were brilliant, much better than the otherShadamy fics where it ends in sex. Although I think Knuckles might have understood Sonic a bit better, this chapter was amazing.
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  • From HeartOfDarkness on December 30, 2005
    Very nice. So the last chapter will be up next week. Can't wait to see it. Also, good job on this weeks chapter.
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  • From Xtra on December 30, 2005
    Ooooh, a sequel, interesting. Anyways, great work on the last 2 chapters.
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