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Reviews for A Rose And A Thorn

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  • From ANON - Koey Heades on December 23, 2005
    1/4 of the child being Sonic's. 3/4 of the child being Shadow's. AND COME ON, LET SHADOW LIIIIVE. I the childs a girl. Great Chapter, other than the tragedy ( almost sob ). And ROUGE had the nerve to sudgest an abortion. Hell. And don't let Shadow die, let that be a New Years Resolution.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2005
    Damn, now I feel sorry for everybody. Just when I was hating Sonic, this chapter goes and actually make me feel sorry for him. Shame on Rouge! That !!!

    Another great chapter and I hope the baby is Shadow's. And Rouge gets her upcomings.

    (P.S. to Harley: You are SO right about what you said in your author notes before this chapter. That's why I stopped writing for that website for a while...)
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  • From ANON - A fan of the Sonic series on December 23, 2005
    Yes... There is a massive number of noobs at fanfiction.net, just by looking at the spelling... But even if sometime it could be a little better, some of them have great idea that just make people smiling. And of course, there's some fics who are great work. Reviewers can also have strange tastes... But usually, a reviewer who loggd in to review will give a good review.

    Still, I'll never understand why noobs don't bother to spell-check. English is not my first language, and it seems I write at least two times more better than them... another mystery of the universe...

    For the fic now...

    The chapter was great. And Sonic finally seem aware of the shit he has done. I know he can be a moron sometimes, but he's still good at heart.

    But please, don't you think enough shit has happened? I mean, I know a fic must keep the readers waiting for the next chapter, but does it means they must always have more and more problems? Beside, I'm pretty sure Shadow is alive, and that Amy's baby is from Shadow. You can't be mean enough to kill Shadow and let Sonic be the father, right?

    ...

    Right?


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  • From ANON - RAW19 on December 21, 2005
    does preg stand for pregnant? oh my god! rape, attempted murder, broken knees, and maria?! that was some messed up shit! and i can't wait for the next part!
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  • From ANON - Ed on December 21, 2005
    I've followed this story for three months and haven't reviewed once... that's sad.

    Let's see... The portrayal and development of Shadow & Amy (and more recently Soinc and Rouge) are brilliantly done. It never ceases to amaze me how you've taken a flat character like Amy and a an attributively twisted character like Shadow and migled them together so well. Soinc's naivety makes for many hilarious moments and Rouge's craftiness creates a lot of suspense. In short, this story has everything: Romance, drama, humour, and suspense.

    The plot of this story is incredible. The twists keep the story engaging and the insights into the characters thoughts keeps one informed, yet begging for more.

    Top notch work, Harely and Froggy. I'll stop now before I start rambling and my review sounds too forced and constrained.
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  • From ANON - Koey Heades on December 20, 2005
    Great chapter. Not a bit of happyness at all. What happened in this chapter is as f!#$ up as that last episode of fullmetal alchmist. PLEASE don't let Shadow die. PLEASE let Rouge know what happened and PlEASE if Amy loses her job find her a better one.
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  • From ANON - ??? on December 19, 2005
    Sonic raping Amy sort of made me sad.
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  • From ANON - Marina on December 18, 2005
    Wow...That's so dramatic...Wonderful writing, really, really wonderful. I hope Shadow lives!!! Don't let Rouge continue to be such a bitch...please!!! PLEASE LET SHADOW LIVE............................i'm going now.
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  • From Xtra on December 18, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this story. Most stories are just "We're horny, let's have sex", but you have real emotions and feelings. Also, you show the darker side of Sonic, something most people don't touch. You're both doing a great job on this, and I hope that you two work together again.
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  • From ANON - Sol Ryuker on December 16, 2005
    A Rose And A Thron has got to be the best Shadow X Amy fanfic ever made, You wrote all the right reactions the characters would have if that happen in a sonic game "based on their personalty traits you got it down to a tee". The part when sonic started to rape amy i kept saying to myself "I already know whats gonna happen sonic is gonna rape amy and leave her tramatized then after that shadow would find out and track down sonic only for them to fight like normal people and then rouge would deliver a killing blow claiming that she wanted revenge for shadow rapeing her" but nope you made shadow catch sonic in the act then the fight totaly felt sonicy in other words was perfect and the ending to that chapter was perfect!Im begging you please continue the suspense is killing me!
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  • From ANON - Samantha on December 16, 2005
    Wow... I can't believe Sonic will actually rape Amy (even though you did mention about it a few chapters back, so I was expecting it). I thought Sonic wanted to protect her from Shadow because he was dangerous, but now it seems like Sonic the one Amy should really stay away from, even after what he did to her. I feel so sorry for her, she seems so fragile and helpless. =( And I really admired Amy for not telling Sonic where Shadow is, even when Sonic was trying to force her to tell him by abusing and raping her she still didn't give in.

    And I bet that Amy got pregnant later on, and not knowing if Sonic or Shadow is the father? Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^


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  • From AntwerpsRule on December 16, 2005
    hmmmmmmmmm...

    Ouch... You had sonic lose controll and force himself on Amy, and Shadow lost controll and nearly killed him, and Amy got to attack Sonic (...I suppose the hammer could be down there...)
    Another reasion why I love this fic, your main character isn't in any way shape or form untouchable. He Shadow nearly killed his rival, and nearly got killed doing so. He's gonna need more than stitches from that incident.
    That preg warning you gave...Now I'm wondering if Amy got knocked up durring that scene... if so, Shadow needs to run into Sonic with a wooden spoon, but I'm not the author of this so it's not my call, that decision belongs to two genuises hard at work, not an upstart.
    Another fucking good addition to this fic, you two know how to make it all work.
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  • From HeartOfDarkness on December 16, 2005
    So the rape finely comes. I have to say that this turned out to be very good. I hope that everything turns out alright with Shadow. (let sonic die for what he's done). :P

    Anyways, that sucks that someone might be copying your fic. I hate it when people do that.
    Good luck on the next chapter. ;)
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  • From ANON - Koey Heades on December 16, 2005
    (shiver) You. People. currupted. My. Mined. (shiver).
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  • From ANON - A fan of the series Sonic on December 16, 2005
    I changed my name. Guess what for.

    I see you played the game Shadow the Hedgehog. I hope you liked it.

    But about that rape... I thought this wasn't supposed to be Sonic raping Amy? Remember that you told me why? Did you changed your plans about the sequel you said you'll make?

    The chapter is great. And you truly know how to make a fight. But Amy's job is again in trouble...

    But I have one complaint. Not about the fic, mind you.

    I know that fanfiction.net has some stupid rules. But it's not because of one idiot that all of it is crap. I'm myself a writer on that site, and I feel offended for the insult.

    But I don't ask you to be sorry. I'm sure you have your reasons for it.

    Just remember next time that there's a good pack of good authors that post on this site, since it's the biggest repertoy for fanfics.


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