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From ANON - Koey Heades on December 30, 2005
Yeaaaaaaah! He's alive, alive, Great Chapter. Its about time the f@#$ up mood lightens up.
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From ANON - KawaiiKaren88 on December 29, 2005
Bahhh :O I hate Sonic and Rouge :~ But I hope the best for Amy and Shadow ;=; You're great at writing romance and plot, not just sex. I feel like, the moments when it's just Amy and Shadow, they have a true love, y'know? I just have... THE FEELING ;o; :3 Keep goin', dood! Er I'll keep reading.
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From ANON - Sweet Freak on December 29, 2005
Cool, but a few problems arose from the fact that the first chapter... yes Shadow didn't immediatly fall from the sky and Amy didn't immediatly go 'ooh let's have sex'! But it still happened very quickly. You could've had them hanging around each other for a while longer before getting them into the sex (which you do write well).

And fanfiction.net may not have good writers on it (my friend CJ the Cheetah writes good fics though and she helped my sis QueenBee a bit with Painfully Sweet and another fic she's working on) but it is for stories which aren't NC-17 or over. This site doesn't have any G, PG etc on it. People on this site are probably more experienced, because people on ff.net are younger and less experienced. But not all of them are bad. You basically brand everyone there n00bs when not everyone is.

Anywho, good fic. I love the Rouge/Sonic thing. Unique, and good. Though I prefer Sonic/Amy over Sonic/Rouge and Shadow/Amy, still good pairings and I've grown to like them. I look forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - Random Person on December 28, 2005
Please update soon!! I have to know if Shadow lives, whose the father of the baby, and your fanfic is just really good! It is well written unlike some other ones which just rush to the lemons just for sex! Please post the next chapter soon!!!!
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From ANON - Marina Rose on December 26, 2005
Aw! I love Amy's last line. This story is really well written. If I may ask...what inspired you to write this story? It seems so well planned out, and well written. I definitely love this story. The way it flows just makes it seem like a perfect movie. ^_^ Please, update soon. [And trust me, I don't go around saying that every story is good just for the hell of it.]
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From ANON - Mad as hell on December 26, 2005
WHAT THE !@#$ I SPENT LIKE THREE DAYS READING THAT AND YOU GUYS LEAVE IT HANGIN LIKE THAT? THIS IS UTTER BULL @#$% UPDATE IMMEDIATELY
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From ANON - SonicFrank on December 25, 2005
That was Spider-Man... I hate typos. >_< Sorry! ^^''

~S.F.
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From ANON - SonicFrank on December 25, 2005
I really don't know what to say... Heh... To think, the last time I commented, I rambled about Sonic being a hero. ^^''

All right, let me begin the same way I did before. This fanfic was written beautifully. Not too much of anything, but just enough to have us completely satisfied. Stunning, just brilliant. Your characterizations really worked well. The only thing that really made no sense in a fanfic as mature-themed as this one, is Amy's Piko Piko Hammer being up her dress. That's scientifically not possible considering the hammer-head is bigger than /her/ head, but it was easy to let go of. Besides, it was crucial for knocking Sonic the heck out, so kudos! ^__^

Anyway, Harley, I'd like to say I've read the majority of your fanfics on here, and I enjoy them much. This is the first I've read of Froggy's, though. If he has any others, I'd like to read them, too!

When it comes to Harley, though, I'd say this is her best work yet. You've both done a great job with characterization, and even I'm more than satisfied with the way Sonic's actions have been portrayed. Only one thing, though... Sonic and Siper-Man have one thing in common. In times of turmoil, no matter what situation they're in, how close they are to death, or what misdeed they've commited, they'll always find a way to stick an unexpected pun into at leat one of their lines. To me, Sonic's sense of humor is something that cannot be forgotten, because I truelly feel that it's very closely connected with - and also greatly helps extend and expose - his massive ego. If Sonic loses the piece of himself where he can't tell a small joke at any given time, then he's just... well, not Sonic. Sometimes, his sense of humor shows without him even /saying/ something funny, but simply by saying something in Spanish instead of in English, or making an oxy-moron type statement. You know, something like "Your numero Uno favorite hedgehog!" or "Ain't ain't a word, Tails." or even "Say, is your 'fridge runnin'? Go chase it down then, Slow-mo! I'm starvin'!".

This is a quality about Sonic's character that I find crucial. Simply because it allows him to shine in a way that makes his personality glow, rather than his actions or his speed. Still, I'm satisfied with what you've done with him. And that's big, coming from me. Sonic'll always be my hero, and I'll always love him with all my heart. The both of you managed to satisfy my expectations.

Thanks, you guys. For providing me with two great hours of great reading. Your performance in this fic was more than worth the effort. Just give us the next chapter already! ^__^ Take care!

SonicFrank: Long live the Blue Hedgehog
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From AntwerpsRule on December 24, 2005
you went and made me cry.

Amy realizes she is pregnant, ok. She's stumbling with whether it's Sonic's or Shadows, ok. She's having the usual fears when a woman has an unexpected pregnancy, ok.
Sonic is going through a guilt trip...wow. Rouge is going through a guilt trip and tries to make peace with Amy...wow. Shadow might die...wow.
Shadow is unsure whether or not her should go sown the path to the light or back to the darkness, unaware of what either side might do to him, while under the inmfluence of desperate love and lonlieness...holy living fuck.
With all the above things set, the characters are down to par on what the actual characters would say in the given situations...holy living fuck.
There was a discussion about cutting the life support off...holy living fuck
This is a fourteen chapter long masterpiece that is still going strong with the idea of a sequil later on...I can't think of a ending tag right now.
I am just so damn off guard right now... I can't think of anything remotly intelligent to say right now.
All right...here's something. Great job you two. I think it's safe to say that this fic is going to whithstand the test of time, and then some.
Eagerly awaiting an update. Respectfully yours,
AntwerpsRule
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From ANON - anna on December 24, 2005
is he dead?
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From Ano on December 24, 2005
Thank you so much for updating!

Please update again soon. Please! ::Gives biggest chibi eyes known to man and demon kind)
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From ANON - molly on December 23, 2005
holey shit it was a fight. HOW AWSOME!! ILOVE FIGHTS!!!! i liek the whole fact sonic was beaten to a pulp, btu i cna't show this to susie once again due to the fact,
A)its a shad amy
and
B) shadow was mortaly wound
shed kill me, u and probably any oen with i na ten mile radius
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From kittynakajima on December 23, 2005
Oh wow. Now it's getting quiet interesting. Shadow...dying?

While that prospect has been touched upon for him since SA2, I have to say, this is more realistic because you actually see him getting frail and struggling to hold on rather than having to assume the worst has happened. I thought it was wonderful with the way you ended the chapter with his life just hanging by a thread.

I also think it's great that you've instilled somewhat of a sense of guilt in Sonic for what he did to Amy. At least we know that he still has a sense of between what's right or wrong. I was genuinely shocked by what he did in the previous chapter, which almost drove me to hate him in this story.

But now, I'm not entirely sure as you have him almost regretting what he did to her in this latest chapter...

As for Rouge, I'd say you can't really hate or like her at the moment; she at was reasonable to show up to check up on Shadow, being that the lies she told Sonic resulted in that mess...but also suggesting to Amy to get an abortion in the same breath?

Just wow. I'll be waiting for further developments on that.

And also, I just wanted to drop by and say that I uploaded the first chapter to my first adult oriented story here, and wanted to thank you once again for being an inspiration into finally putting it into motion.
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From ANON - Chaos Command Magician on December 23, 2005
That was the greatest. I mean you have me on the edge of my seat with every new chapter hungry for more. You are the best. All of the feelings going on here it's just overwelming. I can't wait to see what happens next. You truely are a pro at what you do. Keep on going for it. The suspence is killing me.
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From HeartOfDarkness on December 23, 2005
Wow. I hope Shadows ok. And Amys child, Thats kind of scary. Even though it would seem more like shadows child, this is a fan fic so it could go anyway. Who knows if it's sonic's child. Looking forward to the next chapter. ;)
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