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Reviews for ARAAT2: Eclipse - Part 1

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From AntwerpsRule on February 03, 2006
hehehehehehehehehehehehe...........
heeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheeheehee......

Chilling? Nope, just funny, I'm a bastard about this sort of thing. The physical torture you gave Shadow made me blink and breathe Somewhat faster, but what actually counted was counted was the psycological damage. Pain can be gotten over, scars from beign reduced to a box of goodies that says 'Help yourselves!' won't fully close.
For me, the most amusing thing here was the younger scientist.

All amusement aside, I can be serious.

It seems that you two have most of the audience basking in your series...and rightfully so. You've built an incredible story, and people admit to have been inspired by your work, myself included. I think the biggest reason why I love this pice of work is that neither of you express desire to compete. It would be a simple thing for someone to take a great work and let it go to their head(s). If you went there, then I fail to see where and when. Instead of going all arrogant, your keeping an idea of a collective community (Most Intelligent review awards especially).

As always, Respectfully yours,
AntwerpsRule
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From ANON - Power Of One on February 03, 2006
I'm not going to lie, I liked ARAAT at first, the first few chapters were great. They had a great romantic story and you seemed to keep the characters within the bounds of reality. Then it became more violent and the Sonic raping Amy chapter went a little too far. Why would you rape someone for information, and yes Sonic has shown restrant before. I like you, don't like Sonic as much as other characters but you are very biased. Now with ARAAT2 it seems to have jumped from a rather gritty romance to, total annihilation of every character, with very little story. Anyway that is how I feel and I have given reasons so you can't say I'm spamming.
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From MurdocKeizer on February 03, 2006
Another brilliant chapter, as always. How strong Shadow's mind and tolerance is truly shown here. Also for Shadow to even think of Sonic coming to help him, now that was a nice twist. Then again, one needs to think, would you be that picky on who came to help you when there isn't a thing you can do yourself? I do hope for Shadow's sake that he did gain an ally in that empty hearted structure. Though Im mainly worried for his son's safty as well as Amy's, as she seems to be in danger now as well. All of Earth's hero's now seem to be targeted. Wow, I can't wait to see how this all ends, keep it up!

Oh, and thanks for the mention. Seriously, I was shocked to be noticed at all, heh. If a story really is great, I think it deserves a great review. Also if it inspires one to pick up their desire to write again! In case you or anyone is wondering, my story will be going up soon, duly titled Crimson Twilight. I would be honored if you two would be the first many to read it ^_^ (it isn't the best work, but I do my best to improve)

Keep it coming!,
~Dark Angel Murdoc~
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From ANON - Draco Falconi on February 03, 2006
I must say, this is wonderful work. The angst in this story is so think, I could probably cut a donut in it with a knife.

The thing that attracts me to the ARAAT series is that the characters are behaving somewhat similarly to the way they would in their series. This gives the story a nice sense of realism. Shadow can't control himself, but still has a soft side. Amy's cute, but still the mallet-head we know and love. Sonic's ego is inflated at times, but he still cares. The realism is amazing.

I don't work in the Sonic section, but if I did, I'd be taking ideas from you guys easily. This is one hell of a story, and there's no rate at which you guys can update that will satisfy my want to read more of this excellent story. Bravissimo!
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From ANON - RAW19 on February 03, 2006
Damn! I had no idea about the robots being in the games. i haven't played a new sonic game in ages. that's so tight!

Damn! Shadow was captured and is being tortured. (in more ways then one)

Damn! Shadow actually wants Sonic to save him? he must be delirious.

Definitly getting darker now. i do hope you update soon!!
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From ANON - The Darkchao on February 03, 2006
Awsome! horrable pain scenes are my favorites!well..second to sex scenes! To be honest I would hope it gets worse, cuz I guess ima horrable person. Anyway enough about me and onto about your story! shadow probably made a big mistake by going alone. but for whatever reason I Didnt think that was going to be a problem for him. But now its proved even ultamate life-forms have limitations. something ele I like.. the direction your makeing GUN go.. ya see I have the game 'Shadow the hedgehog' and for whatever reason they changed GUN from being the Darker feeling military group of Sonic Adventure 2 to a buncha guys who are a bunch of good guys who were just acting out of fear of Black Doom (the bad guy of 'Shadow the hedgehog' for anyone who doesnt happen to know.). Hell Even there leader who goes by 'gun commander' Is a fool and is under the impression that it was shadow' fault everone died on ark. anyways point im trying to make here. Im glad you didnt go with what GUN seemes to have became in recent games. Thanks for the fun chapter!
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From ANON - Jimmy_O on February 03, 2006
Jesus... That really sent shivers down my spine!

But, a question. In this chapter, Shadow mentions that his friends will save him. Now clearly, Sonic would want to, but won't because he is afraid of the reaction he would recieve from Shadow, because of Shadow's insistence to do this himself. It is thse conflicting ideas in the story which makes me wonder, will Sonic have a change of heart and try to find Shadow, or will he not, and potentially leave Shadow to die? And, with Eclipse in the middle of all this, will Amy's 'part dementia' escalate to a height where she would want to commit suicide?
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From ANON - RAW19 on February 01, 2006
they could use some of these robot ideas in the show. where did you come up with the invincible Tails bot? another excellent chapter, not too dark yet, update soon!
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From ANON - Kamirine_2 Lazy 2 Log In...Again on January 28, 2006
Wooo this story is making me so excited now! I'm glad Sonic is getting back on track. Cause Sonic was scary there for a second. (Refering to part 1 with that remark as well.) This story is just plain wonderful and I can't wait to see what happens. I really hope the baby and Shadow are okay or at least someone goes to help them.

Love to read your story and please, PLEASE update soon!!
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From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
I have only just recently arrived at this site thanks to a friend, and 'A Rose and a Thorn' was one of the very first writings I read. I'm a writer myself and will soon post up a few stories of my own. *Ahem* More to the point of what I�m getting at...this has to be one of the best pieces of work I have ever read in a good damn long while (ARAAT 1 and 2)! Been in a kind of down time myself in my own writing...thinking up things but not doing much, blah. This one, and very well done, story has inspired me to continue my writing, and more so inspired brand new ideas and better ways to express them. Yeah, I have been in one hell of a slump XD No way would I dare rip off this story, I have too much respect for it and it's writers. Anyway...

The story line is solid, , and very captivating. The descriptions with characters thoughts, expressions and so forth are highly constructed and nicely done. Not sure how else to describe it, (and I don�t want to appear as an overenthusiastic fan :P) just that I�m very excited to see how this all draws out in each chapter. Heh, glad I came here at this point or I would be a little nuts checking in a lot seeing if you guys updated or not. You guys have done an amazing job, no kidding. As one writer to another (well to both in this case I would guess being a co-production), I hope your writing continues to succeed and I look forward to see more of your work. I'd say more, but I feel I have said more than enough for one night...the sleepyness taking over the mind -_-...ZzZz....

Best wishes,
MurdocKeizer (best known as Dark Angel Murdoc)
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From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
First and foremost... Egg Emperor 1.8? The poor man's gone senile.
FIGHT SCENE!!!!! Great, now I'm gonna see a tails doll in my nightmares. Oh well...
Sonic is slowly rebuilding himself it seems...and for him to admit that Shadow is needed, depression is an odd dance partner for him. It was kinda a shock for me to see Sonic move to support Amy as she tried to get out of the hospital bed...
Nursery from hell, that sums it up nicley. Shadow's kid running around with a firearm screaming out "Fuck em all no mercey!" is a creepy thought.
Wait...The violence that Eclipse sees from Shadow saving him would be more than what he is seeing now, since Shadow is the father, and biggest rolemodel...

Respectfully yours
AntwerpsRule

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From ANON - Koey Heades on January 27, 2006
Great chapter. I don't wish to be rude, thou beleive there's soming missing in this chapter.
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From Xtra on January 27, 2006
I love the throwbacks to old Sonic games in this chapter. Expesially making the Tails Doll the cirsed psycopath that he is. Anyways, great chapter, and i hope you update soon.
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From ANON - The Penis on January 27, 2006
This shit is crunk, fo'shizzle.

But I have a question. Shadow is the Ultimate Life Form, so how does he get Amy pregnant? He was biologically created. I doubt Gerald was able to put any sperm into Shadow.
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From ANON - N/A on January 27, 2006
So... Nothing to acknowledge the fact that a shotguns recoil is not something you just ignore? Also, I know Shadow can pull the Chaos stuff without an emerald, what I don't know, is why the colour changed, it always used to be green...

Also, no offence meant but I rather prefferred the longer, meatier chapters of ARAAT one.
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