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Reviews for ARAAT2: Eclipse - Part 1

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - molly (who else would it be) on January 08, 2006
    well you ceartinly can't kill of eclipse, cause the friggin story is named after him u dopes, then it woudl make no sense. im going for amy caus eshe might have some after math of the whoel irth thing, i mean shadow juts recovered, its amys turn for the near death experinse...
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  • From ANON - ??? on January 07, 2006
    my anger is great along with my insainty.
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  • From ANON - The Dark Chao on January 07, 2006
    Wonderfull. Cant wait to see how this all turns out.
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  • From ANON - ??? on January 07, 2006
    Don't make Chapter 3 soon I might go crazy well crazier.
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  • From HeartOfDarkness on January 05, 2006
    Little "Eclipse". I have to say that you picked the perfect name. I hope he grows up to be like his mother and father. Please update soon.
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  • From kittynakajima on January 05, 2006
    I read the first chapter when you posted the epilouge to the first story, but haven't had time to leave a proper review.

    I must say, I'm very impressed with this first chapter. Funny how the craziness of childbirth and labor can sap the calminess out of even the Ultimate Lifeform himself. Well done. I also liked the fact that you had the labor start and stop at instances, (as it does happen in real life). Very, very believable.

    I also like the little bundle of joy already. At least those readers who were still confused by the end of the first story know for certain (by now at least) that it's Shadow's kid, along with a wonderful description of the features the child inherited from both parents.

    I've read a lot of those fics where the author is trying to pull of either something absolutely unique and the description of the kid's features makes it out to be something from a horror movie or scientific experiment gone horribly wrong.

    But anyway, keep up the great work. I loved the foreshadowing of events for this sequel you did in the epilogue, so I'm anticipating it. :3


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  • From ANON - Koey Heades on January 04, 2006
    YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! HURAY! I'm glad. But i was realy hoping the baby was a girl.
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  • From ANON - Darkhaven3 on January 03, 2006
    You've made a brave move to create a sequel to begin with, though through bravery comes reward- so far the story is kicking ass and I'm excited to read what will happen to Eclipse, Amy and Shadow next! :D Writing style is just as spectacular as in the last ARAAT, every segment of the first chapter is more than inventive to satisfy my tastes, and above all I have seen no similarities between this fic and any other ShadAmy fic I've read (though I haven't seen many :P)... So far, that is. Keep it going and you've got my promise that I'll keep reading and leaving reviews for every chapter, you guys have pulled together quite a masterpiece of a first chapter even if it was a little quick :)

    -Darkhaven3
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  • From ANON - A fan of Sonic on January 03, 2006
    Kill one of them? Damnit, why not let them all stay alive? I know they're the principals characters of the story and that you could already have wrote the full script in your head, but must they suffer every bad of the world? Give them a break already...

    Great chapter. Now I'm waiting for more.
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  • From AntwerpsRule on January 02, 2006
    hmmmmm...

    Nice opening, very addicting way to start, even thought it kinda feels rushed.
    You let six months go by and Sonic's still wallowing in guilt? I was almost thinking you were going to demonize the character in a similar fashion to the frist story
    Eclipse? Someone using Chaos Controll? I choose not to toss out my two cents worth of guesses this early, I'm gonna wait untill your update before I start digging too deeply.
    Anyhoo, again, great start.

    Respectfully yours,
    AntwerpsRule

    P.S. Just me...please don't kill the child...
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  • From ANON - ??? on January 02, 2006
    That was great but maybe you could a different one like instead of a boy a girl.
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  • From ANON - EcchoKat on January 02, 2006
    Oh how cute a baby hedgehog with purple quills. I can just see how little eclipse looks and he sound so cute. A wonderful moving chapter make me think of when my mom had my sister you nail the pain right on the head. Please update soon. SOOO CUTE Shadow/Amy rule.
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  • From ANON - Random Person on January 01, 2006
    Wow I can't wait for the next chapter!! I also can't wait to see what Eclipse grows up to be like!!! Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - N/A on January 01, 2006
    Up to the usual standard I see. You write a good, plausible, gripping story that tries (And if I might say so, succeeds) to be an actual story instead of just a jumble of words hurled together into something vaugely approaching english. Now, if only the rest of fanfiction was this quality, it might not have such a bad name.

    A few niggles I might have though, is considering Shadow's physical power, even taking into account any lasting effects from his wound, surely fainting is a bit ofd an exaggeration? Air loss will of course knock somebody out, but I think taking five minutes to wake up again is a bit much, I would have thought one minute, two at the most.
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