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Reviews for ARAAT3: The Forbidden Experiment

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - funkman on July 16, 2006
    Still waiting......getting impatient......but sure I won't be disappointed..........I think. Anyway this chapter made a little progress. I'd like to know what the hell Ashura is doing! What is he doing!? Is he jacking off or something!? You should tell us what Ashura is doing. I'm out of things to say so I'll talk to ya next week. Later!
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  • From ANON - OiJimmy on July 15, 2006
    Hmm...a very nice story....
    keep up your work guys
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on July 15, 2006
    damn! it took awhile but i finally caught up. what happened to shadow at GUN headquarters was really sadistic and messed up, but i'm glad he escaped with his sanity intact. what happened to sonic was wrong, but i'm glad that he escaped and made up with everyone. perhaps he'll go back to being a hero? i wonder what's really up with ashura. is he insane? Mirage is an intersting character and her relationship with Espio is intriguing. i look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - disaster master on July 11, 2006
    Very interesting, is Mirage friend or foe? Chapter 4 score= 3 out of 5. Can't wait for more! Thanks for the reward too! Now if you'll excuse me, -turns to funkman and pulls out sledge hammer- I've got to kill funkman! What was it that you called me? stupid? -chases funkman with sledge hammer-
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  • From ANON - pendejo on July 10, 2006
    hola! como esta usted? me gusto esta estoria bien mucho, pero la rason que theje un review es porque quiero mirar osi harley ebla espanol, o osi no harley, entonces froggy. cuando ellos lean esto y no saben espanol, estoy seguro que se ban a encabronar y pensar que dije algo mal de ellos. (le da risa) pero osi si saben espanol pues les qiero dicir que me gusto to estoria. eso es todo! adios!
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  • From funkman on July 10, 2006
    This chapter didn't push me nor pull me. But I've got to be patient, this is only the beginning. Later on is when the real judging will commence. As for now, the story is pretty decent. One more thing, dm can't get any kind of award that has to do with intelligence, a sack of potatoes is smarter than dm! I'm just kidding dm! Don't kill me dm! Please! I'm only kidding with you! NOOOOO!
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  • From kittynakajima on July 09, 2006
    Damnit. I wasn't logged in, but the anonymous review before this one was actually mine.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2006
    Wow. Now one, not two. But three Sonic - related fanfictions in a row, that don't suck.

    What do I mean by 'don't suck'? Well, let's see - in my experience, a lot of Sonic related fanfiction usually won't have a story/plot compelling enough to make you want to read past the prologue in the first chapter. And in the case of adult oriented ones such as this, the premise is either a good one shot or a crappily thought out sexual fantasy that would be best kept behind closed doors.

    But yours...have broken away from that. ARAAT 1 had a plot that instantly pulled you in, with developments and plot twists that put you on the edge of your seat. Hell, I'd be lying if I didn't say I wasn't checking this site every day during the first story to see if you had updated - it was that good.

    And ARAAT 2? You might have needed to read the first story, but I think you could instantly jump in and appreciate all the crazy shit that you had going down. Including that surreal chapter that featured Shadow's psychotic hallucination. :D

    And finally, we now have this. I've scanned through some of the previous reviews from ARAAT 2 and some of these, and it seems as if a bunch of people are already saying that it's just not as good.

    Oh well, too bad for them. I think they're missing out on something great. Especially given the immense effort you've put into developing one of the original characters in this story. I absolutely - love - Mirage. Her abilities, her personality, even her curious little speech quirks that come from speaking a totally different language altogether.

    She's definitely one of the more developed and thought out OCs - usually you run across a bunch of them with powers that easily rival/surpass that of an established characters to the point where they're perfect in every way. And while I will say that she does have power that can easily knock the wind out of Shadow, there's one thing that separates her from all the rest:

    She's not happy about it. The way you have her constantly shifting between loyalities is an excellent touch. Draining Shadow's power, but hiding away from Ashura? Brilliant.

    And I can easily say that if some other person had this same idea, they probably would have had her go in one direction altogether.

    And I was able to get all this from the first few chapters alone, which only makes me wonder how much more you'll develop this very promising character in future installments.

    I'll finish it off with that. I have such a bad tendency to gush that it's ridiculous.

    But once again, I am thoroughly enjoying this story for what it is and can't wait for the next update.


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  • From ANON - Eddie on July 09, 2006
    Damn, this is easily the best story I've read so far keep up the good work.
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  • From HeartOfDarkness on July 08, 2006
    Well, it's starting to move forward. ;)
    This chapter was good but I kind of feel it was more like reviewing want went on in the last 2 chapters,
    I didn't really have anything new that the others chapters haven't gone over but there could be reasons.
    It could be that you have something planed that would take more then a week to write? But I don't know
    everthing for sure. Still, I like how shes opening up a tiny bit more. Not sure if anythings going to happen yet.

    HeartOfDarkness
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  • From ANON - Mlz23 on July 08, 2006
    Great! I love this story so much, good lord it's addicting. Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - McKnight on July 08, 2006
    I hope there's going to be some stuff relating to Sonic and Rouge, especially after you brought them back together at the end of the last fic. Also, in case you never noticed, I left a review in your last fic asking why Omega was never present either time in the hospital with everyone else. Would you please answer me if you read this review? Thanks.
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  • From ANON - disaster master on July 07, 2006
    Bravo! Bravo! you guys are sheer talent. When funk man first told me to read A Rose and a Thorn 1,2, and 3 I wasn't so sure I didn't feel like taking the time to read 39 CHAPTERS! but seeing how good this little tale is it made it all worth it. Don't let the story turn into shit! Most of the time when movies, books, and games have multiple sequels their popularity goes down the drain. But your story doesn't seem to do that so you get credit for that. I want to see what happens next so do update soon. Like I'm doing with everyone else, I'm going to give you a score for every chapter you put up. First of all I want to tell you that A Rose and a Thorn gets a 4 out of 5. Second, A Rose and a Thorn 2: Eclipse gets a 4.5 out of 5, great job on the second one! As for the third, the three chapters combined get a 3 out of 5. I wish you good luck, have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - BZLF on July 03, 2006
    Hrmm.. What will happen should Ashura collect all seven chaos emeralds? Is there any chance of the Super Emeralds coming back? If the Master Emerald was shattered, would that negate Mirages' powers as well as Shadows(if even effecting them at all?)? thanks for mentioning me in the second chaptor.
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  • From ANON - Miss. Anonymous on July 03, 2006
    Ah, just when I thought the ARAAT series has lost its luster you seemed to have picked it up again. The last two chapters with the lizard and the chaotic crew have caught my interest. And first in a very long time I'm actually interested in the next up coming chapter. I like the chaotic gang, those three need their own British sitcom.
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