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Reviews for The reality of Lara's Legend

By : MorbidFantasy
  • From Ladylara on February 10, 2008
    Ok, since it has been so long since I played this game, I refreshed my memory by watching the england level on youtube. You are right, there isnt alot to work with. The only things which really struck my muse is that maybe you could use the automated knight manequins in the king arthur area. And in the end of the level I was watching on youtube there was a fair amount of thugs. But other than that I am out of ideas as well.
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  • From ANON - kylebayne on February 08, 2008
    Just and idea to help with writers block: you could connect Kazakstan and England into an ending story arc. For instance, Lara hears that someone in her home country know how to beat the curse, but he also knows about Lara, trapping her and seeing how far he can make her take it (locking her in stocks and running a very long train of horses on her springs to mind). Of course, being Lara, she finds a way to escape and gets the final clues from her captor - leading her to Kazakstan and the finale of her ordeal. But not without having to fuck her way through several incredibly strange creatures guarding the relic that would free her.

    Let me know what you think of this, and if it helped any.
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  • From ANON - Jubilee on December 15, 2007
    More more more !! Never can get enough of raping Heroines.
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  • From ANON - Sandz on December 06, 2007
    Wow, i can't wait for your update (chapter 5). Really i can't wait.

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  • From ANON - d.a.m on December 02, 2007
    A mesmerising monster of a story- i hope honestly this is updated and doesn't disappear like the story "Buffy's punishment" by awolja111 (does anyone know what happened to him anyway?).

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  • From ANON - ANON on November 10, 2007
    I have been a fan of your stories for quite some time. The reality of laras legend and tsukuyomi are the best adult stories i have seen since Jimmy orthanc did a houdini.
    On a different subject the e-mail address shown on your page doesn't lead anywhere- you might want to rectify this situation although ther hasn't been any activity about this since the mention of a nepal beta chapter- what happened to that anyway?
    I hope that if the story continues the very high standard of storytelling doesn't slip.

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  • From ANON - anon on November 09, 2007
    Constructive criticism
    Since male/female sex has been seen so much on this story so far, i think it would be an interesting change of pace for the Kazakhstan chapter to mostly focus on the demon creature- maybe it posesses Lara or hyperstimulates her nervous system by entering her body or something, also i think Cornwall must have at least something about the sea serpent (maybe tentacle sex).
    On the note of different concepts, does anyone else see the potential for a very interesting encounter between Lara and Amanda Evert? Maybe it just me after seeing the subplot on tomb raider anniversary wher Natla wants Lara to rule along side her (she offers her the second chair of atlantis after you finish the great pyramid level). A reason for this is f/f hasn't been seen yet and i think Amanda looks hot.

    Brilliant story here, i look for an update every chance i got.
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  • From ANON - Sandz on November 09, 2007
    A brilliant story so far, I'm very much looking forward to what you have planned for Lara in the 4 levels to come!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on October 31, 2007
    An excellent story you have here,
    on a different note, what about a star trek voyager story focusing on seven of nine? The tv series itself should give a hundred potential ideas for stories, like: what if seven gave herself up to the cataati in "day of honour" and they had ideas for her other than conventional torture?
    Or if the phase cloaked aliens who were running experiments on the crew experimented on seven in some sick way? i.e transformation or mind control?
    Or if the entharan weapons trader in fact did shoot seven and violate her- but not to grab nanoprobes for profit?
    Or if that monk ambassador from "someone to watch over me" did more than grab seven's arm then pass out from synthehol?

    Incidentally, i like the ideas you have described in the roadmap, especially the potential of a Dark angel fic with your story telling style.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 29, 2007
    I love this story. The reality of lara's legend is still my favourite fanfic and I'm so excited to see where it's going here. Keep up the awesome work, I love your writing and the way you've developed a videogame perfectly into a twisted adult fic.

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  • From ANON - anon on July 02, 2007
    I cannot resist unconventional and unorthodox ideas, which this super dark and scintillating series is, Lara Croft BDSM fics are rare considering the popularity and highly sexual nature of Lara Croft.
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  • From anacsadder on January 27, 2007
    I finished reading all that is here.
    Eegads, it would hurt to have a spike push through your cervix like that, virgin amulet or not. That's like period cramps times ten. Not a complaint, just a comment. Let's see, what else was there...
    I'm glad you took a break from the gang bang parts in this chapter, to mix things up. I read something earlier on in the reviews about a tentacled monster? I don't know anything about Tomb Raider, like I said before, but if there is some kind of inhuman tentacled/not necessarily earthly animal involved, it would be neat if it could be pencilled in for an appearance.
    *thinking* Oh, I'm sure it can be excused by the fact that she doesn't want anyone to know what's happened to her, but I can't help but wonder why she doesn't find somebody she trusts to help her get the semen out of her. It seems like even Lara would snap at some point. Apply her earlier idea, but have somebody else stick the tube in her to avoid the self-penentration clause. It could be because I read the chapters right next to each other, but it's getting to a point where I'm just reading to see if she ever fixes the problem.
    Other than that, the sex scenes are pretty good, and this is well written. For example, I get frustrated when I see a M/M/F code, and it turns out to be ANOTHER vaginal/oral combination. So kudos on the vaginal/anal thing in chapter two. I give it... eh, something like 3.8 stars.
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  • From anacsadder on January 26, 2007
    Chapter One
    I have to admit all I know about Tomb Raider is the movie from a long time ago.
    Very good overall, just a couple of little problems. One, I think there's a tiny bit of anatomical confusion involving the hymen and the cervix. Thinking about it, I guess it could be explained away by the amulet, but be careful in the future. Two, I believe cats have barbs on their penises. I'm not going to slam you for it, but it could have added an extra element of suffering to have that in there, couldn't it? I'd give the first chapter four stars.
    In answer to the review you left on Rape of Mary Jane Watson, I did start a pretty elaborate sequel (with a plot and a subplot *cheesy grin*) very shortly after I finished writing the original. However, I got kind of stuck, and then I got all involved in co-written fanfics (the other three fics in the spider-man section are co-written). I can go back and look at it again, but I can't promise anything.
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  • From JackRetsevrah on January 17, 2007
    Excellent story, I check it for updates every week. Keep up the good work.
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  • From NinjaGaijin on January 06, 2007
    ...That was a smashing ending! The final sex/(fight?) scene was really intense. Were it be visualized, it would've looked like a kungfu movie scene. And the Virgin Amulet proves its use as an 'anti-snuff' device!

    It's really great. Thanks a lot for the story! And I think a lot of us would be glad to know this won't be your last.

    As for requests/suggestions... I'd love to see a continuation of your Soul Calibur story. Or, if you feel like it, I've got ideas for a Dynasty Warriors story. Check your mailbox.
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