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Reviews for The reality of Lara's Legend

By : MorbidFantasy
  • From elegyenigma on August 24, 2006
    I think it's sufficient to say my vote has been raised to a four star rating now. :P
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  • From elegyenigma on August 12, 2006
    Well for writing talents you've got heaps of it. But, uh...if you're going to make sex scenes, then, well, make them. You put enough effort into talking about the AFTERMATH but almost nothing about DURING. There's more to sex than just orgasms, yanno. As for the thing with the beastiality, well, that's REALLY not my thing...and it's kinda sick, really, as is the rape thing. And just for my notorious nitpicky stuff, you said "the sounds of lovemaking died away" after the rape scene. Heh, making love, having sex, and raping someone are three different things... XD Anyway. I give it, eh, a two star rating. You get a star for being good at writing, but the rape and especially the beastiality aspects just didn't appeal to me. *shrugs* Work on the sex scenes themselves a bit more, too. Normally I don't bias my vote on the topics of a sex scene if the sex scene is written well enough, but there really wasn't much of them. Sorry. Anyways, keep trying, and despite what I didn't like about the story, you're a really good writer.
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