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Reviews for The reality of Lara's Legend

By : MorbidFantasy
  • From ANON - Agent-G on January 03, 2007
    Well this is pretty good story although I thinkt he amulet thing is a bit much. For one thing semen dosen't just add up it degrates after a few days. I also think having it burned into her flesh is a bit overboard yeah it shocked her but something like that would be painful to have all the time and it wouldn't make any sense for her to go on before getting it removed from her body.

    I'm hoping you go back and cut that part out at least it's a bit too much. Also I thought Lara already got rid of all that sperm in her body ealier in that flash back? it wasn't very clear what exactly happened at that point and I think you should make it more clear what she did becaues I thought she had removed it.

    I was kind of hoping for Lara and her friend getting raped in that one scene and maybe a little forced F/F to add a little something that you haven't done yet. Maybe you can have that happen with that girl that is behind everything. How about that energy monster thing have some tentacle sex with Lara at one point? Will this thing that Ruthland have knock Lara up? Kind of a fast pregnancy that she goes through 9 months in like 9 minutes/hours? (that or that monster thing too)
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  • From ANON - Lanier on January 01, 2007
    I like your theme. I have to say I never really gave it much thought, but this is great. I love the spike, nice touch...I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your chapters.
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  • From ANON - Zantari Graves on December 31, 2006
    Very well done and nicely thought out though it would be exciting to see more of the furry friends abuse her and I look forward to reading the later chapters.
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  • From ANON - d.a.m on December 24, 2006
    Personally, i think this is an excellent piece of fanfiction as it is and doesn't need any format changes.
    The traps and level elements have some interesting possibilities though.



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  • From ANON - Xardean/Xardion on December 22, 2006
    well, long time no see, i check your stories daily but i have been without oyou for over 3 months, id like to see some more beastiality, plase, like lions and stuff, and id also like to see more violense to lara, she is so hot she just needs to be abused. so yea. thats all i got to say, maybe a gang bang in the begninng and then a 1 on 1 in the end
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  • From elegyenigma on December 14, 2006
    Well, the gangbanging has kinda been overused. I'd say uno-uno would be a hell of an idea to go on now. And yeah, make him realize Lara's gettin' gangraped on every mission, it'd make for an interesting moment or ten in the story.

    And whatever you do, please don't do any snuff or lactation things or scat or anything like that. o.O You've done hella good so far, DON'T RUIN IT! *laughs*
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  • From ANON - Variant on December 14, 2006
    Well you did have a gangbang then 1on1 at the end of chapter 3. so you could have say 1on1 then a gangbang...which is sorta the samething

    I guess your could post both then branch off from one of them based on responses
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  • From elegyenigma on November 20, 2006
    Daaaamn, man. Third chapter kicked ass. I'm a believer in awesomeness of it now. XD 5/5.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2006
    AWESOME STORY, amazed I hadn't seen it yet. Great work, this is one of the best Tomb Raider stories yet.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2006
    WOW.

    The story with the serum was sooo gooood.

    Please more!!!
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  • From ANON - xardion/xardean on September 16, 2006
    mmmmmm soo ogood, you are a great asset in my life, this was an even better addition to the last one you wrote. i await your next chapter. i pray that you still find inspitarion and just so you know, if you ever need a topic to do it on, just e-mail me, and i will tell you what id like to see you do, just putting that out, if you ever get yourself in a bind ask your readers for advice, me personally would like to see more beastiality and more anal and mabey some hair fetishes going on, just a personal request.. mabey a horse??? just saying, but other then that i congragulate you on your superb writing skills. i await further chapters
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 07, 2006
    i like it alot i hope you contiue soon cause i really want to see the next update please update soon
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  • From NinjaGaijin on September 06, 2006
    Hmm.

    The first chapter is good, I like the idea of the Virgin Amulet. However, the scenes are not detailed enough, and the later chapters are just recycling the theme of chapter 1 [Lara gangbanged & repeatedly lost her virginity]. But still, it's a good read.
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  • From ANON - Xardion/Xardean on September 03, 2006
    dude you have amazed me. this is a great story in the making, your powerful and unrivled skills in the writing catagory have shown me that you know what your doing, in a way your story speak out and become a living thing. know this, you have a great gift, and using this gift to satasify the needs of all of us at AFF is a great thing to do, keep up the good work my fellow and if you keep on doing what your doing, which is doing differnt things in each chapter, then we will all be very satisfied with all that you have given us. i await your next chapter in the near future. and until then my good fellow...
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  • From ANON - Overload on August 30, 2006
    I really don't know what do say...so i'm going to just stay one word: awesome.

    Keep writing. :)
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