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Reviews for Bloody Domination (Revised)

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - BZLF on September 25, 2006
    Seriously, Shadow is fucked up. At first, based off of the title of this chapter, I could swear you were gonna have him go after Knuckles.. Eww.
    What he does to Amy isn't as bad as it was reading him doing that stuff to Cream, but still. I can't wait to find out how Rouge'll do against him.
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  • From AntwerpsRule on September 24, 2006
    well, I'm not sure how to feel about this. I honestly think the only thing that kept me reading was the detail and obvious work put into this. Shadow plans on hitting everyone? After reading the chapter about what he did to Cream, my second though was along the lines of "Oh damnit...wonder what Charmey is going to go through..."
    I'm not a big fan of this sort of thing, but since Shadow isn't totally insane, I'm actually interested in the fates of the others.
    Whoever the Anon person is...
    Thanks, I'm suprised this reminded you of Adam's poem, although it took me a few minnutes to figure out why. I suppose this Shadow has common ground with him once 'Adam' isn't in charge. But enough of my OC, either you have a good memory, or you recently found it, I really don't care. Thanks all the same.
    Back to the matter at hand though, if this doesn't at all pierce you to write, then I fear for your sanity. Then again, I prety much said this was well written and admitted interest so I should worry about myself now.
    Naw...it's just fiction, I won't lose any sleep.
    Respectfully yours;
    AntwerpsRule

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  • From ANON - Héous on September 23, 2006
    Tell me, when does Shadow get to rape Rouge? Will he get to her? And, if he does, could you please have him engage in mammary intercourse ("tittyfucking", for those so inclined)? Rouge is the only Sonic character who that can be done with.

    There wasn't enough blood this chapter. I hope there's a LOT more in the next one, because that would be awesome. Also, if Shadow is THAT insane, then why didn't he just rape her in the vagina? You mean he actually cares about her virginity? I'm not buying it.
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  • From ANON - Disaster Master on September 22, 2006
    -Disaster Master puts his hands over his eyes. Then peeks through one hand.-

    Yikes, this is one gorey fic. You guys are two demented sons of bitches. Now don't take that as an insult, because coming from me, that's a compliment. Awaiting more. Chapters 1, 2, 3 score= 4 out of 5.
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  • From ANON - I stole your shoes on September 20, 2006
    This is a very disturbing tale, but that's why I love it!

    I found out some cool things about Sonic and the Secret Rings, formerly known as Sonic Wild Fire. Everyone knows that Sonic, Shadow, Silver, Eggman, and that Princess are going to be in it. But apparently what I figured out is that Tails, Knuckles, Amy, and Blaze are also going to be in it. Interesting isn't it?
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  • From ANON - Takara on September 20, 2006
    damn....that is one f-ed up hedgehog. First poor innocent Cream, now Amy. wonder who's going to be Shadow's next victim? Rouge?, Tails?, hell even Knuckles himself? (don't answer that. ) but still, i'm going to be watching and waiting for the next big chapter. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on September 19, 2006
    Well, this kinda thing isn't my personal interest, but by author's code 420 I went ahead andchecked it out.
    It's definatly disturbing, however, I have seen worse. As before, your spelling, grammar, and formating are near perfect. I'll continue to follow both of your sonic stories with interest.
    BTW, while I'm not perticularly fond of these kind of fics, it doesn't bother me either, so get as bloody and gorey as you wish, I can handle whatever you got.
    This is CrazyIvan signing off for now...
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  • From ANON - BZLF on September 19, 2006
    (I could swear I had reviewed the current chaptor this morning..)

    Well this was certainly better. Far better. Although the chaptor title gave away who was going to be next. So Shadow is going to keep her alive for awhile.. interesting. I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2006
    Creepy in an almost unhealthy kind of way. Actually, it kinda reminds me of something I read somewhere... can't remember who the author was though.

    I can see what you see not;
    My Vision dimms, then eyes rot.
    Pain, death and blood surrounds you;
    Who dies next, I’ll never leave a clue.
    Such a blasphemy of your soul and mind;
    Makes you wish you were blind.
    We shall roar through eternity;
    Killing all with delightful glee.
    Our pain; the world can see;
    Won’t you Please Stop Me.

    Or something along thoese lines, damnit. Shadow kinda sounds like this guy someone wrote about.
    The message was left by some human lunatic after EVERY 'accomplishment'. Now it's gonna bug me all night. Not that I'm telling you to stop or anything, if ensuring nightmares is what your going for then your probably getting there.
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  • From ANON - Takara on September 15, 2006
    Wow!....great story, you guys. that had me really going. Though i must admitted, the way you portray Shadow was pure poetry in motion even if it did creep me out just a bit. That still didn't stop me from like it. Good but little scary. i'll give it 4/5.
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  • From ANON - Héous on September 13, 2006
    Now that chapter was awesome. It was a sadist's wet dream: Blood, Child Rape, and Disembowlment. It wasn't arousing in a sexual manner, but it was very psychologically arousing. After all, if one cannot disembowel, rape, torture, decapitate, and otherwise cause others to suffer, how can they even claim to be alive?
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  • From ANON - BZLF on September 11, 2006
    I wasn't expecting this to happen. Really didn't think Shadow would do something like that, even though I've read the torture scenes of ARAAT2, so I should have known what was coming. Congrats on this chaptor for making me completly dispise Shadow at the moment.
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  • From ANON - Cyborg Commando on September 07, 2006
    Oh ho ho ho! Brilliant! Now this is the sort of thing that I've been waiting for! Blood and gore, oh yeah. Enough of the mushyness, on with the gore! Finish this up... or else.
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  • From ANON - Héous on September 06, 2006
    Now this story just sounds like a lot of fun waiting to happen. It's going to be bloody, it's going to involve rape, and (I hope) that people are going to die. I saw the M/M tag in the story, so I'll just skip over those parts, but other than that I can't wait to see how brutal this story gets.
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  • From ANON - BZLF on September 05, 2006
    Well now, this sounds interestingly evil.
    It'll be good to see aside of Shadow not appearing in the ARAAT series.
    Just a question though, will Shadow be able to use his Chaos abilitys from Shadow The Hedgehog(IE. Chaos Control, Chaos Blast, Chaos Dart/Spear)??
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