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Reviews for Bloody Domination (Revised)

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - ManiacalMercury on October 25, 2006
    Hmmm.... Shadow kidnaps Tails and is actually nice to him! (all to just get his trust for the plan! nyahaha)
    Of course he goads Sonic into believing he's doing horrible unbelievable things to him. What's the plan? Shadow proposes if Sonic rapes Tails himself he would let him go or kill him otherwise. Trying to save his young friend from that fate he agrees. Tails' faith in Sonic would be shattered and Shadow could have authorities burst in catching him in the act of raping a child thus Sonic and everything he stood for....destroyed. Not to mention the hoards of evidence of previous goings on in the dank cellar of doom. He would be ruined.
    Of course I would do this last when Sonic's mind would be slipping and lacking proper judgement.
    I love this story. For some reason that just spewed out while reading it. I hope you liked but it probably pales in comparison to what you were planning! XD I love the evilness it's a nice change of pace.
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  • From ANON - Takara on October 24, 2006
    wow. what a strange twist. Truthfully, i was expecting a bloody battle and a equally brutal rape between Shadow and Knuckles, but..meh...what you going to do. (my two faves by the way). Seriously, don't do TOO much damage to poor innocent Tails.

    um...don't mind me being curious, Miss Harley Qunn, but from way you talk about Knuckles and such, its seems like you don't really like him that much. i already figure you Really don't like Rouge. i'm just wondering that all.

    Can't waits what happens next.

    and FYI, whoever's ideal was it to give your story a 2 stars stats, two words: FUCK THEM!
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  • From ANON - BZLF on October 24, 2006
    I was wondering why Knuckles was enjoying it. I figured he'd get the same treatment as Rouge. Right, well, Please don't harm Tails, oh please don't. Let him escape, oh please don't harm him. That good enough to garentee something awful is gonna happen to him? I can false-beg some more if I must. So yeah I just know Knuckles is gonna slip up and say Sonic instead of Shadow sooner or later and thans going to get Shadow so enraged he'll murder Knuckles or something.
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  • From ANON - Skittles The Sugar Fairy on October 24, 2006
    *Sigh* Now I'm torn between beggin for Tails to not be hurt or to just wait for th inevitable. Though I have to say I REALLY enjoyed the whole snapping/OMG what have I done of Shadow, but the slipping of Knuckles was great to. This was excellently written and I'm slightly disturbed that I'm anxious for more.
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on October 23, 2006
    ::Raises hand, completely confused:: Ooookay, what just happened in THAT chapter? Why was Shadow so...fluffy...with Knuckles? That almost seemed--okay, it WAS out of place for this story. Hot chapter---but really. What the hell.

    ::sobs but says nothing and hugs Tails plushie::
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  • From ANON - N/A on October 23, 2006
    Ten quid says Knuckles murders Shadow in the crazy bastards sleep. Shadow can regenerate, but divest him of an emerald and put him at the bottom of the sea, and water pressure handles the rest. Or just bury him alive. Deeply.
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  • From ANON - xain & steven on October 23, 2006
    xain:i usually dont like yaoi but that was good knuckles liked that shit omfg AND it was (sort of) consentual man if shadow kills knuckles now that would be the most retarded thing ive ever read i do this number (O_o what the fuck in hell?) yea....ima just stop typing now curoius to see what you do to tails

    steven:scar tails for live do it! emotionally and physiclly do it now!!!

    xain:um ignore that last coment 4 out of 5 i give this one peace!

    steven:...your gay xain....
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on October 22, 2006
    I patiently await an update! ::please don't kill Tails--be kind::
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  • From ANON - Disaster Master on October 20, 2006
    In Shadow the Hedgehog, GUN is a walkover because it's essential to the game's storyline. And not only that, it's also because Yuji Naka knows shit about weaponry too. Have you ever played Perfect Dark? Or Red Alert 2? Shadow may be the Ultimate Lifeform, but he's not indestructible. For example, in Red Alert 2, the hero units, (the strongest units in the game; Tanya, Boris, Yuri) and the Apocalypse tanks are powerful yes. So powerful that they can hold their ground even if they are outnumbered, but they can be destroyed if you FAR outnumber them. Or if you use a super weapon on them. Actually, the Apocalypse tanks can survive a nuclear explosion! But still, there are many ways to kill off superior soldiers, tanks, ultimates or whatever. Remember, there's a saying that goes, "There's strength in numbers." And again, I'm not telling you what to do, I'm just stating some setbacks you tend to make. Chapter 7= 4.5 out of 5. Whoever gave this fic a 3, is a retarded dirt squirrel and they don't know what's good. Have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - Takara on October 17, 2006
    Shit..that was totally messed-up. Just as i thought Shadow couldn't that fucked up, he takes to a whole another level. But, lets just see how crazy that dark hedgehog really is in the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - BZLF on October 17, 2006
    Jeez your sick. Seriously I mean it. I don't know why but this chapter just seems really screwed up. And if next chapter is going to be worse.. I'm not so sure I'm looking forward to it but I will read it and Review.
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on October 16, 2006
    that was the most sick AND depraved thing i've EVER read!! ......update soon.
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  • From theamazingguzzardo on October 13, 2006
    I love this story. Delightfully twisted!
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  • From ANON - Takara on October 10, 2006
    My god, This is the slickest of slick stories there is. Poor Rouge. well, it was good of her while it lasted. i mean how bad can Shadow tortured the bat girl anyways? ..oh wait, this is Shadow were talking about, right? ..shit, oh well. Well, can't wait for the brutal, bloody torture.

    see ya's, soon.
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on October 10, 2006
    I can't wait for the next chapter. I do like Rouge's character but I can't wait to see what Shadow does to her since he's so pissed. Though I like that she put up such a fight. But him with a Chaos Emerald = bad/evil fun.

    ::chants:: Please don't hurt Tailes. Please don't hurt Tails. ::end chant::

    See, I'll say that with every chapter, that way, when you get to his characters, you'll hopefully be nicer to him. XD
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