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Reviews for ARAAT4: Origins

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - olbed on August 04, 2011
    Wait, if Mirrage was made as a secret 'latch key' against Shadow, should GUN, or some other force turn him evil, why the hell is she out in the open as comon knowledge to scientists other than Gerald? You have a serious loophole here.
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  • From ANON - A Anand on March 22, 2011
    This is the best story I have read in months, I think that so far these are going well and you should keep going atleast until ARAAT 20, I also think that you should publish them into a book
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  • From inaba on April 03, 2010
    this might sound stupid but it's my first time reading part four, why dose it seem like there's something missing before chapter one?
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  • From SonicShadowFan89 on September 28, 2007
    I like this chapter. It really got me thinking and I definately want to read more. But for now, I think I'll take a break from this story since I read two or three of these chappie's already.
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  • From SonicShadowFan89 on September 16, 2007
    Oh man... Ashura is such a jerk. Curse him and his mind control!>.< But anyway... Great story you guys have so far.;)
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  • From SonicShadowFan89 on September 16, 2007
    Was that character really Sonic or not? I must find out!^_^
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  • From ANON - N/A on March 24, 2007
    An excellent tie-up ending, nicely done. Of course, it's ot like only TWO things have changed... The letter, Midnights stasis (although technically, we never saw him, alive OR dead, in the previous one), Mirage's memories...Yah.
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  • From DisasterMaster on March 17, 2007
    There were two stasis pods in the lab. One had Ashura in it, just like she remembered. The other was empty, waiting for Gerald, or Maria…

    She set the co-ordinates for the occupied pod, and ejected it, walking over to the window to watch it head towards the sun.

    “Am I close to your heart now, fucker?” she spat.

    XD. That part was hilarious. That pansy Ashura finally got what he deserved.

    ;_; But the rest of the chapter was terribly sad. Full of gore too. This is probably ARAAT4's best chapter. 4.5 out of 5. Awaiting the Epilogue.
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  • From ANON - N/A on March 17, 2007
    While I'm all for teary, emotional last moments, did I read that wrong or did they have it in full view of the mech? Actually, even if they had it in the convenaintly placed hallway- What the HELL was that mech doing? Polishing it's missiles? Why didn't it just step up to the hallway, or circumvent whatever other cover there was and riddle the pair with bullets?

    Other than that, a damnably fine chapter.
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  • From Weasel on March 17, 2007
    DAMN IT, I liked Midnight. =(
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2007
    Well, Mirage in Chapter 20 is WRONG totally! Frankly, ANYONE who would take a child from it's mother without reason (like they thought the child was in danger) is a monster and should be destroyed.

    Usually, I am very forgiving of other people's faults and bad acts, but this is ONE INSTANCE where I have to draw the line. Midnight was right, the GUN soldiers deserved everything that they got.
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  • From ANON - January1979 on March 12, 2007
    And Knuckles was born!
    Eh uh...Does this explain why he wears the gloves? To hide the claws?
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  • From ANON - Villains Vale on March 12, 2007
    Awesome,I'm guessing that Knuckles is Mirage and Midnights child,you really do twist shit up eh Harley?

    Nice Jurassic Park 3 quote thrown in there at the end too.
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  • From ANON - Rand on March 11, 2007
    Well that was interesting. I think Mirage overeacted just a bit, mostly because if she were high on demerol witch is the drug they would give you if you had been shot. She wouldent give a d**m about what was going on around her. But that was just a thought running through my head.

    On the note of Mirage complaints I dont see any reason too. I maen she is the only and I do mean only original char that I kind of like. On that note I will say this the story started out as a Shadow Amy fic and I ask you not to forget that in your mad original char ravings.
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  • From CrazyIvan on March 11, 2007
    Well spank you very much, I at least appreciate the agknowlegement. And you have a point, I don't know how I didn't catch that thing between Sonic and Sally. Oh well.

    This is CrazyIvan, signing off for now, Semper phi, carry on...
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