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Reviews for Majestic Twilight

By : omega13
  • From ANON - I'm not giving my name to some website! on December 02, 2007
    I absolutely love this story. While the sex scenes are well written and very enjoyable to read, I find myself more interested in how the story is unfolding. Great work, I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - applecore on October 15, 2007
    Just wanted to say best erotic zelda story I've ever read. Heck, this is better than mpst erotic fiction I've read, and that's saying something. You have some real talent in writing, and not just the sex parts.

    May I make a suggestion? There is a scene just after Link (in wolf form) meets Zelda for the first time, that Minda transforms in Ilia in order to mock him/remind him about his reasons for fighting. I think theirs potential for an interesting scene based off that. Like when Link is in human form again Minda takes that form and "has her fun" with him, which is both pleasurable and cruel to Link and fits Minda's personality. Personally I can't get behind Link/Midna when Midna is in imp form.

    How long until mocre of this is out? Any idea?
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  • From ANON - Vagrant on August 27, 2007
    God, I'm loving this story so far. The first four chapters were great, so I look forward to some more stuff really soon. I always did think Link could make a huge score off grateful women in TP. There are so many... I don't suppose there's a Midna tale coming up, is there? What with the twilight about to coat the land and all...

    Also, I wanna see (way later on) Link's boat ride, where he destroys rocks with bomb arrows, and then upends the boat as it goes over the waterfall. Zora boat girl rescues him from drowning and HOORAY! Stuff happens.

    And Telma, just for laughs, cause her breasts are as big as Link's head.
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  • From ANON - Konous on August 26, 2007
    This would be I think one of the only high quality Twilight Princess lemons series of all, you blend both the baser tendencies of the mind in sex while at the same time taking the approach of it as two people in full awareness of the act itself. Bravo.

    However, I was wondering if people have given you requests for Link and Beth, I ask have any given you for Midna, both adult and child, I think it would be a shame to not include her in the fun especially considering she's there throughout the entire game both as an adviser and companion with back story, much more so than Navi ever had.

    Take care,

    Konous
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  • From ANON - Charles on August 15, 2007
    Your text is very good, speaking as a fellow writer. You do seem to avoid personal names like the plague during sex scenes, leaving the reader with a plethora of "The apparent savior", "The young rancher", "The mayor’s daughter", and "The saucy housewife". While these are fine in small doses, I found it to be rather excessive.

    Other than that, I do like where you're going with it, and I hope to see you continue to update soon.

    Take care, best of luck!

    ~Charles
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2007
    Amazing. By far the best Zelda fanfic on the sight.
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  • From applecore on July 15, 2007
    Hey again. Just thought you might find this interesting. In Twilight Princess, just after you meet Zelda te first time, Midna takes the form of Ilia for a moment. Thought that might help you out with ideas. Rreally looking forward to future updates.
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  • From ANON - JWM on July 04, 2007
    Whew! That was a very hot chapter, so much so that it makes me wonder how incredible the next one will be.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2007
    More! I can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Omega Fan on May 30, 2007
    Are you still updating this story? You really should, as it's brilliantly written. +++++
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  • From ANON - annonnymouse on May 19, 2007
    perhaps the best realized sstory In this vein that I have ever read! Even though I have only read the first chapters as of now, I know that this is one of those rare gems, a story that provides first class erotic writing as well as true and realistic (maybe) insight into the game.
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  • From Tycho on April 30, 2007
    Excellent work, sir. I'm at a disadvantage, though, since I've never actually played any Legend of Zelda games. Madness, I know. Luckily for me, your story stands on its own quite well, but I imagine that fans of the game are getting an even more satisfying experience. Link seems like a quite amiable and sympathetic character in Heated Twilight, and the female characters have an enjoyably strong presence to them. Your effort and talent is evident, and I look forward to seeing more. Now I just have to go buy a Wii and play this game... If I could find a Wii to begin with. Acursed shortages!

    I'm afraid your email appeared "hidden" in your profile, so if you could share that, it would be appreciated.

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Ninja Kasuga on April 29, 2007
    Wow! This is one of the more detailed and well-written Zelda-lemon series out there!! All the revisions made have all made sense and the characterizations are down to a T of their original core with any add-ons perfectly in harmony with said character cores.

    The engagement between Link and Illa was perfectly done, both romantic and passionate without degrading into pure smut-drivel.

    Uli and Link's "mentor/student" encounter was well handled, a very tastefully handled situation without compromising their character traits.

    I look forward to more of this series! As for the age manipulation of the younger generation for use in future "sessions" I say let it be so!

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  • From ANON - Seah on April 17, 2007
    sorry, too lazy to sign in. >.
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  • From DemonicKnight on April 17, 2007
    This is excellent. Please continue.
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