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Reviews for Veil of Twilight

By : ericblaire
  • From ANON - JB` on August 12, 2010
    That was a hot sex. ^__^ I'm actually happy that those to ended up together... I wasn't sure which idea I liked, of which girl... But I think I like this one better than any of the others. Now I'm waiting for Zelda and Gan. =P Don't disappoint me!!!! ^_~
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  • From ANON - dave on August 09, 2010
    Great as always, especially the sex scene. Poor Illia, though.

    Your loyal fan

    Dave
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  • From ANON - JB on July 30, 2010
    That was kind of scary. T_T WHen he put the mask on. It freaked me out! Good job. ^_^ It was still good.
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  • From ANON - JB on July 02, 2010
    Link isn't THAT much of a pimp, sir. =P Although, I'm sure you wish he could be.
    I really liked how you made him go back in time and meet the other links from the other story you made. ^_^ And the way Zelda met the good Ganon. It's cool! And I'm excited for what is going to happen next! I like your creative ideas!
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  • From ANON - JB on July 02, 2010
    I enjoyed that male fairy part!!! It was hot.
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  • From ANON - Max on June 23, 2010
    Nice, good reveal on the bloodline of Link (new Link I guess) and I'm intrigued by the Ganondorf/Zelda thing too.

    Keep it up!
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  • From Embraceofshadows on June 14, 2010
    Great job as always I'm eager for the next chapter.
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  • From daveb on June 12, 2010
    Poor Saria...... I hope she gets to be with Vaati in the end. I hope Midna finds someone too, so long as it isn't Link (he belongs with Illia) or Vaati (Saria).

    Great chapter, though. So glad to see what happened to the CiT gang. I wonder what Link and Sheik's kid(s) are like.
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  • From ANON - Max on June 09, 2010
    Nice to see another installment, and pulling the old link/dark link into it was really surprising, but not unpleasantly so. Very interested in seeing where this goes.

    I think readers try to be understanding of writer's block; I do because I can't write for shit, so I don't even get to the point of having a problem with material. Just keep at it and trust me, people will pop in from time to time to see how the story is.

    Thanks for your work.
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  • From ANON - Nanya on June 05, 2010
    Wow, this is one of the best stories I've read on this site, and it's been a fun ride so far. Hope it doesn't stop any time soon. Though, it is too bad that Link and the Great Fairie didn't get more time together onscreen, huh? Still, here's hoping for more of a great story.
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  • From themaidenlyra on May 29, 2010
    i so love this story and i cant wait for it to continue. it is as good as Clearer In Time in its own way of course...i love the way you brought the two together yet left them ther own stories...so yeah keep up the awsome work


    all my love The Maiden Lyra
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  • From daveb on May 05, 2010
    Absolutely brill. It'll be good to see what happened to the CiT gang.
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  • From Embraceofshadows on May 04, 2010
    Great job as always keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Max on May 04, 2010
    I like how the story is going, especially if you're pulling more of the "nobler" Ganondorf. I intensely dislike evil-for-its-own-sake bad guys, and since Zant is already close enough, it'd be cool if Ganondorf was more the jaded former good guy, since it seems Ganon is still piggy. Stands to reason some of the evil might've left Ganondorf.

    All speculation though. Anyways it's always good to see more of your writing, thanks for the latest installment.

    Happy writing,
    Max
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  • From daveb on April 24, 2010
    Ch15, brill as always.
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