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Reviews for Veil of Twilight

By : ericblaire
  • From ANON - Anton on November 02, 2009
    Great chapter man, you certainly don't disappoint.
    One thing though I caught one small typo, where it says "“See,” he said to the older woman. “I told you.”" it should say she, Nothing major just thought I'd point it out.
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  • From ANON - Lord Carty on October 17, 2009
    Eli Frost,
    Another perfectly crafted chapter, full of imagery and beautiful interplay of characters. Again, your work is astounding, and a joy to read. I eagerly away chapter nine. Thank you so much for including Agitha... even if she never 'has her fun' within the bounds of your story, thank you for including my favorite LoZ bit-character ever into your story.
    My hat remains off to you, sir.
    -Lord Joshua Carty
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  • From daveb on October 17, 2009
    Amazing, as ever. Love the humour.
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  • From ANON - Anton on October 17, 2009
    Man I know I said it before but your ability to capture characters personalities is dead on.
    Knowing your humor this next chapter should be good.
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  • From ANON - mikey on October 16, 2009
    cant wait to see how link deals with her memory loss! great chapter elli!
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  • From ANON - Lord Carty on October 08, 2009
    To Eli Frost,
    You, sir, are a god. I only just began reading your Zelda fics, but after the first three chapters of 'Veil of Twilight,' I had to sit down and polished off your OoT story in one sitting. In comparison, I notice Link is a lot more emotional and vocal in this fic. It's different, but different is good; and if it suits whatever story you're cooking up here, then I wouldn't dare naysay it. Please, I beg you, if it is possible notify me when more chapters of this are up. I await them eagerly. Keep up the exceptional work.
    -Lord Joshua Carty.
    ps. I want nothing less than to impede your story in any way, but TP has such a delicious selection of lady-types... as long as it fits in your grand design, try and show Agitha some love :) She's so adorable, but she needs to have some passion for something that has less than six legs.
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  • From ANON - ANN on October 07, 2009
    Your writing is good but I wish that the story would move a little faster. I can't wait for Ashei to show up!
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  • From daveb on October 07, 2009
    Amazing. Great character dialogue.
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  • From ANON - Anton on October 06, 2009
    Great job man you really know how to write. I only wish your chapters were longer.
    The pacing seems fine to me. Taking it a little slower allows you to flesh out the story more making for a better read.
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  • From ANON - mikey on October 05, 2009
    veeery interesting i like it
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  • From daveb on September 12, 2009
    A little short, but still great.
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  • From ANON - mikey on September 10, 2009
    niiice sad bit there in the begeing im wondering how rails or whoever will sruvive but i like it very nice ver nice and FINALY! someone eals who is creeped out by the frigign monkeys
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  • From ANON - Anton on August 17, 2009
    Another great chapter man, you know how to get Midna's personality perfectly.
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  • From daveb on August 15, 2009
    Excellent, good to see the return of you trademark humour.
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  • From ANON - JBails on August 07, 2009
    When you finished your take on OOT I really hoped you would do one for TP, you do not disappoint, Im going to follow you all the way :)
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