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Reviews for Veil of Twilight

By : ericblaire
  • From Embraceofshadows on April 21, 2010
    I really enjoy your stories. I read Clearer in Time before this one and loved it. This one is just as good. Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2010
    I like how the stories are sort of intermingling. Hope to see soon where it goes!
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  • From daveb on March 19, 2010
    Outstanding, as always. Glad to see Link and Ilia are growing close again, that's my fave pairing. Although I hope Midna gets a happy ending as well, just with someone else (maybe Zelda).

    Great sex scene btw, I'd almost forgotten how great your lemons are.

    Thanks and update soon, from your biggest fan.
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  • From ANON - Max on March 08, 2010
    Nice to see you're writing again, hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine ^_^ on February 17, 2010
    You are such a perv.
    You would have him get all happy for getting kissed by a Queen. Oh oh! A beautiful Queen I mean! :P
    So cute.
    And the waterfall thing. I greatly enjoyed that. :) perv...

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  • From ANON - Coelacanth on January 24, 2010
    Hello there! I just created an account to tell you how much I've enjoyed your stories. I read all of Clearer in Time and it was an incredible story, original and inspired. A couple of kinks here and there, but nothing that would take away from its greatness. I'm eagerly following your updates on Veil of Twilight, and I have to say so far I don't like it quite as much as C.i.T but that's likely because I feel more closely drawn to OoT. Not to say that V.o.T isn't as good in every way, it's just that as I said it's linked to my personal favoring. Please, keep up the great work. I am an avid reader, and a writer myself (thought I've never done sexual stories lol) and it's encouraging to see people who can write well and convey their story as well as you do. Kudos to you sir, my hat is off. Anyway, I tend to get long winded so I will cut myself off now. Keep up the fantastic work, I'll be reading your future stories and commenting on the accordingly from now on. Oh, and btw if you need anyone to grammar check your work before you submit it I'll be glad to, I know it's always easy to miss one's own mistakes.
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  • From daveb on January 23, 2010
    Great chapter, especially the humour.

    So, he aint Links descendant, eh.
    He's obviously Dark Link and Malons descendant then. I have a feeling Ilia is Link and Sheiks descendant.

    Link/Ilia pairing ftw. Even if I'm right on both counts, they wouldn't related. Besides, I think they belong together.
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  • From ANON - Max on January 23, 2010
    Good to see more of this one, though less action than I'd like. I'll wait for more development.

    Hope to see more soon.
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  • From Agravain on January 22, 2010
    Great to see a new chapter, brilliant as always Eli.

    Always a pleasure reading your stories.
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  • From ANON - mikey on November 23, 2009
    absolutly love the new chapters man i realy like how lila reacted to link in castle town and saria! i love it! i cant wait to see what happens! care to send me any mroe beta drafts?
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  • From ANON - Max on November 17, 2009
    Vaati and Saria are in this one, cool.

    I like where this is going.
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  • From DTAngel on November 09, 2009
    There was a lemon in this story really? LOL JK i know there was. Your doing a great job keep it up. I read through your first and the moment I saw the first chapter of this I dived right in.
    The only questiong which I probably know the answer to it, the second tunic that wouldn't happened to have belonged Sheik (aka: Zelda) would it?
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  • From daveb on November 08, 2009
    Lovely. Nice to see the Sheik/Link references. Yay for Illia/Link pairing (I hope that it ends with those 2 together).
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  • From ANON - Max on November 05, 2009
    Nice story, I like your work.

    Hope to see more soon.
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  • From daveb on November 02, 2009
    Awesome as always. Illias memory is much more realistic than in the game.
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