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Reviews for Endgame

By : RyuaAlba
  • From ANON - Presto-chan on September 28, 2013
    What a great story! You have masterfully balanced the smut and plot, while making the characters interesting and believable. I especially love your Ganondorf. He's both harsh and ambitious, as well as having a human side that is protective and values hard work. I really can't wait for the next chapters, because I got sucked into the story and want to know what happens next (and, I admit, the pervert inside wants more action)! A great piece of writing I'm hoping to see updated often.

    ~Presto-chan
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  • From ANON - sichel on September 24, 2013
    So is there gonna be an update soon or what's the go?
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  • From newenglandee on September 01, 2013
    Hmm. COLIN getting the Master Sword.

    Well, I'm not surprised. It can't in good conscience function for Link. Link and Zelda seem to have basically abdicated their rightful positions as the true and honorable wielders of their Triforces because of what they've let Ganondorf do. He attempted to murder them and Midna, beat up, degraded and freakin' TORTURED them, tried to take over the kingdom AND the Twilight people, is directly responsible for what befell MIDNA'S race because of what he did with Zant and therefore is responsible for all of this, and he RAPED Zelda and Link...and they've gone Stockholm Syndrome.

    Link doesn't deserve the sword.
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  • From ANON - marc on September 01, 2013
    Interesting twist, that Link can somehow keep the triforce, but lose the sword...I will never stop loving your twists on Zelda lore.
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  • From ANON - Quiche on August 31, 2013
    Cripes, you write battle scenes just as compellingly as you write everything else. Link's luck's been alternately rough and sweet since the start. Good thing the guy heals fast. I hope he gets some sugar from the other two thirds of the threesome to balance the scales soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2013
    Wow, this is super compelling! I like how there's a good balance of plot and sex, and both Zelda and Link gradually being won over to Ganondorf's side is intriguing and chilling. I have a new favorite Twilight Princess fic.
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  • From ANON - jacie on August 25, 2013
    And you'll update again pretty soon right?
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  • From ANON - marc on August 20, 2013
    Oh the Dionysian nature of this story is lush and deadly, like a rich poison mixed with a sweet wine. I can't wait to see where the smoke from the battlefields carries next, whether it be towards Ganondorf's chambers, his war-room or his tomb.
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  • From ANON - JudgeHoea on August 08, 2013
    Great chapter! Can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - Another Zelda Fan on July 29, 2013
    ok just a few suggestions just cuz i love the story and want to read more. 1. I love link, he has been my hero crush since i was like 10, and everybody ends up humiliating him in their stories which i find completely unfair, so i suggest instead of ganon humiliating him it should be the other way around. or better yet just leave link alone hes been used enough with zelda (damn her using him just to escape the fucked up stuff ganon did to her.) which im not completely sure thats what she is doing so forgive me for jumping to conclusions. 2. if zelda IS using link i think he should get what he deserves in the end just cuz hes an all around good guy. Those being said i love the story line and the sex scenes with all the gory detail. keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - marc on July 22, 2013
    The story is like watching an approaching storm and I am deliciously anxious for that first drop of rain.

    Otherwise, kudos to the characterisation here, you really have a knack for making Link seem human, relatable. In most Zelda fanfiction, even though he's the hero of the series, I find writers have a hard time finding an authentic voice for him, and further cementing it; he's either overtly innocent teen or steadfast young man, but in Endgame, something new or better is working with Link (and to great effect!) without seeming trite or overdone. It's the same with Zelda, she's either generous princess or staunch royal, but here she's endearingly dispassionate and a perfect foil for Ganon's zealous tyrant/carnal older man and Link's eager warrior/pressure youth. But your Ganon, how I love your Ganon; affably evil, calculating, vicious. There's this looming threat that what he might do is worse than what he's already doing and I absolutely adore it

    Bring on the next chapter!
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  • From verifiaman on July 21, 2013
    Wow... that was a nice twist. blood magic. it continues to shock me that the porn site makes better fanfiction than the fanfiction site.
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  • From ANON - Lora on July 18, 2013
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This story is really good! I really hope you haven't abandoned it! Keep writing! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Another Zelda Fan on July 15, 2013
    this is an amazing story im glad i found it! i love the story line and the fact that its interesting, not just strait up porn. ive read all chapters in one night ha so keep writing i will be waiting for the next one.
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  • From ANON - JudgeHoea on July 15, 2013
    Great! You updated! I'm very happy to see that you are continuing this story, I was worried that it was abandoned when I first started reading it. This is definitely one of the better stories that I've read on this site, you're a great writer and the concept is very intriging. I hope you decide to see it through to the end.

    Even though I complained about how you were portraying Midna in my last review, I actually ended up liking how you portrayed her in this chapter. I guess I shouldn't have been so quick to judge! But I do see how she's acting and her personality as very plausable. So, great job! Was a very interesting chapter overall, I look forward to seeing how it all unfolds.

    Keep up the good work! I hope you are able to update soon!:)
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