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Reviews for Endgame

By : RyuaAlba
  • From DrakeClawfang on July 14, 2013
    A very unique and interesting fic, your characterization of Ganondorf is very compelling and the development of his relationship with Zelda and Link is gradual and believable. The sexual content fits the story well and is well-written, and if I may say, now that you've teased a chance for Midna to either get Link to herself or to join him or Zelda, I'm feeling you have to eventually it to us :p
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  • From newenglandee on July 13, 2013
    Ah, good, a realistic and understandable chapter. No misunderstandings, Link just flat out explains what's going on, why what's going on IS going on, and what he and Zelda have been doing AND we see how basically WHIPPED he's become under Ganondorf manipulations as we see Midna's actually got a plan that could really work and bring Ganondorf down! Now if Link can just gain back the strength he had and remember WHY he was chosen to wield Courage...
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  • From ANON - marc on July 13, 2013
    You always keep such even pace, from the rough seas of prior chapters, the steady waters of this one are superbly calming; everything about Midna's temperament and how it matches the steamy depths of the spring was an excellent parable. But I think what I love best about your story is that, either way it ends, with Zelda and Link looking down on Ganon's corpse or Ganondorf twisting a chain around Hyrule, it'd still be a brilliant read.
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  • From ANON - JudgeHoea on July 12, 2013
    I do hope you have not abandoned this story! It's great, I thoroughly enjoyed all 16 chapters and look forward to the next update!

    One of my main qualms with Zelda fanfiction is that the characters are often butched. Especially when it comes to rape fics, where they turn Zelda and/or Link into a sobbing weakling after being raped by Ganon (and then in the very next chapter they instantly fall in love with him, I'm sure you know what I'm talking about). You didn't do that, which I applaud. I feel as though you capture well how Zelda and Link would act in those situations. Their dialogue and mannerisms seem spot on. The fact that you write well helps a lot too.

    I love the sweet, yet sexy relationship between Link and Zelda. The splash of consensual sex inbetween rape scenes is nice. There is a lot of sex between them, but it is well written and believable. And somehow, you managed to integrate Ganondorf into that relationship without making it seem awkward and out of character. I don't think I've ever read a LoZ story where Ganon wanted both Zelda and Link sexually, but you made it work(I admit I am looking forward a possible sex scene/rape between Link and Ganon, but I'm glad you aren't rushing it.)

    My only issue with the story is that I feel like Midna is slightly out of character. Perhaps I missed something in the story that explained why she is acting the way she is, but based on that game, it didn't seem like she ever had the desire to rule both the light and dark world like Zant did. She simply wanted to save her people, dethrone Zant, and return the world to the way it was and both Link and Zelda helped her with that. She definitely was sassy, and kind've a bitch at first, but I don't see why she would want to kill Zelda and take over Hyrule. Still, her OOCness is very minor, and certainly isn't enough to make me dislike the story. It seems as though her character is being reintroduced in this next chapter, so hopefully the reasoning behind her actions will be explained more.

    Kudos to you! I look forward to an update!
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  • From ANON - sada on July 11, 2013
    Oh, I like this, I like this a lot. I really hope you decide to continue
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  • From ANON - montauk on July 08, 2013
    Oh snap son.
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  • From ANON - iloveit on June 30, 2013
    *breathes deeply, dies*...this fic you guys, this fic *dies again*. But seriously, you write such an invested world, where everything seems measured and unhurried, from Zelda gauging Ganondorf's threats to Ganon deciding how much slack to give his captives to Link trying his best to give Zelda comfort without it coming from a place of fear or desperation. Considering the chaos you just went through, this is quite a thing to see. All that said, I'm really liking this and after having read Game Over, I'm starting to see what it is about Endgame that makes it so unique and different from similar fanfics: really this is Link/Ganondorf story largely told from Zelda's POV.
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  • From ANON - marc on June 30, 2013
    I do hope you're doing OK in the wake of this flooding. Natural disasters always yield unpredictable results in the fallout, so I wish that you find the tools to recover. Now, about the story, again, delicious chapter. I'm not sure if you meant to or not, but Link and Zelda seem to be going through some very realistic 'shelter shock' in being Ganon's prisoners and it greatly humanises them here. As for Ganon himself, this has to be one of my favourite iterations of Sir Dragmire in a fanfic; he's powerful and ominous and direct, but above all manipulatively tactful. There's always this sense of violence that bays at the edge of the sexual politics and it begs this morbid curiosity out of me. It's like walking alone at night and then suddenly hearing footsteps behind you and you don't know whether to stop and turn around or walk faster.
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  • From ANON - jade on June 30, 2013
    God help me this just keeps getting better!
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  • From verifiaman on June 30, 2013
    you ever though tof making an index and stuff? like your own fan theories? you put a lot of thought into it and i would really like to see what you come up with with alternate histories and the like.,
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  • From ANON - marc on June 21, 2013
    Again, brilliant chapter. You really have a way of bringing balance to this scenario and nice subtlety in bringing Link and Ganon closer (after passage upon passage of Zelda/Ganondorf, I feel like the focus on the menage-a-trois should start to emerge or else this just gets reduced to yet another cuckold!Link story...separate from the herd man!). I'm hoping we get a Link/Ganondorf chapter soon, because (and this is no criticism on you) eventually the Zelda/Ganon dynamic, like all inner conflicts, will reach a point where there's just no meat left on the bone.
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  • From ANON - Izzygirl on June 16, 2013
    I love this story! I hadn't ever considered all three of them together but I think it works perfectly. I like the progression, it feels very natural. I am hoping that Ganondorf and Link get closer and I am very interested to see how the relationship develops between the three of them. You have kept them all in character and the story is very well written. Well I have throughly enjoyed reading what you have so far and I am looking forward to what comes next.
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  • From ANON - marc on June 12, 2013
    I literally cannot get enough of this story. Ganondorf's treatment of Link and Zelda is like a hand closing over a flower. It's malicious and brilliant (and admittedly, it's nice to see Link no longer taking such a passive role) and that that last line in this chapter tells me Ganon wouldn't be very good at keeping a garden. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - iloveit on June 11, 2013
    Oh my god...Ganondorf is just so deranged and I am enjoying every moment of it! I love when authors' seek the psychosexual interpretations of the triforce bearers (it always makes for such interesting reads), and this fic in particular is so tasteful and well-written concerning the subject matter. Bring on chapter 14!
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  • From ANON - tactic on June 09, 2013
    God, the tension in this story just keep getting wound taut enough to bruise. Literally salivating to know Ganondorf's plan...

    Also, it's nice to see a little confidence return to your writing now, after what felt likes weeks worth of appealing to fan-headcases, so keep up the great work! After all, one of the great joys in reading fan fiction is to see refreshing takes on the property, not just regurgitation.
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