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Reviews for Endgame

By : RyuaAlba
  • From ANON - damaged-lips on June 02, 2013
    You don't always have to face up to every criticism this story receives; give yourself time as an author to figure out where it needs to go, let YOUR message shine through. I think a lot of fanfic readers don't take enough of a step back when reading fan-works (which is an essential part of the process), and personally, I think what you're doing as a fanfic writer is ambitious and honest.
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  • From ANON - marc on June 01, 2013
    Each chapter is just so tense, like something balancing on the edge of shelf and threatening to spill.
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  • From ANON - Maddi on May 31, 2013
    I'm a bit conflicted about this story, I'll admit. It's not exactly bad to be honest: I appreciate the fact that it's well written and I mostly appreciate the fact the Zelda didn't become some simpering hentai maiden: in other words, she gets raped and BOOM! all of a sudden, she's 'in love with' or completely submissive to Ganondorf. So that's a plus, because it's done far,far too much in fan fictions where Zelda x Ganondorf couplings are involved.

    However... I don't know. I almost wonder what or why Link is really...there for. It seems the story could work just as easily without him and Ganondorf hasn't really done or shown much of a reason to actually keep him alive. He's said one, sure, but I'm not seeing how Link being a general (when it's obvious how defiant he is and would jump at chance to get him and Zelda out of the situation) will really help: the people already trust him to a degree and Zelda is being forced to support him so the people will trust him further, he's made it obvious he won't kill Zelda yet and Link literally has failed in stopping him harming and/or raping her, and to top it off, he can obviously defeat Link easily and even turn him into his wolf form. So why is he bothering having him around? I mean Zelda even has her secondary purposes, what with the raping and such but Link is just seeming there for nothing more than moral support for Zelda. The story is obviously still going, so maybe we just haven't gotten there yet, so I'm not trying to be rude, but nine (one chapter is missing ^_^) and I'm like "Okay Link...make a daring escape, be forced to clean dishes, get raped, do a dance, do something other then fail at your job (saving Zelda and Hyrule) and comforting Zelda!" Lol.

    I do admit, I too see it a bit of a stretch that Hyrule or even the civilzations around it, would trust Ganondorf at all, even with him so calling saving it from the Twilight Realm. More so if the sages are/were aware that's exactly where Gaonondorf did or could end up in, the Twilight Realm. I'm also shocked he hasn't tried to forced Zelda and Link to give up their Triforces, since that's always been more of his primary goal, and he wouldn't need either of them (well maybe Zelda as a sex slave apparently) if he got that. Ad now that I think anout it, if he could just stop and defeat Link and Zelda, why he wouldn't again, kill Link and Zelda (or Go-go sex enslavement for her I suppose) and just take over with his own power and magic. he's never really been one to show or feel he 'needs' the people's favor and easily apparently takeds over Hyrule, no problem. Maybe that's where a little of my confusion is coming in too: Ganondorf isn't completely OoC (you portray his personality quite well), but his reasoning and motivation seem a bit off here compared to how he usually is, even in Twilight Princess.

    Now, to be fair to you, part of this is obvious artistic licenses and such, but it seems like a 'what if' continuation of TP, and even on that level, Ganondorf seems...off in his motives. A least to me anyway. But again to be fair, the story isn't done yet and there is still much to be covered. So want to give it more a chance because I do actually like it so far.

    And again, I'm actually still quite interested in your story and want to see where exactly it's going: I'm interested to see where this stuff with Midna will go and to see if poor Link and Zelda can at least get some form of a one up going for themselves. Again, THANK YOU for portraying the whole rape thing with Zelda in a more compelling and likable fashion. Okay, I don't like her getting raped (lmao) but you make her reactions and overall scenes believable and don't degrade her characterization into hentai levels of WTH, so you already won on that mark.

    Looking forward to more!
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  • From verifiaman on May 25, 2013
    A midna that wants revenge on hyrule. if it wasnt for all that midna link fanfiction i'd probably see something like that. unfortunately it'd probably be as bad as the midna link fanfiction
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  • From newenglandee on May 20, 2013
    Oh. OHHH. This explains a few things. I owe you an apology for being so vitriolic. It all just seemed so really out-of-character and to be such a big plot hole for all of Hyrule to just go along with the big bad that everybody knew from History was the evil traitorous wizard Ganondorf. But if Midna isn't actually DEAD, well this DOES provide quite a fascinating twist!
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  • From ANON - forgetthatonewierdflamer on May 20, 2013
    This just keeps getting better with every chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dienna on May 18, 2013
    Such brutality, but so unflinching you can't stop reading. Really need to see what happens next!
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  • From verifiaman on May 18, 2013
    Another well written chapter
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  • From newenglandee on May 18, 2013
    I can't believe you did it! You went this route! Even though it makes NO sense from ANY media he's been in, even though the SMART thing and the MORAL thing would be to flat out TELL everyone what Ganondorf did, even though there should be SPIRITS whom Link FREED who should be aiding him right now, even though Zelda's supposed to be a sorcerer, even though Link's allies and the races he befriended FAR outclass and outnumber ANYTHING Ganondorf could get hold of, even though there's NO reason why Ganondorf should still be alive consider Zant supposedly acted from beyond the grave to kill him, you went this route. I cannot believe how utterly you buttfucked the source material, disrespected the characters the fans of the game love most, and how you expect us to just go along with this. I. am. ashamed. of. you. And you should be ashamed of YOURSELF. You've failed as fan of the games, you've failed basic questions of logic and how stories are supposed to work, you have failed as a WRITER. What POSSIBLE decent justification could you have for this...THIS...UTTERLY IDIOTIC tale that makes NO sense once you actually stop and THINK about what's happened?
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  • From newenglandee on May 14, 2013
    For the love of GOD, don't let him get away with this! Having Midna die went against what actually happened in the story bad enough, along with Zelda SOMEHOW not having any magical powers whatsoever, which comes off as MAJORLY out of character. But the idea that they should get Ganondorf get away with being portrayed as this beneficent dictator is a LOAD. He's GANONDORF! EVERYBODY remembers that he tried to TAKE OVER THE WORLD! That he's a MURDERING SORCERER who CANNOT BE TRUSTED! They should publically announce he's got her kidnapped and raped her and have the kingdom rise up in revolt! He'd get tossed clean off his throne in a week!
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  • From verifiaman on May 13, 2013
    Ohh nice depth. good plot. hope to see this wont end in the single digits.
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  • From newenglandee on May 10, 2013
    You're not just gonna let that selfish tyrant get away with this, are you? Isn't Zelda supposed to be a wizard, why can't she just magic up a solution? i mean she created magical arrows that could turn Ganondorf in a PINCUSHION?!
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  • From ANON - Verifiaman on May 09, 2013
    Aww that was sweet! Good dick move on ganondorf
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  • From ANON - lphie on May 05, 2013
    Well written and such intriguing premise, can't wait for more chapters.
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