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By : sillyneko345
  • From ANON - MariMeeko on July 16, 2013
    Oh wonderful. Simply wonderful! Every time I think I have a favorite chapter, you write a new one with new antics and the teasing and tension getting slowly better and aiming for that bulls-eye! Poor, mortified Daxter. Crafty, popsicle-sucking Jak. Seriously, popsicle teasing is the absolute BEST I don't know why. lol.

    And Torn and Jinx's convo had me grinning like an idiot for our conversations of it on tumblr XD I love that they even have a bro-handshake! (and their out take was perfect for them. Absolutely. Jinx is such a little shit and will never let Torn forget it.)

    Don't worry Killer, soon your humans will get together! and it will be glorious!(just be prepared for noises at all hours of the night, woops)
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  • From ANON - aidenf1994 on July 07, 2013
    dam i want to read about errol getting daxter, but you only wrote about it in the first two chapters, does errol come back for daxter or is it all just jak and daxter now?
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  • From TaintedEmerald on July 01, 2013
    That. Was. Incredible!

    You've outdone yourself this time. Completely and utterly loved this chapter. The way it started, what happened in the middle (at first I thought you were setting up Torn and Ashelin, then that curve ball!), and that ending (an evil Jak is a good Jak)! Not to mention the build up you planted for the next chapter. Just brilliant. And sexy. And funny. And creative.

    Anyways, as I'm sure you can tell, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you're having a great summer so far, and keep writing these beautiful, beautiful stories of yours.
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  • From Jakkumon on June 26, 2013
    Ok so this is my review of Chapter 16 (because when posting a review from a phone it doesn't appear to actually work).

    But by the time I got back on the computer to read CH16 again you'd posted CH17, so gonna do this review for CH16 and then read CH17 ideally soon (I had a quick skip through of it) and then post another one.

    So yeah, there was one sentence that I felt should have had the word 'been' in it, I'll put it here with (been) like that in the middle of it;

    Let Jak think he would have popped a boner if it had (been) anybody else rubbing his back.

    Unless it is just me reading it as that then nevermind.

    And then the other thing I added about was all the like thought bits of Daxter that you write in italics, they are so funny!

    And then the final bit of this was what I wrote on the other review thing that I left here.

    So now I'm all up to date.
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  • From ANON - ChromaPharm on June 22, 2013
    JAAAAAAKKK You know! You know he likes you! Stop putting it oooooofff! I have ferret-rage too, little Killer. I think Killer is the #1 shipper of this pair. :| Great work as always Robin, can't wait for next!
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  • From Nanoboy on June 21, 2013
    Oh god, the fanboy in me is practically squealing like a dummy, but this story is getting so damn good. I'm going to go nuts waiting for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - donalgraeme on June 21, 2013
    Sooooooooooooooooo close! You tease! Please, please, please, please, please update soon! The suspense is killing us!

    p.s. Was that an obscure Chitty Chitty Bang Bang reference? "We'll glide in our motorship/ With pride in our ownership/ The envy of all we survey"
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  • From TaintedEmerald on June 09, 2013
    Been waiting for this! And it was well worth the wait!

    Glad to see that not all of the sexual tension went out the window. As I've mentioned, I like the slow pace you've been building up with this story, although I also wouldn't mind if things sped up. Also, poor Dax. First abuse, and now the guy couldn't even get a bit of relief while he was in the system? Well, that does make it all the better when Jak gets to help him out though. Love that you managed to fit in otters into the story as well, now we just need one of them to combine the two somehow.

    Great writing, as always. Hoping things heat up a bit more in the next installment, although the Christmas episode is probably still one or two chapters away. Were you planning on breaking the story into another part for the next semester, or keeping it all together?

    Anyways, keep up the great work! Thanks for slogging on for your fans, since I'm sure writing these novel sized stories can't be too easy.
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  • From Jakkumon on June 04, 2013
    I wrote a review to this on my phone and for some reason the phone said it had posted it but when I look on the PC I don't see it anywhere...

    Which means for the most part I'll have to re-read the chapter and re-post an actual review another day, because I can't remember 90% of what I wrote it.

    The main thing I did write was about the scene that just happened, I personally found that to be an odd situation and I don't think I would ever do summat like that.
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  • From ANON - Liv on May 23, 2013
    I've reverted back to my high school days of checking every 5 minutes to see if the fic I'm reading has updated. I love this! I haven't read or loved a fic like this in years! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - donalgraeme on May 21, 2013
    YES! It took 16 chapters but it came! Wonderful build to a scene that was both fluffy and steamy! If you give us a REAL kiss or a drunken "encounter" next ch. I will worship you! CANNOT WAIT FOR UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - AH36 on May 20, 2013
    Do you realize how excited i get whenever I see an update to this? INSANELY excited! Dancing in place excited! And I was ever so happy to finally see these two finally getting smutty, even if it wasn't sex! I can't wait for more! Please continue to be awesome!
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  • From Nanoboy on May 17, 2013
    God, no matter what happens in each chapter, Im always on the edge of my seat grinning like and idiot.
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  • From ANON - MariMeeko on May 14, 2013
    I agree with Grimreaperchibi, everything about this chapter just really...WORKS. There was just enough eagerness balanced with just the right amount of nervous, "what if he totally thinks I'm a freak" hesitancy in both of them. I was wondering how part of the UST would get resolved without them just jumping into something, and this was the answer! This is a fantastic chapter and now one of my very favorites, not just because there's "sexytimes" in it, but just their entire communications and everything leading up to it and how little by little, they're opening up to each other on this secret but mutual crush thing. And how Jak can obviously read everything about Dax and now just where to push a little and where to give him a bit of space because of the kid's history/anxiety.

    I also have to say that I had to literally stop reading, open up google, and LOOK to see if this turkey/stuffing flavored soda mentioned was a real thing.

    I was not prepared for this knowledge. (WHYYYYY IS THAT A THING) Hopefully Jinx will be merciful at this party. oy. XD Also, yay, more Party hijinks!

    And OTTERS. I love the Mustelid references to replace Dax being an Ottsel! We have a pet ferret, which is referred to as a weasel, and now Jak likes baby otter videos. THIS IS ALL PERFECT.

    And I kept putting off reviewing last chapter, but Old Spice Sig is just now one of my most favorite things. I adored that bit. (Also Daxter being a worried mama bird that crossed over into this chapter)

    These boys get more fun and sweet with every chapter!
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  • From grimreaperchibi on May 14, 2013
    *snicker* Oh my god, if Daxter feels like he just had sex because of a non-touchy mutual masturbation session, what the hell is he going to do when he *actually* gets laid?

    You did a great job. You had the right combination of awkward tension and giddy relaxation, and it was totally worth the wait to get this far. The whole build-up has been very, well, not smooth for the characters, but definitely organic. It feels right. You've done a very good job. The neko approves. *paw print*

    BTW, I liked the outtake--I see Razer staring at the wall like some giant cat, ears twitching ever once in a while. And I can totally see Razer's ears twitching whenever Jak and Daxter have a quasi-intimate moment. Of course, as time moves on, I know he'd just get more irritated with that particular reaction.
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