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Reviews for A Rose And A Thorn

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - Mel-the-Hybrid on December 16, 2005
    ..Wow, that last chapter caught me totally off guard! My goodness! Again, this story just gets better and better. I find myself checking AFF.net everyday to see if you guys added more in. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - ??? on December 16, 2005
    Fakeing it really was great.
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  • From ANON - Koey Heades on December 15, 2005
    Rouge that ill mannered "ho ho hor"! Damn Rouge! How heartless could she be? Taking advantage of shadow like...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'd never been so agrevated in my life. And as for Shadow, I'd with there were more loyal people in the world, (excluding myself).
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  • From ANON - SkittleSama on December 15, 2005
    Forgive me for not logging in,

    I've got to say there are .not. very many Shamy fictions out there that are actually .good. They're usually some sort of horrible, grammatically impaired one shot. This one blows Sonamy fandom out of the water!

    *Favorites this Story!*

    The entire fiction was incredible, especially the sex scenes. Every paragraph had me zoned so far into it that I couldn't stop reading if I wanted to.

    And by the by, the line "The storm above them raged harder, as if jealous of their passion." is .GENIUS.

    Thanks for an incredible read-
    -Skittle
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  • From ANON - The penis on December 13, 2005
    Wow, it's gonna take me a while to wipe the splooge off the screen.

    I didn'y even know Big could be that smart.
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  • From kittynakajima on December 12, 2005
    I've been following this story (as well as the others you've been writing and updating) and have to say that I like this one the best. Not for the sex, but the well thought out story and intereactions between the characters, which is something that is a bit rare in a Sonic adult story (or any other story of this genre for that matter).

    I haven't gotten into a story of this nature this deeply since Nowhere Man's 'My Life With You' (which is still on a cliffhanger).

    I just thought I'd register properly to give you my thoughts on what a great job you've done writing this, as well as to mention that I'm feeling a little bit inspired to write one or two of these myself as well. :3

    Keep up the wonderful work, because I am definitely looking forward to the update.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Fan on December 12, 2005
    Please don't make Rouge look like a slut.Please on the next chapter make Rouge a good person. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAAASE. Rouge has been raped by Shadow in Date Rape and Killed in Luner. Please give her a break!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story but please give Rouge a break. Dang I sounding like a girl that got pregnat and is begging for something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - MOLLY!!! on December 12, 2005
    hey losers no jk, butthat seems the international name for just abotu every one in school for every one around them, it's funny as hell , IM SO HAPPY THIER BACK TOGETHER< IT MAKES ME LIEK AWWWWWW HOW CUTE?!?!?! plus the fact it annoys my friend susie, she sooooo love shadow and hates amys guts, so just think of what happens when she sees a shad amy fic, you should its friggin hilarious! any way of course me little old inocence, actulaly read through the whoel thign. (still kinda kreeped out beond repair) it was liek good i guess, i mean its the second one i have ever read so i m not totaly sure iif thats whats supposed to happen.... so we pretty much knwo theres junna be a umm fucking scene next chapter, but with who, and wy will shadow fans liek it? oh and by the way wh yis ur names forggy and harley, do they have any special meanign to them?? i mean are u a frog and are u a motercycle from the brand harely? i swear i got molly today for the upteinth time, so i m sotarting to debate to change my name to molly liekon my certificate. well i hope you guys enjoy you writtign, ill be sure to er ummmmmmmmm i dunno actually i dunno what to type....
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  • From ANON - Shadow_fan on December 11, 2005
    theres no ther way to put this but......you rock at intense romantic moments XD i love this fic!! keep up the awesome job! ~.^

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  • From ANON - SilentCacophony on December 11, 2005
    Well after having read this story just recently, I must say, it was worth the read, you guys do an incredible job of breaking the stereotypical Shadow/Amy fanfiction.

    The first thing I noticed when I read this story was that it actually had some PLOT! seriously, too many stories on AFF have no plot, and are composed entirely of senseless sex over and over and over again. This story actually sticks closely to the characters and their internal and external conflicts. Another thing I noticed about this story was the grammar and spelling. Not much to say here, it's good, readable, and actually legible for once, kudos to you guys for keeping it clean. As for the content itself, I'm not much of an angst reader, usually it ends up as some really stupid and pointless wannabe emo angst that 13 year olds and illiterate high school cheerleaders write. This time around, it's actually over something important instead of mindless stupidity like the wrong jelly on toast or something. Finally, as my last point of review; the dialogue. the dialogue itself makes a lot of sense, and is kept free of cliche'd character lines or clumsy wording, and is very close to the personality of the speaker. You guys keep it to the point, and don't wander much, but you're not blunt about it, it's actually believeable. As for the sex portions of the dialogue, you guys get a gold medal for making it look good. Usually you end up with a faked out romance novel sex scene where they spend 3 pages describing the guy's dick, and how engorged and pulsating it is, and how much the girl can feel her soul yearning for him. *fights urge to puke* But unlike most fanfics, you guys keep it simple and believable, yet again, and don't clutter it with absolutely every pinpointed little detail. Now for the downsides, the only problems I find with it is every now and then something either doesn't make sense, or doesn't fit with all 15 storylines out there and such things, but that's a minor detail, and you can't please everybody. All in all, you guys get a 9.4/10
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  • From ANON - Koey Heades on December 10, 2005
    =) I'm plad for Shadow and Amy... =( but i still fear love. =) Great job.
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  • From AntwerpsRule on December 09, 2005
    hmmmmmm.....

    aw what the fuck, they got back togeather a bit quick but you two really made a big scene about it. Once again I need to applaud the obvious talent in this fic. Just my speculation but either you two really hate Rouge or you know what it takes to demonize a charcter without re-writing them.
    The biggest thing in my head around this fic is how Sonic's gonna react to seeing the paper that day and yes, it gets better every time you write that

    (curtiously takes leave)
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  • From HeartOfDarkness on December 09, 2005
    That was great. I'm glad that things are working with Shadow and Amy again. This piece of work just gets me everytime. Keep up the good work. ;)
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  • From ANON - A fan of Sonic on December 09, 2005
    ...The hell? I didn't expect them to be together again THIS fast. But then again, I wouldn't have liked all the angsty stuff that would have happened if they hadn't.

    As always, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kamirine on December 09, 2005
    I really like it! It insipired me to write Sonic faniction. Of COURSE it's not nearly as good (and it's not a Amy/Shadow fic) but your story made me believe that good Sonic fanfictions could in fact, exist. So for that, I thank you. ::bows::

    Keep up the great story cause I look forward to your next update!
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