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Reviews for ARAAT2: Eclipse - Part 1

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - BSMForgetAboutMe on October 11, 2011
    The amount of awesome this is blows my mind, very rarely do I find ANY good ShadAmy, even less with any Preg, thanks for a wonderful read as I get better from my horrible cough, nothing too impressive, just me choking every three minutes, that's all.
    ANYWAY, I look forward to reading the next instalment, see ya there!!!

    Love, Bloodsuckingmonster, FAM
    (ps, I usually stay away from straight fanfics, being a yaoi fan and everything, so congrats on being the first straight fanfic I like...)
    (LOL, the ReCAPTCHA thingy says Attempting Erection, I'm killing myself laughing over here!!)
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  • From ANON - Casta la diva on May 23, 2009
    Hmm, found the second part. The first chapret is very good.
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  • From XLessXThanXHumanXSoldierX on September 13, 2007
    I always hated that blue bastard...

    Anyway, Ive read alot of good stories lately, And by far, this slaugters the compitition!
    Just so ya know, the amount of stories i've read totals up to about... 165,096,213 stories! BEST FANFIC EVAH!!!!!!!
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  • From Elurindel on April 02, 2007
    So far I've been enjoying this sequel. It's hard to judge a sequel without first looking at its predecessor, and that sometimes brings bias into things. However, ARAAT2 is in many ways different to the first. It's great to see that the characters we all know and love from our childhood are being portrayed now in a way that adults can appreciate them, even if not everybody agrees with the relaitonships. I love the name for the baby, Eclipse. It hints that he could be something far greater than his father. My only beef has already been mentined by N/A, and that's the idea of all the weapons Shadow took. I know he's the Ultimate Life Form, bu even he'd find himself encumbered physically by the amount of space the guns take up, even if he's not too bothered y the large weight.
    Which conveniently brings me to my next point. I'm glad to see that despite the character's emotional maturity, they're still adhering (mostly) to the clothing that they are known for. I also enjoy how Sonic is not, for once, portrayed as the great hero everyone sees him as, yet he's still shown as being vulnerable by the fact that he's wracked with guilt for what he's done.
    Top that all off with the fact that a plot beyond the initial couples is well in the works, and that makes this a surefire winner in the crazy world of adult fan fiction!
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  • From ANON - Maverick1812 on October 22, 2006
    Nice start. I like it so far. But it is a tad more dark and sinister than the original. But I ain't complaining. Still has plenty of Shadamy and Shadow kicking ass and taking names. When will humanity learn not to mess bio weapons with god-like powers? I probably should just finish reading the whole story before I review, but I'm lazy and I felt like voiceing my opinions now. I will now finish the next part of this story. But first I must go save Shadow and Eclipse! And theres only one man who can help me...
    THE PRESIDENT! I will return when I have gained the alliance of the President and his giant verticle nuclear powered battle mech! Maverick AWAY!

    Shadow: Hey is anyone going to get me out of this friggin this!? Come on guys stop with the electrodes!

    (I look forward to reading the next part of this story, in addition to the second sequal)
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  • From ANON - Mlz23 on June 18, 2006
    I truthfully don't know what to say except that this is awesome, perfect, and most definatley interesting! Keep up the great work!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DEVIL DOOM on February 13, 2006
    now that's just fucking evil!
    but the story still kicks majior ass!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on February 12, 2006
    I really enjoyed this series with the first story. It was interesting, and despite it’s “over the top” moments, it still turned out to be a fairly good read. But, I cannot bring myself to even finish what the two of you have written here for a sequel. I recommend that you just leave this series as one fanfic and delete this sequel. It's completely ridiculous and seems to be just going downhill as it puts the original to shame.
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  • From ANON - Trouble on February 05, 2006
    Nice work. It's well-written, which puts it in the top 20% of all fanfiction. Problem is, you're expanding on an already great fic - the original, duh - as such, Chapter Five onwards sounds somewhat filler-material-ish. Put simply - good, but I know you can do better. Perhaps by building on Amy's (I hate to use this term) human traits? She may be a mother but by God she isn't perfect. The Amy Rose of the games wouldn't immediately settle down into maternal bliss.

    I could also throw in the obligatory 'LESS YAP MORE FAP HURRRR', but that'd be mean. =P
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  • From ANON - DaBeeShamBooDam on February 05, 2006
    all i can say is 'whoa'

    shadow got pwan3d
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  • From ANON - Sonmanic-Slave on February 04, 2006
    Wow, this chapter made me...cry. But I love it. Any story that can actually tug at my heartstrings like that is a terrifically written story. I like the plot you have written for this chapter (no wait, forget the chapter, the entire story is wonderful) and I can't wait for the next.
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  • From HeartOfDarkness on February 04, 2006
    Thats sad. I think Shadow would have lasted a little longer when he was fighting off G.U.N. but thats me. Anyways, I hope he finds a way out and gets that son of a bastard back for taking Eclipse. :P
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  • From ANON - sHADoWiSsExY on February 04, 2006
    Good, good. One of my favorite stories yet. Well... aside from the original. You really put a lot of thought into this story didn't you? Heh, whatever... anyway, continue.
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  • From ANON - Éste es bullshit on February 03, 2006
    Wow. This story actually isn't as bad as the first one, where the Mary Sue light was shining right out of Amy's pink ass. I'm actually speechless about that. More so now that Sonic isn't some bastard this time around: though I'm just waiting for you to remember and bring that biased hatred you seem to have for him in all your fanfiction back so that he'll once again try and do something stupid.

    I won't bother to say everyone is so far out of character that Shadow should slap you for it, as I figure you must know this by now. Well hell, I take that back: Cream's still in character. For the most part. When she's in the story. (I'm including your first fiction which made me cringe in bloody shame.) And I suppose I can't argue about Knuckles or Tails too much. But everyone else? Since when the hell did Amy = Cream's personality? You single handedly, took away the other half of what made her personlity interesting and UNMary Sue like. She can be jealous, immature, funny, a tad obessessive, determined, stubborn. You've ruined her with your "OMG, she's so perfect" Mary Sue way of writing her.
    What the FUCK have you done to Shadow? No wait. Just don't answer that. That might scare me worse than him turning into a complete fluff &*%$@ like in other countless fanfictions. With Rouge you just seemed to take all of her worst traits and make them shine more than her having a balanced personality. Sega should SUE you for what you've done to Sonic. (But as I said, I think someone doesn't like him too much because him being a bastard in your fic is a damn trend. Geez, he can be cocky but he was NEVER that bad.)

    Seriously, I salute you for actually doing this one better than the last. But seriously. Go actually play a Sonic game. Cause you really don't seem to have a clue how the actual characters act. Or at least you have them mixed up with other characters. Though I doubt the latter, minus Amy.

    Oh, and by the way. Get your head out of your ass because despite what you might think and what your little cronies might tell you, you are no where NEAR the best author on this website. (Or many actually.) Scribe for example, has you beat by miles.
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  • From ANON - Kamirine on February 03, 2006
    Great chapter. Very interesting and quite eye opening. Not as bad as I originally thought it might be (I was ready to squirm.) I'm really looking foward to the next chapter.
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