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Reviews for ARAAT3: The Forbidden Experiment

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  • From ANON - RAW19 on October 16, 2006
    1) cool chapter! it should be longer, those are always fun!
    2) is there ANY reason Mirage can't use tempest on Ashura?
    3) is there really a fourth part? what's it about?
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  • From ANON - Disaster Master on October 14, 2006
    4 out of 5. You know, something that you tend to do, is you make the soldiers way too weak. Really, humans are pathetic, but we're not that pathetic. You make soldier fight scenes just how many people do. They attack with conventional weaponry and ALWAYS miss. Don't you think the army would send much stronger and advanced units to seize creatures known as 'ultimates'? Also, don't you think that GUN would've learned by now that they can't kill Shadow, Sonic, and the rest of these super-powered bastards with your basic guns? Don't you think that they would send something like soldiers equipped with toxic gamma guns or something?

    Maybe I've been playing too much Red Alert 2, but seriously, I think they're too weak. And not just in this fic, but in "Bloody Domination" too. Supposedly, Rouge had hired 'elite' soldiers to intercept Shadow, but what I saw, was the same kind of fight as with regular soldiers. You should make them have proximity mines or something. Or if you don't want to, then go ahead and do whatever you want. I have indeed played too much Red Alert 2, but hey, I can't help it. That game's cool!
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  • From ANON - BZLF on October 14, 2006
    Hrmm.. never noticed the Easter Egg last chaptor nor this chaptor. Odd.

    Anyway its good to get more info on Marias death and for mostly everyone to be back together again. Once more I'm going to take a guess at the Final Battle:Ashura wins or no one wins. Perhaps the power of the Emeralds will screw up and warp them all to Mobius or whatever that planet was way back years ago.
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on October 13, 2006
    You are absolutely evil, you know that? Well, yet another good chapter, but despite your promise of gruesomeness you still have failed to deliver. Some chilling scenes yes, but gruesome? No. I suggest you elaborate on the mind control, give an example, use a flash back relating to the memories shadow has, don't just mention them, if you want some scary shit, you have to write it. Well, I think I've said enough, I look foreward to the remaining chapters, and ponder the contents of ARAAT4, will it be the last in the series? Or is it just another great addition to an already excelent series? This is CrazyIvan, signing off for now, sepher phi, carry on...
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  • From ANON - Unholy Confessions on October 08, 2006
    Hmm....3 chapters left to go?
    somethin' tells me this fight is gonna be pretty damn short.
    I've been looking forward to this brawl since chapter 10, And I feel kinda let down.
    Ah well.
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  • From ANON - Disaster Master on October 07, 2006
    Chapter 17 score= 4.5 out of 5. Brilliant! I'm definitely going to read the next chapter as soon as I can. Have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - funkman on October 07, 2006
    (funkman's head spins 720 degrees.)

    AAHH! You truly are evil! Making me wait another week to see Shadow's deepest fear! I'll be waiting till next time. Later!
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  • From kittynakajima on October 07, 2006
    I don't know why, but I was cracking up during that whole dialogue between Sonic and Mirage in this latest chapter. Sounds likes like a mix of something you'd hear from him in Sonic Adventure/a really dramatic after school special.

    However, I have to admit that it makes a point, if not for the simple fact that you've added several flaws to his character with each story. His raping of Amy, along with the resulting guilt and self-mutilation really make it out as if he'd be one of the last people you'd be hearing 'let's save the world' from.

    But if someone with that many issues can get up and fight/support a good cause, it makes it all the more believable.


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  • From ANON - BZLF on October 07, 2006
    Excellent idea on seperating them.
    And I'll guess his greatest fear is amoung these:
    Seeing Amy tortured like he was by Gun.
    Seeing himself and/or both he and Amy tortured again by Gun.
    Eclipse and Amy dead and Maria dying again.
    And thats all that presently comes to mind.
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on October 04, 2006
    Well, that was interesting, but it hasn't gone down the evil gu wrenching path you said a few chapters back, I mean, there's obviously still some mushy stuff, so get on with the death and dispair would ya? Never make a promise you won't deliver. Alright, peace out...
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  • From ANON - Disaster Master on October 04, 2006
    It's good to see Sonic get along with everyone. Can't wait for more! Have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - BZLF on October 02, 2006
    (My deepest apologys for not reveiwing before today.)
    Thanks for the M.I.R. I'm glad another piece of the series is planned and I look forward to it. I liked Sonic returning to the scene as a good guy again, and since my speculating isn't really proving to be accurate I'll leave it be for now.
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  • From funkman on October 01, 2006
    It finally seems like Sonic is getting along with everyone. That's good! A Rose and a Thorn 4? I can't wait for it! This chapter made me visualize Sonic the Hedgehog 2 with Amy, Team Chaotix, and Shadow in it. I'm guessing the showdown will be with Ashura and Shadow. Am I right? OR... will it be Ashura, Shadow, Sonic, and Mirage? Dammit! I'm dying to know! Later!
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  • From ANON - pendejo on September 29, 2006
    hola otra ves! [hello again!]

    los mas que sigen, lo mas interesante que se hace esta estoria [the more you guys go, the more interesting this story gets]

    el peleo final va ser algo increible [the final battle is going to be something incredible]

    aqui estoy todavia, interesado [i'm still here, interested]
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on September 25, 2006
    Hmm, well this chapter obviously shows your true nature of EVILNESS!
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